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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 4:43am | IP Logged

Hey Guys! Hug


This is the first time I am trying my hand on the D3 characters. It's actually just a thought! 


SO, we rewind back to 12th January when Swayam plans to leave the college. 


This one is sort of depressing, so if you don't want to read, you should exit now.  But yeah, it has other characters also.


It's not based on any couple but basically the main focus of the limelight is on Swayam.


 Well, frankly [no-offence to SwaRon lovers], up till now I have thought that the character of Swayam hasn't really been give much importance. 


His decisions always revolve around Sharon, which I specifically and personally don't like!


 True, now the CVs and Palki are doing a splendid job on both the couple and the individuals. But this was just a random thought!


So, actually I realized; Swayam is not exactly a weakling [Remember the car in 21st November episode?]. 


Therefore, I have sort of created a BIG background for him which the Louisians aren't aware of.


Well, this One Shot will have Two Parts. Here is the first part.


"Criticism" is more than welcome! And Pragya, this one is for you! =D


So, here we start off with the story: The Bereaved. 

Index to other Chapters

**Chapter Two

**Chapter Three

**Chapter Four

**Chapter Five

**Chapter Six

**Chapter Seven

**Chapter Eight

**Chapter Nine

**Chapter Ten

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P.S : Keyword NP stands for No PMs yet! :D



Edited by NocturnalBeing - 15 March 2013 at 6:39am

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
I Hope I did not disappoint the D3 Fans.


There are more characters to come therefore, I don't know how long the next update will take.


Anyhow, it is going to be after the 19th as my Semesters get over then! =D


I hope you enjoyed reading it and would want to read further.

Love, Nivi :P

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
hi nivi i am not a fan of d3  but after reading this part i kave developed an interest in it
 
continue soon
 
thanx for pmSmile

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
dear i was like Arnav shek...th!!!!!!! 
still...that was amazing update...

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
awww that was especially for me... thnks so muccch..
i am glad u wrote this...
i enjyed the first half..
it was simply great..
will be waiting for the rest of it
and all the very best for semster exams :) 

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Res!
*edited*

I came to the right place!! Approve
A big hugg to you for writing an OS on swayam!! Hug
and from the starting to the ending i was just stucked to it..!
you write really well! Clap
Swayam lives in a villa here...nycc..
i was shocked to read arnav shekhawat!! and nicole?? she's married to swayam's elder brother??!! goshh! interesting!
lol swayam is addressed as "chote" Blushing
swayam and kria's fight was adorable..! Embarrassed
and sharon shouting on swayam was amazingg...lovedd itt! Cool
and it seems swayam has a major disease..lyk cancer or sumthing...please kuch bhi karna but dun let him die! Ouch
update soon! Smile
and pm me Embarrassed


Edited by surbhimathur - 07 September 2012 at 4:29am

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Ok firstly thnk u for sharing link to d3 forum...
I have starting liking it only when i read it is on swayam..
It seems lyk swayam is having a serious dieases...
Swayam living in villa nd family intro was awsm,,,
awsm work...
Pls let us knw on d3 forum when u update

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