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Geet - Hui Maan Ki Pyaari...Last pt on page 32 (Page 32)

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part 76&77...
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Part - 78

Ab bas ek din hi bakhi hai….

Sagayi ke pehle din….

Geet ki aakhri umeed aaj ka hi hai….

Aaj toh Maan zaroor ussko ILU kahega, haina babaji?

Mujhe patha hai  aaj ka din toh woh zaroor kahenge…..

Aaj hi buaji, Ranno aur Geet outhouse shift ho gaye…..

OH toh Geet ki temporary maika haina?

Geet goes & takes a look around KM….

She is looking for Maan….

Par ye Maan kahin dikhayi nahi detha…..

Kahan chale gaye?

Aaj toh shoot bhi nahi hai?

Geet ko bahut gussa aatha,

Sagaayi ke pehle din har ladka apna dulhan ko milne ke liye kya kya kartha?

Yahan dekho, dulhan toh pohanchgayi apne sasural….

Lekhin dulhe raja ka koi patha nahi…..gayab ho gaya…..

Aaj kitna special din hai?...

Maan ko chodo, koi aur bhi Geet ka parwa hi nahi karte….

Sab sagaayui ke kaam mein busy hai…….

Adi aur Pinky masti kar rahe hai….

Pinky toh kitchen mein hi rehthi…..

Ab Adi bhi uske saath rehke khane ka expert ho gaya….

Pinky har waqt kuch na kuch Geet ke paas lekhe aathi…taste karne ke liye….

Par Geet is not interested…..

Kahin Geet ki kamoshi se Maan naraaz toh nahi ho gaya?...

 
Hare babaji mujhe koi ILU nahi sunna, aap bas Maan ko mere paas bhejdo….please…

Geet ab babaji ki madat maangrahi hai…..

Lunchtime bhi Maan nahi aatha…..

Ab toh Geet ko thoda dar lagtha……

Ye Maan achanak kahan jaa sakthe?

Mamaji, chachaji sab ghar pe hi hai….

Woh Maan ko aaise kaise zaroori kaam aagaya?

Geet asks everyone but no one answers her properly….

Maan ka phone bhi switched off hai…..

Lekhin Geet ke alawa koi bhi pareshaan nahi hai….

Sab bahut kushi se sara intrezaam kar rahe hai….

Hare ye kaisse pariwaar hai?

Sagayi ka pehla din dulha missing aur kissi ko koi parwa nahi?...

Ab toh Geet ko hi kuch karna padega……

She calls Pari & all the co-stars……

Par kissi ko bhi Maan ke barein mein kuch patha nahi…..

Pari toh out-of station hai……

Warna woh Geet ke paas aathi…..

By evening Geet is on the verge of crying…..

Nakul comes…..

Nakul: Geet m'am

Geet: kya hai?

Nakul: woh, Maan sir

Geet: Maan aagaye?

Geet is so excited……

Nakul: nahi

Geet: nahi

Nakul: ye Maan sir ne bheja hai

He hands over a parcel…….

Geet: Maan kahan hai?

Nakul: mujhe patha nahi?

Geet: toh yahan kyun kade ho? Jao

Geet has realy gone mad…..

Geet hurriedly opens the parcel……

She finds a note……

 
Geet,

      Aaj Mr.Khanna hummare liye ek dinner organize kar rahe hai……

Mein unke saath hi hoon, tum jaldi se tayyar hokke aao, driver neeche tummara intrezaar kar raha hai…..aur ye sari pehenke aana……

                                                                                Maan

Lagtha hai ki Maan ko abhi bhi meri yaad hai….

Mein bhi kamakaam pareshaan ho gayi…..

MSK ko apne kaam ke alawa kuch aur baat bhi yaad aatha? Nahina?

Ye mein kaise bhool gayi? Par kal toh pakka mein unne kahin jaane nahi dhoongi…

Geet jaldi tayyar hokke jaathi…..

Driver takes her to some studio……

Geet: ye kahan aaye hai?

Driver: m'am, Maan sir aapko yahi drop karne ke liye kaha hai

Geet: tumme pakka maloom hai ki yahi woh jagah hai?

Driver: haan m'am, aap jayiye

Geet gets down…..shayad yahi next shoot hoga?

Issiliye Mr.Khanna humme yahan bhulaye hai….

Geet goes in & opens the door……………

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part 78
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surprise hai kya?
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part 78
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Party – 79

 

Hare yahan toh koi nahi hai……

Aur yahan itna andhera kyun hai?

Babaji ye mein kahan aagayi hoon?...

Maan aap kahan ho?...

Geet is a little scared……

Maan ko kissi ne kidnap toh nahi kiya hai?...

Mein bhi na! ….koi unko kidnap bhi karein toh bhi Maan Singh Khurana ko

Koi do din ek saath kaise sheh sakthe……..

Ek do gante mein unko ghar kudh aake choddethe….haina?

Hare Geet ye toh do directors ka Milan hai toh kuch hatka honne chahiye haina?

Dhoor se ek candle jal raha hai…..

Ye kaise mazak hai?...aaj April 1st toh nahi haina?...

Geet thoda pareshaan hai….

Lekhin Geet ko maloom hai ki Maan ko bhi aaise mazak pasand nahi hai….

Geet: Maan…..Maan….

Geet ko lagtha hai ki koi hai wahan pe……

Haan koi candles light kar raha hai…..

Aur woh dhere dhere Geet ke paas aaraha hai…..

Par Geet ko apna face nahi dikhatha……..he is coming backwards….

Soon the wohle place is lit with candles….

Ye toh Maan ka plan hai……aur woh koi aur nahi Maan hi hai…..

Aur Geet apne Maan ko kaise nahi pehchaanegi…..woh toh har angle pe Maan ko identify karegi….

Woh bhi toh director haina?...

Geet: Maan

Maan: happy b'day Geet

Aaj Geet ka janam din hai…..

Maan toh issi din ka intrezaar kar raha tha……

Aur ye Maan ke saath Geet ki pehla janam din hai……

Toh aaj ke din ko yaadgar banana ke liye Maan ye sab kar raha hai…..

Maan ke haath mein cake hai……

Aakhir ye toh MSK ka style haina?

Geet blows off the candles……

BGM…….happy b'day music…..only music…..

Geet cuts the cake & Maneet ek doosre ko cake khilathe hai….

Lekhin Geet is not satisfied….

Geet: Maan

Maan: haan Geet, toh kaise hai mera surprise?

Geet: sirf cake?

Maan: hare babaji, ye ladhkiyon bhi na, issiliye kehte hai ki Girlfriends ko satisfy karna mushkil hi nahi namunkeen hai

Geet: hare aap toh MSK hai, ek cake se mein kaise aapko chodthoon

Maan: mein toh kab se tayyar hoon, lelo

Maan comes near her & hugs her from behind…he plays with his hands……..

Geet: chodo, mein isske baat nahi kar rahi hoon

Maan: Geet thoda intrezaar karo, sab miljayega

Maan blows off the candles one by one…..

He keeps getting away from Geet…..

He blows off the last one……& he is lost in the darknes………

Geet ko thoda dar lagtha…..

A big screen comes alive…..

An animated tale begins….

Usska BG voice toh Maan ka hi hai….

No one can match Maan's husky tone….

" ye khahaani ek akdu insaan(Maan) ki hai,

Usske jeevan mein jeevan hi nahi aur woh hasna bhi nahi jaantha tha,

Aur toh aur hasthe khilthe phoolon ko bhi woh nafrat kartha tha,

Ye kabar jab phoolon ki duniya pohunchgayi,

Sare phoolon ne milke ussko sabak sikaane ke liye apne phoolon ki Rajkumari(Geet)

Ko usske paas bheja,

Aur uss pari ne uss Gamandhi aadmi ko bhi apne pyaar se ek insaan banaya,

Woh usski zindagi ko apni haassi se roshan kardhi,

Usski jeevan mein kushiyan lekhe aayi,

Aur ussko haasna bhi sikaaya,

Meri zindagi mein ek roshni ki kiran banke

Ussko rang birangi banana ke liye

Aur iss MSK ko sirf tummari Maan banana ke liye

Thank you Geet."

The show ends

There is complete silence

And its fully dark……

Geet is overwhelmed by this…..

She has done nothing special….

She just remained Geet Handa……….

That's what Maan needed…..Geet Handa….haina?

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part 79
lovely part...
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part 79
lovely update..

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Part – 80

 

Geet: Maan aap yahi haina?

Geet stands still……she could feel her Maan's presence…..

Woh toh usske bahut kareeb hi hai……

Geet feels his breadth on her neck……

Maan gets closer to her…..he whispers…..

Maan: " I Love You, Ms.Hoshiarpur"

Isski  koi zaroorat hi nahi…….

Geet ko pehle hi patha chal gaya ki Maan ussko kitna chahatha

Lekhin phir bhi Geet ka wish toh Maan ko pura karna hi padega...haina?

Maan Geet ke zulfon ko hatake  usski ear rings ko nikhaltha…….

Maan has got a new pair for her….

Ab MSK as usual apni Geet ko chumka pehenayega…..

Maan: Geet tumme yaad hai meinne pehle bar aaise hi tumme chumka pehenaya tha, woh hummare shoot mein, tabbi mein ne faisla karliya ki tum meri ho, sirf meri, Maan ki Geet, aur ye bhi mein jaantha tha ki tummare mann mein bhi kuch aaisa hi khayaal hai

Geet is speechless…..her heart goes dhak dhak…..dhak dhak…..

Ab Geet ko patha chala ki ye Maan ko naam DD kyun hai?...

As for Maan woh iss sagaayi shadhi inn sab mein viswaas nahi kartha….

Ye Geet ka janam din hai toh yahi Maan ke liye bahut maainne lagthi hai…..usskeliye

Pyaar, rishtha,duniya sab kuch Geet se shuru aur Geet pe hi katam…haina?

Toh aaj hi Maan Geet ko ILU bhi kehna chahatha…..

Geet Maan ke chest pe apne head ko rest karthi…..

Ab ussko lagtha hai ki woh wapas apne maa ki kodh mein chali gayi

So much protection….so much peace…..so much care……

She hugs him tight……ab ussko aur kuch nahi chahiye….haina?

Ab sare lights come alive……

The wohle place is illuminated…..

Ye toh sach mein phoolon ki duniya lag rahi hai….

Aur hummari Geet princess lag rahi hai…..

Geet ki charoon taraf phool hi phool hai……

Har tarah ke phool…..

Har rang ke phool….

Har size ke phool……..

Aur toh aur ek chota sa pool mein water lilies & lotus bhi hai…..

Ek minute Geet unnke khoobsurathi mein apne aap ko kho hi jaathi…..

Aur Maan as usual apne Mishty ki hassi mein apne aap ko kho jaatha…..

Then she notices something strange about those flowers….

They are live flowers…….still breathing……

Hare they are potted flowers…….still remaining on the plants…..

Maan KM mein innko plant karega…..

Ye flowers Maneet ki zindagi ko khushiyon se bar denge…..

Aur Maneet ke baby uss garden mein khelegi…..

Toh kaisa hai MSK ka gift?...

Ye tha hummari Maneet ki prem kahaani……kaisa hai?...
 
 
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