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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surbhimathur

Res!
*edited*

I came to the right place!! Approve
A big hugg to you for writing an OS on swayam!! Hug
and from the starting to the ending i was just stucked to it..!
you write really well! Clap
Swayam lives in a villa here...nycc..
i was shocked to read arnav shekhawat!! and nicole?? she's married to swayam's elder brother??!! goshh! interesting!
lol swayam is addressed as "chote" Blushing
swayam and kria's fight was adorable..! Embarrassed
and sharon shouting on swayam was amazingg...lovedd itt! Cool
and it seems swayam has a major disease..lyk cancer or sumthing...please kuch bhi karna but dun let him die! Ouch
update soon! Smile
and pm me Embarrassed

Hey Surbhi..

Glad you enjoyed reading my Story!

I actually did a few changes according my story line and I am glad you liked ir.

Well, surely Swayam has a big thing! 

And about Sharon screaming, I just tried to keep the essence of SwaRon in D3 alive!

Glad you liked it.. Big smile

__Nivriti Hug


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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Very nice Upd. Nivi. No idea about D3 n show characters but, your story is Good. Continue soon . Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Very nicely written part. Thanx 4  the PM.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
this is just marvelous
loved it
the way u are turning up swayam's character is amazing
and thnxx for the pm

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NocturnalBeing

Originally posted by MoNayaHolicPrag

awww that was especially for me... thnks so muccch..
i am glad u wrote this...
i enjyed the first half..
it was simply great..
will be waiting for the rest of it
and all the very best for semster exams :) 

Thank you so much Pragya!

For whatever you have done for me, it is just a small token of love. Heart

And you had indirectly asked for an OS and I decided upon writing it.. Big smile

I can always do this much for my friend.. !! Wink

You have been a secret source of encouragement for me to write on the D3 Characters.. 

Thank you sooo Muchh!! Embarrassed

Much Love,
Nivriti Hug

awww.. no nivs i havent done anythng that great :P :) 
thnks for this amazing OS..
 i have exams so will comment in detail later.
just that i loved reading it :) 

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
awesome update nivi Clap
 
you know what after reading the first part i have started watching the show
 
thanx for pmHug

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
it was amazing really looking forward to read more of this os continue soon

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
yep dear am enjoying reading this FF...
the other part was also beautiful...loved the way Swayam's character was sketched...

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