pratik54000
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swaron_ss
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tannu_swayam
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..well d os strtd wit d bechara Swayam.
..who has to leave his lady love nd go fr meetin abroad jst bfore deir weddin...bohut na insafi h...
dis Swayam z seriously such a pleasure to read..
.he acts lyk a baby nd doesnt wants to go.
.but sharon makes him leave...Swayam ws uber cute in dis update..."y r u doin dis to me..."
jst adorable...i Luvd how he parted frm deir goodbye kiss immediately.
...he didn't wnt to linger on it or else it wud hav been mre hard fr him to leave.
..u gave a pov of Swayam here of deir initial days in relationship...how he thought he had lst her den one day she givs slight entry to her hr8 den d ups nd downs...nycly ptryd
..i loved sharon's part in d story...how she ws longin fr him.
..usne bhej to Diya...bt she ws missin him so badly.
..Luvd how our majnu came runnin to his happy place.
.d way he hugged sharon on meetin...well kinda expected after d day he had...But but itni jaldi nahi...his frnds came...ws pityin him so much.
..Hahahahaha...
v


"His eyes raged with anger when he saw villainous faces of his friends smiling in front of him. She elbowed him and he gave a fake smile in return. He mentally called for God, "Why Me" as Rey walked to him and gave a smirk and said, job well done dude, I meant the project, and in turn earned another wrathful look by Swayam."
imaginin his expression i ws roflin.

..dey wre really lucky dat Swayam didn't kill dem
...Luvd d small reyam moment...absolutely adored d lst part...it ws so romantic.
..specially d prt wen sharon kissed Swayam's hand
...nd we gt to read another poem frm u..
.it ws really gud as alwys...plss sudha di..its a request wrte mre poems
...a gr8 os...a beautiful luvin story...
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