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Pyaar Kismat Mein Nahiye2 NOTE PG 130

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=255042 this is the link to the fanfic it has reached more than 150pg so I am opening a new topic for it

 

I won't be able to continue till Friday my computers not working properly, my new computer is coming on Thursday so hopefully I will continue on Friday. If Memze is not busy she will continue next, if she doesn't continue hopefully I will on Friday I am really sorry everyone for the delay



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it okay sort of but we can wait right everyone LOL
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yup ur right milly we can wait...take ur time unumm...and take care yaar...ill talk to you later on yahoo Tongue
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Sorry for the delay

Part 56

Prithvi gives a dirty look to angad and walks over to Kripa and puts his hand on her shoulder.

Prithvi-you alright Kripa

Kripa-yeah im fine thanks

Kripa walks out the room while prithvi walks towards Angad.

Prithvi-wat is your problem,cant you leave her alone

Angad-prithvi I think your forgetting shes my wife

Prithvi-well you shouldve thought about that before kicking Kripa oops your wife out the house.

Angad-you just shut up okay

Prithvi-cant face the truth

Angad-I said shut up

Prithvi-well wat does it matter now,Kripa hates you

Angad gets really angry and grabs prithvis collar,prithvi also gets angry and grabs Angads tshirt.thats when josh and shazmin come and separate the both.

Shazmin-jeejs ap kya kare ho

Angad-shazmin you just tell him to stay away from me

Josh-lekin hua kya

Angad-ahh forget it

Angad walks out angrily and goes from there.in the afternoon shazmin is sitting in her room looking at her and emraans photo,she remembers all the memories,tears start coming out her eyes.josh who was passing by saw shazmin crying and entered her room.he sat beside her.

Josh-shazmin wats this tumne promise kiya tha

Shaz-I know I promised I wouldn't cry but josh I miss him,I really miss him

She breaks down and hugs josh

Josh-so do we

After a while josh comes with an idea to cheer up shazmin

Josh-shazmin lets go shopping

Shaz-no I don't feel like it

Josh-are you sure,you can use my credit card(he takes out his credit card and waves it infront of her)

Shaz-are you bribing me

Josh-no mein to sirf kehra tha lekin its okay

He was about to put it away but shazmin snatches it off him

Shaz-you know josh agat tum itna insist kare ho to I don't mind

Josh-shazmin tum na kabhi nahin sudrogee

Shazmin also convinces Kripa and prithvi to come,they all do there shopping and are in the coffee shop.kripa is reading a book,prithvi is playing with his phone and shazmin and josh are chatting.

Shaz-josh can we go check out that shop(she pointed to a music store)

Josh-sure chalo

They both go,in the shop shazmin,josh bump in to Angad.

Angad-hi guys,sorry bout before

Shaz-jeejs wo to tik hai lekin ap yaha kya kare ho

Angad explains why his here.shazmin and josh agree to help him win Kripa back,they discuss the plan(muted).while kripas reading she feels Angads presence,she puts her book down and infront of her is Angad.

Kripa-tum tum phirse agaye

Angad-yes darling jo bhi jaaga tum jaooge vaha mughe paaoge

Kripa-cut the crap Angad and get to the point,what do you want

Angad-you of course

Prithvi-angad just go from here

Angad was about to get angry but then gave prithvi a fake smile.

Angad-prithvi can you give us 5 mins alone

Prithvi-wat r u mad im not leaving Kripa with you
Kripa-prithvi its okay,tum jao

Prithvi-lekin Kripa

Kripa-honestly you go its fine

Prithvi angrily goes

Angad-now we can talk,vaise Kripa when shall I book the tickets

Kripa-what tickets

Angad-tickets back to new york our Home

Kripa-(angrily) how many times shall I tell you im not coming home cant you get that in your thick brain.

Angad- gussa kyon horahi ho darling agar tum aj jaana nahin chahati to kal ya parso chalejayege.

Kripa-angad tum tum pagal ho

Angad-I know im madly in love with you

Kripa-you know what I give up,im going

She was about to go but Angad grabs her arm

Angad-kripa you didn't agree today but you will have to soon

Kripa-itna barosa hai apne ap par

Angad-apne ap par nahin apne pyar par

Kripa-(she moves his arm away)Angad agar tum apne pyar par barosa hota to ajj hum hote lekin tum(she gets teary)Angad meri baat mano aur yaha se chalejao kyunki mein kabhi nahin baapas jaoongi,kabhi nahin

She goes from there leaving a heartbroken Angad.

Will Angad ever get Kripa back to find out keep reading pyar kismet mein nahiye

 

 

 


 

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awesome..i know angad will win kripa opps her wife's hearts back LOL LOL

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