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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreyasi28

I thnk dis is d first tym i am commenting on ur work nd i m realy sory for dat coz i dont usually comment so late aftr i like wat i read bt as luck wud have it i always had sum kind of hurry while reading ur updates nd datz y nvr got to comment nd i m sincerely very sory for dat!!! Nw coming to ur FF...
Its amazing!! Evry character is penned down down in a grt way nd obviously among dem swayam's is d strongest!!! Till now i realy lykd d story nd hoping u wud update sun nd it wub grt too!!!

Hey! Nice to see you here.

And no problems if this is the first time you are commenting! I appreciate that you read it and liked it as well! :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. This one is frankly one of my favorites I like, and therefore I make it a point to write about the characters strongly! Embarrassed


Thanks once again!

Cheers. 

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovely7010

Awesome update
loved it

^^ Thank you! :)

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pihu.k11

Eee.. An update.. Lovd it re.. I tell ur demands brings d hell out of us.. Huh
Swayam hs changed.. He hs grown much mature n finally he is out of dat bloody cancer.. Huh!!
Buh he dint contact louisans??? Ohki.. M stunned!
Poir louisans esp Sharon n Kriyaansh.. They wud neva in thr dreams hv thot tht swayam wud brk evry lil contact wid dem.. Yes.. He dint want to tl dem abt his disease bt still.. Yep he was unwell bt tht dsnt means he wud do dis.. Seriously.. Dis means he neva considered dem as thr true frns.. Though he misses dem bt still its nt justified!!

Workin under Remo.. Haayeee.. One shud hv d passion n determinance.. Evrythn follows thn !!
So his group.. All r nw professional trainers !!

Hmm.. They r thinkin to participate on some competition which is prestigious.. Dude time to face ur past tht u lft easily!! M sure.. Louisans l b thr.. N I want dem to show thr anger evn aftr knowin d whol truth coz wht he did wasnt right.. Wht abt his bst frns?? Wht ant hs love????

Wonder.. Mayank ka marriage sharon se ho rha ho toh????
Mazaa aa jayega..

Dis update was all on ur passion towards somethn n def givs a strong message..
Brilliantly written !
Js loved it <3
Cnt wait fr d dhaasu entry of d louisans..
Betta.. U update faster o elz I wont comment :)

Palak Di! :)

Glad to see you commenting here! :D


Firstly Ms. Dazzler, I guess you did not read it properly.

Originally posted by Chapter Eight


He never used to call them but he was in touch with them. He used to catch with them on FaceBook or E-MailPartly because their timings clashed and the other part, he himself did not understand.



So, hope that explains! LOL 



I am really glad you liked the update :D Update would as soon as you guys complete my demand! Wink


Cheers.


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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetydiyafrien

awesome...update res of the chapter soon...

Thanks! :) I am glad you liked it! 

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Rose--

OMG:-D:-D... WOWWW... FANTASTIC UPDATE:-):-):-) Loved it:-):-):-) EVERYTHING IS GREAT:-):-):-) PERFECT:-):-) But I must say I m missing the old Gang like swayam...

Rashi, I am super glad you liked my update! :D 


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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1D_D3-Crazy

I just read the story and it's so heart touching and amazing obviously but when I read the first chapter I was so shocked to read that Swayam was coughing bloom and yes from there I knew he suffered from something like cancer but all the other chapters have been really good as well, I hope things start to get better and please pm me when you continue :D

Nikki <3

Glad you like my story Nikki! :D I would surely PM you, but you need to add IntricateKnots. in your PM List! :D

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NocturnalBeing

Originally posted by --Rose--

OMG:-D:-D... WOWWW... FANTASTIC UPDATE:-):-):-) Loved it:-):-):-) EVERYTHING IS GREAT:-):-):-) PERFECT:-):-) But I must say I m missing the old Gang like swayam...


<font size="2">Rashi, I am superglad you liked my update! :D</font>

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Where are you these days? No spamming, No Scrapping?Confused</font>
sorry yaar, actually my exams r going on... Thats why:-(

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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Rose--

Originally posted by NocturnalBeing

Originally posted by --Rose--

OMG:-D:-D... WOWWW... FANTASTIC UPDATE:-):-):-) Loved it:-):-):-) EVERYTHING IS GREAT:-):-):-) PERFECT:-):-) But I must say I m missing the old Gang like swayam...


<font size="2">Rashi, I am superglad you liked my update! :D</font>

<font size="2">
Where are you these days? No spamming, No Scrapping?Confused</font>
sorry yaar, actually my exams r going on... Thats why:-(

Oh! But at least you can spam a bit! Ouch So, when do you get free?

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