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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged

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Okay! So that was bad! Really abhorrent. I am highly disillusioned and disappointed with it.

 

Though I had something really anomalous in my head. And this is completely conflicting.

 

 

I know, too much hair splitting. But this is all I could manage after my Maths SA and before my science.

 

So, I now sign off as I have to go and study the worst created subject ong the Earth : Science.

 

 

It's really mind boggling and everything goes over my head.

 

Anyways, I guess this one will turn into 2 more parts.

 

So, I might change it into an SS! What do you say?

 

And.. Don't expect the next update before Friday.

 

It might take me ridicoulsly long time to think about the track. I need to go through it once again!

 

Please do drop in your views.

 

New entries are yet to come; though I have this gut feeling might contradict my track from what I thought!

 

Anyhow, thanks for your support.! :D

 

And thanks to all those who commented. Will reply soon to all of them.

 

Thanks for showering your love on an amateur like me... :)

 

I was bereft reading your response.

 

 

I Love D3 and especially *Swayam* aka ShanTANNU .

 

So I hope I do justice.

 

Feel free to criticize.. =D

 

 

__Love Nivriti ^_*

 

(Ready with a helmet! =P)

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Nice one...liked Swayam's character sketch very much as there was a proper balance to everything...Sharon's POV was a nice read...so when will he spill the beans to his friends... luking forward to the next update 

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
OKay.. One Confession.

I had actually sat down with a thesaurus =P

And secondly, I am not publicizing any book written above...


These are just my favs and are in my shelf too.!! :D 

Thanks again! :]

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meevee

Nice one...

liked Swayam's character sketch very much as there was a proper balance to everything...

Sharon's POV was a nice read...

so when will he spill the beans to his friends... 

luking forward to the next update 

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Thank you so much. Glad to hear you enjoyed reading it.

Well as per the character sketch is concerned, there is more to come!

Remember, "Swayam loves to be unpredictable!LOL

I will try to Continue Soon! Maybe any day after Friday as my MAJOR Subjects would be over.

And about spilling the beans..! Wink  

It isn't really soon! Tongue

And I hope it isn't hard to contemplate with my characters. Big smile

Thanks Again! Glad you enjoyed it! Hug

Love, Nivriti 



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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by additive_monaya

hi nivi i am not a fan of d3  but after reading this part i kave developed an interest in it
 
continue soon
 
thanx for pmSmile

Hey!

I am glad to hear that you liked reading it even though you are not a D3 Fan. 

Means a lot to me! Big smile

Thanks a ton for reading it.

__Nivriti Hug

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MoNayaHolicPrag

awww that was especially for me... thnks so muccch..
i am glad u wrote this...
i enjyed the first half..
it was simply great..
will be waiting for the rest of it
and all the very best for semster exams :) 

Thank you so much Pragya!

For whatever you have done for me, it is just a small token of love. Heart

And you had indirectly asked for an OS and I decided upon writing it.. Big smile

I can always do this much for my friend.. !! Wink

You have been a secret source of encouragement for me to write on the D3 Characters.. 

Thank you sooo Muchh!! Embarrassed

Much Love,
Nivriti Hug

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rashmi24sya

dear i was like Arnav shek...th!!!!!!! 
still...that was amazing update...

Hey Rashmi, 

I am glad you liked reading it.

Encourages me!

Hope you enjoy further also! Big smile

__Nivriti Hug

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