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Snowey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Sudha it was really beautifull os
The way u described swayam's emotion was amazing n lastly the poem just loved it

Thanks 😊

QUOTE=-Antu-_-Aslan-]loved it!😃

Thanks 😊

[QUOTE=Nehal92]whoa!!!

it was a cute..very cute OS!! loveed it..👏

i love reyam.. they are the best.. after swaron... 😊

Awesome sudha... 🤗

Thanks Nehal 🤗

[QUOTE=kool kanz]sudha ur os's r too luk forward for...never disappoiting...super cute swaron...d way dey both missed each other was sooo cute...😊😊thank u for d pm...

Thanks for your comments dear 😊

[QUOTE=ABBY92]This was truly beautiful !!! Loved Swayam's reaction when he was forced to leave for the meeting and when he came back home to find everyone at home with Sharon !!! The poem in the end really touched my heart and was perfect for SwaRon !!

Thanks Abby 😊

[QUOTE=NikiBh8]Sudha It Ws Beautiful 🤗

Well Written 😳

Thanks Niki 🤗

[QUOTE=mohitmohanty19]Awsm os sudha... Ur writng just out of this world..the mixutr of...love, romance and poem ..."ek number"...:)...thats why i am a big fan of urs...:)

Thanks and thats so sweet of you to say that.

BTW when are you posting your poem?

[QUOTE=mahirahmarium]Awwiiee..Its one of the most beautiful and perfect OS I have ever read ..😳

And the poem stole my heart..it was so lovely and sweet of Swayam to do such things for her princess😳

Thank you so much 😊

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Snowey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: beeny
hey sudha...😊
it's soo nice ye itna simple & sweet he & love is everywhere soo sweet😊
love OS
poem is also good aap achchhe poet bhi ho👍🏼

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Rightly said by everyone sudha,i was simple yet very romantic.it had mesmerizing effects & the poem...oh...just outstanding!!!...love your creations always...huggs..;)

Thanks Tania 😊 and *hugs back*

Originally posted by: misha24
The post is just bang on!!!
Thanx fr pm and do write more!!!

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
It was such a sweet OS sudha...! 😳
Light romance and typical husband wife relation you depicted...not like..swayam gave her a surprise and cancelled the meeting! 😆
you kept it natural! 😊
and it was lovely..! ❤️
The poem in the end was really sweet!! 😃
i hope we get to read sum awesome stuff again..if your time permits! 😳

Thanks Surbhi 😳

Yeah it was close to reality and simple and romantic just like Swayam. and sure will try writing more as and when time permits 😊

Originally posted by: nature2
awwiieee
this was amazing sudha !!

sry 4 late comment😭

Thanks for your comments and no problem dear..

Originally posted by: angelofdeathkav
Sudha I just read It now, It's sooo cute, I loved the way you have written it, the little touches made it a delight to read, keep writing more! 😃 Awesome job!

Thanks Kavi 😃

happy that it made a delightful read and sure will keep writing more 😳

Originally posted by: sw1234
really nice .sharon kab real me i love you kahe gi.kab wo special day aayega.but it was good to see them together in ur ss.

Thank you so much 😊

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Snowey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiakajenian
its awesome! Loved reading it 👏

Thank you 😊

QUOTE=nature7]

Thank you for the beautiful rose 😳

[QUOTE=shaani2209]lovely one sudha sorry for being late...thanks for the pm...

Thanks Rosh 😊

[QUOTE=gupta.aditi20]wow that was good...
do you by any chance can be the writer of swaron scenes in d3???
i'll be really glad

Thanks Aditi 😊

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Snowey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swayamsharon
amazing os!!
nicely wrriten!!
poem is lovely!!!
swayam remind whole journey of swayam-sharon to be swaron loved it!!!❤️
thanks 4 pm

Thanks Shree 😊

Originally posted by: sreya19roy
Awieee sudha 🤗🤗

Ohk I might fumble a lil coz like always I'm again SPEECHLESS...n I completely blame u for this sudha...u r the culprit 😆

Ohk now coming to the OS...This was so so sooo amazing yaar...hayee SwaRon romance

This was such a sweet, simple, romantic OS yet it depicts the love of SwaRon for each other so beautifully 😊

Totally different writing from the previous SS that I read bt my reaction after reading ur work still remains the same as it was after reading "The Sunset" 😊

Again brilliant writing...each n every emotions were beautifully penned down 👏

The friends wala thing that u included was superb n I personally loved it a lot 😃

N obviously how can I forget the poem in the end...it was most definitely the cherry on the cake 😊

such a sweet n cute poem 😊 n these last few lines:
I know I am the worst poet, but by far the best poem ever written is You "My Sharon", My "Siren Shaorn" hayee u killed me sudha 🤗
Super duper like from me dear 👍🏼
ps. I can't believe after writing such a beautiful OS, u thought I won't like it 😲

Sreya 🤗 🤗

Thank you so much for your long comments dear. I feel elated 😳

I know this is poles apart from my SS Sunset, for a change something real simple and romantic like Swayam 😳 thanks for liking the poem as its an integral part of the OS and Swayam's thought.

Originally posted by: swaronilicious
One of the best os
Pls pm me lyk dis love ya
And hats off for such a concept

Thank you 😃

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Snowey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: frankyfio
wow
beautifully written

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
what a beautiful OS sudha...

amazing...their beautiful trial relation journey turning into marriage and its their first anniversary...

feel good OS...beautifully written dear

Thank you so much dear 😳

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
so sorry sudha!!i am the last one i guess!!!!!!!to comment!!
so you will have to bear me yet again!
loved your OS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
awww
i really had a big smile n was really blushing through out ... amazingly written!!!!!!!👍🏼
can it get any better than this!!!!!!!!!⭐️
amazing job done by you!!!!!!! 👏
enjoyed the part where the driver teases him by saying "bhabhi ji" 😆
loved everything from the part they bid goodbyes to each from the airport scene to flight thoughts to presentation to writing in the journal about his SIREN SHARON!!! 😳 to returning back!! awww loved how they hugged each other and wished!😳 n the 1st best part THE GANG 🤣
and the 2nd best part was when u described swayam's arrangements for his SHARON!!! wonderfull!!wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it !!!!!!
i really couldnt stop blushing n smiling n of course saying awww n walking through their memory lane! 😳😳
an sharon's reaction to the gifts!wooowww
and the 3rd n best of all parts "the poem!"
OMG!!!!!!! sudha u really took my heart away
But by far the best poem
Ever written is
You "My Sharon"
My "Siren Shaorn"
Happy Anniversary.
hayyyeee awww really cute n totally SwaRonlicious!
well done sudha!am sorry again for replying late so sorry!😭
love you alot!!!!!! thanks for giving all of us this OS!!!!!!
and what about your sunset SS!!?? 😭

Thank you so much Satu 🤗

as always i loved your comments and it makes me so happy dear 😃

I am so happy that you could also enjoy the humor along with the simplicity and romance.

I love how you quoted my fav bit of poem, and thanks for liking it re 😳

and SS will soon update..and am really sorry for being late.

Originally posted by: ---Priya---
sudha... this was such a cute OS...
very romantic... simply written.. too good yaar 👏
SwaRon such a cute couple...
Swayam's reaction when he saw his friends 😆 😆 poor swayam... didnt expect them 😆
the poem was fab...

so sorry for being late... was a bit busy 😊

Thanks for your comments Priya, so i see you are back. How was ur trip back home?

hope you had fun 😃 I am happy you liked the humor part very much.

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Very beautifully written...bechara swayam was expecting only sharon at home...but his frnds too turned out to wish them...luved reyam's convo...thnx for pm.

Thanks for your comments dear 😊

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unchainedmelody

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Posted: 11 years ago

oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!!

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shikha31

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Posted: 11 years ago

Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment...👏Edited by shikha31 - 11 years ago

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Snowey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: like.no.other
oh wow...SO wel writn n SOOO beautiful!!

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: shikha31
Good Job Sudha...wow...and d poem Superb...Loved each n evry moment...👏

Thanks 😊

Edited by Sudha-SK - 11 years ago

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pratik vyas

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Posted: 11 years ago

this is so full of romance and true love sudha...i dont know how do you manage to describe the love emotion so perfectly yar...i mean whenever i read the story put by you, i just get lost in the love you create in those stories...you seems to have lots of value for love personally...but whatever may the reason be i just enjoyed reading this os...

thank you for pm...do write more and more...

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swaron_ss

@swaron_ss

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow this was just awesome. Thanks to ur writing archive i have many other works of urs to read.

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