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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 6:28am | IP Logged
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Whoa! can anybody tell me exactly of what i just read!!! did i really read that? Whoa! wow! what Amazing usage of vocabulary (As expected, and Love reading it) but Mostly, you know what im amazed and freaked about?
 is that i felt Both of the point of views, I didn't feel anything when swayam just left her, but i felt there Missing's of each other, the way he gets uncomfortable without her, aww.. and now the pendant.. the poem.. the LOVE! now who wouldn't go all "Did he really get them for me?" !! wala look.. 
aww.. now that seriously was something beautiful and enlightening of the day reading this OS! and firstly,
*I AM BERATING MYSELF FOR NOT READING IT IN THE FIRST, WHEN I SAW IT! I SERIOUSLY AM.. BERATING MYSELF FOR IGNORING IT THE FIRST AND COMMENT WHEN I WAS FREE FROM ALL THE TENSIONS*
Angry
secondly,
i should have read this OS in the beginning when i was filled with all the Different types of missions and tensions! this OS would have calmed me down to the fullest, to frankly speak up! i really could feel the emotions on your writing skills, It was just Super - awesome! and the Poem was Literally Beautiful.. aww! now how sweet could he get? *aww look* ! 
Hahaha.. he getting all desperate to her... was funny when he came with a Joyful heart looking at her and One huggy! and der comes the Interruption part! :P 
hahahaha... i was Laughing at the way he got trapped! :P haha..
sharon also missing him.. aww! now dat would be literally unexpected, 
seeing his mail 100 and above times.. 
Awww! im melting here by all the Amazing things written down here!
Love you for writing this amazing OS! 
and am waiting to read more aamazzinng OS's and SS's from your side! :D





Edited by jumrulzz - 29 August 2012 at 3:54pm

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
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Bit busy will comment soon, I just don't wanna rush with commentEmbarrassed

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Ah one beautiful OS, loved it for its simplicity. You really showed the actual side of every married couple. I mean the husband would not just ditch his important business deal and romance with his wife be it their anniversary. That's life and we take time out of our busy schedule and spend it with our dear ones. Perfect blend of romance. And Swayam the cheesy one ah bring it on girlLOL


Edited by Rutu - 29 August 2012 at 7:51am

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Sudha, as am just abt to go I res.
Will edit soon!
 
*EDITED*
 
You write beautifully, so its penned down very well.
 
I liked the way, somethings you connected with d3, batches and all. The way Swayam was missing Sharon, so much was cute I did say, and when Rey was there it was fun.
 
On a whole it was romantic, but you love the romantic angle, and describe it minutely, like candle light dinner and stuff in ur earlier works.
 
I liked the way you have described their characters and Sharon being Sharon, I just don't like the shower stuff much, its just me, I guess, I find bathroom romance bit odd, but it was hardly there, :)
 
Loved the way u ended with the poem. So presented really amazingly, in short.
 
Thank you for reminding me with pm, was kinda busy and had forgotten abt it too.
Sorry for the delay.
 
Madhura..


Edited by Madhura.. - 01 September 2012 at 11:52pm

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
A-H-M-A-Z-I-I-N-G !!!
This was so good!!Smile
Man, what an imagination !!
CV's shud seriously learn to excute SwaRon's story in this very manner !!

This was really beyond awesome \m/
Very well Crafted.Smile

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
One of the most awesomest os ever!so beautifully written..simple yet so sweet..and i loved the poem!!It was not cheesy!!it was romantic!!

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
ok
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love u sudhaHug 4 giving us just beautiful OS n SS n yes not to 4get poems!!EmbarrassedWink
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edited!!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3167549&TPN=8


Edited by Satluvsd3 - 01 September 2012 at 1:02pm

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
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Will edit later Sudha, have tons of work pending.
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Sudha, its an ethereally beautiful OS with an excellent poem and a perfect title .Loved each and every bit of it. Swayum's POV was superbly penned down. Thanks for giving us dis. A bit cheesy but isn't Swayum damn cheesy at times even in D3? Keep writing more.

Edited by nikita_arsha - 28 August 2012 at 12:38pm

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Sudha it was really beautifull os
The way u described swayam's emotion was amazing n lastly the poem just loved it

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