*Taarey SS-Jaane tu ya Jaane na* INDEX ADDED

Posted: 11 years ago
So as i was only talking about my imagination on Taarey in my AT..
i wrote my heart out..
and to my horror..my friends loved it and told me to make it an OS
so here u all go..

this is My imagination..as i was listning to this song called Jaane tu Ya jaane na..


After This Weaklings/Dazzlings war gets over..
here comes Sharon's birthday and she invites everyone to her FARMHOUSE
and she tells Taani before hand that she will have to wear a western outfit..
Taani is conscious about it..
and Sharon notices it..she tells not to worry and she has already bought a dress for her as she knows that Taani doesn't wears western..and tells her it's a gift from her Bha..as soon as sharon was about to say bhabhi..she gets conscious and stops herself😆
Taani is confused..
Taani checks the dress..it's a LBD(Little Black Dress)..a short and hot frock..

everyone gets ready and comes to the party..
Taani enters with neha..

Everyone gets shocked to see her in a different attire..

Shivam is shocked..and checks her out( Ya shivam is also there much to everyone's Dismay..well Rinni told Sharon to invite him as he is Taani's Fake BF)🤢
Rey..is stunned..he is mesmerized seeing Taani
she looks too beautiful and elegant..

Sharon welcomes her and tells her to enjoy the party..
she sees Rey and asks him how is he and his wound??
but as he was about to say anything Shivam comes there..
Rey leaves from there without saying anything..

Sharon goes and tells everyone to Dance..
everyone starts dancing accept for Rey and Taani..

Rey is standing alone..wants to dance with Taani..

he goes near her but suddenly shivam comes in..

and asks her to dance..

frst she refuses..and looks at Rey's face..

but Rey seeing shivam..and them together..strts seeing somewhre else..

so Taani accepts shivam's offer and goes with him on the dance floor..

dey dance and dis song strts..

 

now comes dis lines

 

Saasein Kho Gai Hai Kiski Aahon Mein 
Mein Kho Gai Hoon Jane Kiski Baahon Mein 
Manzilon Se Rahe Dhondte Chali 
Aur Kho Gai Hai Manzil Kahin Rahon Mein 

 

and Rey is standing alone..

hurt..

seeing shiavm and Taani together dancing so close..

Taani also sees him and is hurt..where is her life taking her??

 

den evryone changes partner while dancing and shivam turns Taani and she goes in Rey's arms..(she Doesn't falls)

and clutches his shirt..

den Look Look hawa Hawa..

dey gets involved in eachother's eyes..

And Dis Song Plays In The BG

 

Kahin To Kahin To Hai Nasha
Teri Meri Har Mulakat Mein 
Hoton Se Hoton Ko
Chumti O Rehete Hai Hum Har Baat Pe
Kehti Hain Fiza Jahan 
Teri Zaameen Aasman

Jahan Hai Tu 
Meri Hasi Meri Khushi 
Meri Jaan...

 

 

and again shivam comes and asks Taani if she is ok or not..

and takes her back..shivam takes her hand from Rey's hands..

and Rey's face is in pain..he doesnt wants to leave her(she doesnt wants to leave him)..but he does..

taani flips and TaRey sees each other with pain and emptiness in der eyes..

 

Jane Na Kahan Woh Duniya Hai
Jane Na Woh Hai Bhi Ya Nahi
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse 
Inti Khafa Nahi..


please don't kill me if you don't like it..!!

just gave it a try..

Kill Blossom1234..it ws her idea to turn my thoughts into an OS🤣🤣


iv not ended it yet guys..

this is not the end of this story..!!

this is just a scene..!!

if you all like it..

I will continue with part 2..LOLZ😆


INDEX

part 2 Page 11

part 3 page 25

Part 4 page 39


Edited by Ana_Taarey - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
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will edit soon,thode saal do🤣 🤣
 
--edited--
 
dekho jaldi edit kar rahi hoon😎
 
Ufff,Shivam is also there🤢...but koi baat nahi,wo hoga...tabhi to Rey jealous hoga☺️☺️🤣
Rey to taani ko dekh ke aesa ho gaya hoga...aur phir aesa☺️
 
awww,Rey wanted to dance with Taani☺️☺️☺️
Ufff...look look hawa hawa
 
he doesnt wants to leave her(she doesnt wants to leave him)
 
OMG☺️
 
Ufff,awesome partner👏👏,and ya...i don't think anyone will kill u or me😆 after reading this brilliant OS😳,i just loved everything in it and your idea of putting the song was great👍🏼 with the song it looks more perfect
 
plzz continue soon,eagerly waiting for the part 2😳
 
 
Edited by blossom1234 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
U mean this black dress 


Ya, this

Every dress suits our pari Taani

Aaisha awesome Os.Loved taarey dance portion.
Taarey dance means  Romance 
Edited by maneesha_sanker - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
LIKE IT...I JUST LOVE IT...WANTED TO TELL U BEFORE ONLY TO MAKE AN OS ON UR IMAGINATION BUT THERE WAS SOME ERROR SO COULDN'T TELL U...ANYWAYS THE OS WAS JUST AWESOME AND THE BEST PART WAS THE SONG...I DON'T BELIEVE IT IT ACTUALLY PLAYED THROUGHOUT THE OS...IT MADE THE OS ALL THE WAY MORE SPECIAL...IT SO BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED TAAREY'S SITUATION...I COULD LITERALLY IMAGINE TAAREY'S PAIN AND FEELINGS...GREAT JOB👏...AND PLEASE CONTINUE...PLEASE...DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT Edited by pixi26angel - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Totally loved it!😃
Please continue the OS!!!!!!!!!!😳
Posted: 11 years ago
Ana,,
don worry we won't kill you nor blossom1234 ... cause this is really amazing,,I could say you gave words to every TaReyian's dreams of TaRey =)) please continue & update soon =))
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG AAISHA I LOVED IT COMPLETELY!! PLS U HAVE TO PROMISE TO WRITE MORE!!

everything how taani was concious of wearing the black dress

how sharon accdiently said bha 😆

and how rey was hurt seing that idiot dance wit taani

and their dance 

LOOOVED IT SOOO MUCH 🤗
Posted: 11 years ago
dude luved it mann 😳uve got exellent imagination😃 loved it loved it loved it 👏.
Posted: 11 years ago
loved it yaar aaisha.👍🏼..thnxxx!!!!!!!! nd also thnxxx to nikki🤗!!!!!!! kya tum bhi na... itni acchi imagination ko koi hidden rakhta hain kya😆!!!!! loved it!!! 🤗
Edited by raj-guria-kriti - 11 years ago

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