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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
I m at the correct place..:p Thanks for sharing it in d3 forum
Gang at swayam's house n he lives in villa
Kria n swayam fight was really cute
Swayam addresses as chote n nicole is swayam's bhabhi lol
Looks like swayam has a major disease
Update it ASAP n pls pm me...:)
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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Interesting read it was ... I know I shudnt b expecting anything positive..but thatz ok since u write so well...liked the way u hav mixed up characters and handled the script

P.S. pls pm me the next part if u canSmile adding u to buddy list


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hey this  is so cool plzzz continue soon n waiting to know what happened to swayamShocked

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Amazing yaar loved it
Thanx faw sharing d link on d3 forum

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Hello Peeps. Hug

I have finally come up with the update with loads of editing, re-editing and more editing. I hope it is up to the mark.

 

 

One more thing, here we suppose all what has happened up till now has already taken place, but with a few changes.

 

 

1)Kriya hasn't left ever since; she and Rey are officially a couple. 

2)Taani is just Swayam's sister. 

3)Rey hasn't been suspended and he is still the GS with Kriya as his assistant.

4)Weaklings won the Footloose and weren't disqualified, leads to no Face-off!

5)Sharon and Shivam did not have the tiff. Dazzlers had won the eliminations. So therefore, they are still friends.

6)SwaRon are not in any kind of a relationship, and are sour with each other.

7)Smriti knows about Kria's dancing and Rey and she is okay with it 

8)Sharon is Kria's younger step sister. That is, Gautam's second marriage with another girl who died, Smriti the first and a divorcee. They have patched up and 4 of them live together.

 

Without any further ado, read and I hope you have a nice time reading it. A lot of effort has been put in it.



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