Fan Fictions

   

Geet - Hui Maan Ki Pyaari...Last pt on page 32 (Page 31)

Post Reply New Post

Page 31 of 33

spvd

IF-Stunnerz

spvd

Joined: 22 December 2007

Posts: 47663

Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
part 75
nice part...
cont soon dear...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ghsp2fan

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Geet - Hui Maan Ki Pyaari...Last pt on page 32 (Page 31)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

goldenmoon

IF-Stunnerz

goldenmoon

Joined: 19 March 2011

Posts: 46684

Posted: 20 November 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
part 75
nice update..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ghsp2fan

ghsp2fan

Goldie

ghsp2fan

Joined: 18 January 2012

Posts: 1370

Posted: 21 November 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged

Part – 76

 

At the sets…..

Geet pura din Maan se baat nahi karthi…..

Upar se ye Pari Geet ko akela hi nahi chodthi……

Maan Geet se baat karne ki bahut koshish kartha hai……

In the evening….Pari has left….

Geet is about to leave….

Maan: Geet

Geet toh sunthi hi nahi…..

Geet ko dar lagtha hai ki kahi Maan ki andar ki Romeo phir se shuru na ho jaaye….

Geet: babaji , ye meinne kya kardhi?  Mujhe toh pehle ILU nahi kehna chahiye, mujhse badi galti hogayi, ab ye shuru ho gaye, inko koi nahi rokh saktha,babaji aap hi mujhe bacha sakhte ho, please

Maan: hare Geet

Geet: Maan sir, mujhe jaldi jaana hai, kya hum kal baat kar sakthe hai?

Maan: Geet, tu kahan jaa rahe ho?

Geet: mein? Apna ghar

Maan: Geet, Dadi ne tujhe KM lelkhe aane ko kaha hai

Geet: kya? Zaroor Maan ki koi nayi saazish hogi

Maan: kya soch rahi ho? Chalo

Geet: nahi, mein aapke saath nahi aa sakthi

Geet ka phone rings, its Dadi….

Dadi: Geet bte, aap kahan hai?

Geet: mein toh yahi hoon, set pe

Dadi: kya? Aap ab tak wahan kya kar rahe hai? Ye Maan aapko chodke chale gaye? Humme pehle hi patha hai, woh aaise hi bhool jayenge, koi baat nahi aap jaldi KM aayiye

Geet: par Dadi Maan sir toh yahi hai

Dadi: hare hum kitne dher se aapka intrezar kar rahe hai, jaldi aayiye

Geet: teek hai Dadi

Maan smiles……ab toh yakeen ho gaya hai kya?...

Maan: chalein?

Geet: haan haan chalte hai

At KM…..Maneet arrive….

Ye dekho Ranno aur buaji bhi yahi hai…..

Geet: ye yahan kya kar rahe hai?

Dadi: hare Geet, yahan aayiye, ye toh aapki maa aur buaji ho hai, aaise kya soch rahe hai?

Aapko dekhke lagtha hai ki aap pehle bar yahan aarahe ho, ye toh aapka hi ghar haina?

Geet: maa? Yahan?

Buaji: kyun? Hum tere ghar nahi aasakhte?

Geet is all the more puzzled……..

Ranno: Geet aao yahan aake beito

Geet goes & sits…..

Dadiji: hare Geet bte hum log Maan aur aapki sagayi ki baat hi kar rahe hai

Geet: sagayi? Hare babaji ye kaise nayi musibat hai? Pehle hi Maan out of control ho rahe hai, ab innki approval bhi milgayi toh, mein toh gayi

Dadi: Geet aap itna pareshan kyun ho gaye?

Geet: woh hum……

Dadi: humme aapki natak ki barein mein sab patha hai

Buaji: Geet apni buaji ko bhi nahi bathayi?

Dadi: hare chodiye, hum haina sab ko hum sambalenge

Geet: woh abhi abhi film ki shoot chal raha hai, sagayi ki kya jaldi?

Dadi:  bas Gee tab hum aur natak nahi dekh sakthe, agle hafte aapki sagayi hai, shadi aaplog jab chaho karlo, humme koi jaldi nahi, par agar aap kahe toh sagayi ke saath saath shadi bhi kar sakthe

Buaji: haanji ye bhi achcha hai

Geet keeps quiet…..

Maan Dadi ke peecha hi kada hai….

He is enjoying Geet's reactions……

He signals Geet to come up…..

Dadi ko patha chale jaatha…..

Dadi: Geet, aap jaa sakthe hai

Geet: Dadi

Dadi: hare Geet bte, aap ka bhulawa aagaya haina? Jayiye

Yahan rehne se achcha Maan ka samna karna haina?

Geet terrace pe chale jaathi…..

Maan is waiting……..he comes near….

He lifts & carries her to the swing…..

Geet looks at him….Maneet eyelock……MAhi…..

Geet looks at the Moon….

Maan apna chand ko dekh raha hai…..

Maan: Geet, kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: ye chand kitna sundar haina?

Maan: haan haan, chand bahut sundar hai aur Armstrong ne chand mein pehla katam rakha, bas ho gayi?

Geet:kya?

Maan: tujhe kya laga? Mein kahoonga ki tum uss chand se bhi sundar ho aur filmi hero ki tarah dialogue pe dialogue maroonga

Geet: Maan, ye kya ho gaya aapko?

Maan: hare Geet tum toh sir ko bhool gayi?

Geet: mein kuch nahi bhoolthi, bhoolna toh aapka kaam hai

Maan: kya?

Geet:  kyun? Aap chahate ho ki abhi bhi mein aapko sir kehke bhulaoon?

Geet turns back…..

Maan gets closer & hugs her from behind…..

Maan: toh abhi tum meri honne ke liye tayyar ho gayi

Geet: chodo mujhe, mein toh kabse tayyar hoon, par aap ko toh koi parwa nahi

Maan: achcha?

Geet: haan, mein kabse intrezaar kar rahi hoon? Aapke muh se woh baat sunne ki

Maan: ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai?

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, ab meinne kehdhi toh aapko bhi kehna padega

Maan turns her & looks into her eyes….

He closes her lips with his hands….

Maan: chup…..bilkul chup…ab bahut ho gayi tummari bak bak, aaj toh mujhe bas apne Mishty ko jee barke dekhne do, ab mujhe koi disturb nahi karega, tub hi, samji…..

Geet looks into his eyes….

Maan Geet ki zulfon ke saath keltha….

Geet rests her head on his chest….

Maan holds her …..Maneet passionate hug…..

Geet toh ab Maneet magic land mein hai….

Woh donno apne hi duniya mein rehte hai…..

It starts drizzling……

Geet slowly releases her hold….par Maan tightens his hold…..

Geet: Maan bearish ho rahi hai….andar chalein

Maan: nahi aaj nujhe ye pal ko enjoy karne do

Geet: par Maan

Maan: sshhh….

Geet also doesn't want to move……

Suddenly thunder strikes….Geet darjaathi….Maan ko kaske pakadthi…..

Maan: Gee tab toh humme andar jaana hi padega, chalo

Maan takes her to his room….

He takes a towel & gives her….

He goes to change….

Maan gets back…..

Geet has gone to change too……

Geet comes back….she looks hot in her wet avatar…….

Maan tries to get near….

Geet: nahi, abhi nahi

Maan: Geet

Geet: pehle woh teen labz

Maan: nahi kahoonga toh?

Geet: toh mein ye sagayi nahi karoongi

Maan: kya?

Geeet: haan mein bhi Geet Handa hoon

Maan: achcha? MSK ko damki?

Geet: kyun? Damki dena sirf aapka haq hai?

Maan: aaisi baat hai? Toh abhi tumme itna haq mil gayi?

Maan cathches her hand….pulls her closer…..

Geet: ye mazak nahi hai? Mein bahut serious hoon, samje aap?

Maan: hmm

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi

Geet: abhi se aapke saath katti, mein tab tak baat nahi karnewali jab tak aap woh nahi kehte

Maan: dekhte hai, tum kitne dher chup rehthi

Geet pushes him….gets angry….

Geet runs away……

Geet ki ye gussa hi Maan ko fida kardhi haina?

Toh Maan thoda aur mazaa lena chahatha…..

The following 9 member(s) liked the above post:

mkd.70flowing_riverPoonamTpreet.harmanpreetymaaneetAlamelukabslocksspvdgoldenmoon

spvd

IF-Stunnerz

spvd

Joined: 22 December 2007

Posts: 47663

Posted: 21 November 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
part 76
awesome...
naughty Maan...
cont soon dear...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ghsp2fan

goldenmoon

IF-Stunnerz

goldenmoon

Joined: 19 March 2011

Posts: 46684

Posted: 22 November 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
part 76
loved it..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ghsp2fan

ghsp2fan

Goldie

ghsp2fan

Joined: 18 January 2012

Posts: 1370

Posted: 22 November 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged

Part – 77

 

Geet ka gussa din bar din badtha jaatha….

Maan toh ussko sabke samne tease kartha….

Dadi ko Geet ki kamoshi ajeeb lagtha…..

Geet tries hard to woo Maan to tell those words…

But Maan doesn't care a bit…..

Ab toh sagayi bhi paas aagayi….

Dadi is very busy…..

Buaji aur Ranno roz aake Dadi ki madat karte hai….

Itne saalon ke baat KM mein koi family function honnewala hai….

Even Nakul is happy……kaan bahut hai, lekhin ye Maan sir ki sagayi haina?

Adi takes charge of the arrangements….

Geet ki shoot hai toh Pinky comes & helps Adi….

Yahan ek aur prem kahaani  chalthi rehthi…..

Pinky takes charge of the catering department….

Bahar se cooks aaye hai….

Do din se mittayiyan bana rahe hai…

Pinky toh kitchen se hatthi hi nahi….

Adi comes & checks her often….

Thoda kaam thodi masti….

Maneet ki masthi bhi zari hai….

Shoot pe toh Geet Maan ke peeche hi bhaagthi rehthi….

Shayad Geet ko dekhke woh kuch kahega….

Par ye Maan toh usski taraf dekhtha bhi nahi….

Geet kudh black coffee banake jaathi……

Maan: Geet, coffee bahut badiya hai

Bas itna hi boltha…aur kuch nahi…

Bechari Geet toh kade kade usski muh deklhte hi rehthi….

Geet bhi aasani se chodnewali nahi…

Dinner time bhi Nakul se poochke Maan ki pasand ki dishes banathi

Ek din chocolate mousse banathi toh ek din pasta..…

Maan bas khane ki tareef karthe aur chale jaatha…..

Ek din Geet Maan ki room ko candles aur roses se sajaathi….

She waits for him….she tries to create a romantic feel….

Lekhin Maan toh Romeo banjaatha…..

Koi baatein nahi….seedha action…..

Aathe hi Geet ko apne bahon meion lekhe seedhe bed pe lekhe jaatha….

Ab Geet chup kaise rehthi……

Geet: hare, ye kya kar rahe hai aap? Chodo, chodo mujhe

Maan: par Geet tumne itne pyaar se itne sara arrangements kia hai toh mujhe bhi kuch karna hoga, haina?

Geet: bas aapne pehle hi bahut kuch kardhiya, ab aur nahi

Maan won't leave her…..she tries to leave…

Maan: hare aaise kaise?

Geet: aapka matlab

Maan: ab tumne kamakaam mere andar ki Romeo ko jagadhi toh

Geet: toh?

Maan: aag laganewale ko hi bhujana hi padega

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan

Geet gtes closer & hugs him….

Geet: ab teek ho gaya?

Maan: nahi

Geet now kisses his cheeks….

Geet: ab?

Maan: nahi

Geet: hare ye mein kya kar rahi hoon?

Geet comes back to her senses….

She pushes him & leaves….

Maan: chalo aaj ka kaam isse hi chalatha…..par ye ladki toh mere needh churake le gayi

Aaise hi Geet chahe kitna bhi koshish karein Maan toh kuch kehnewala nahi hai…..

Geet bhi ab tak gayi hai….

Ye samjte kya apne aapko?

She stops talking to him…..

She tries to avoid him when there is no need…….

Maan takes her shoping …sagayi hai toh ye sab toh hotha rehtha haina?

Wahan bhi Geet kuch nahi bolthi….

Maan kud Geet ki kapde choose kartha….

Geet bas sabko dekhte hi rehthi…..kuch nahi kehthi…..

Maan jaanboochke kuch bad choices kartha…..

Geet Maan ke haath se woh kapde cheenke wapas rakhthi….

Maan: hare ye kya? Ye kitna achcha hai?

But she won't talk…..

Inke actions dekhke salesgirl hasthi hai….

Geet ka gussa aur badjaatha….

Maan: hare ab meinne kya kiya? Sab kuch tum hi karthi ho, par sara inzaam mere upar

Geet wahan se chale jaathi….

Jab khane chalte toh bhi aaisa hi Maan bas apne pasand ka order kartha….

Geet waiter se alag order karthi….

Ab waiter is confused….ek hi bill dega ya do do?

He comes & asks Maan…..

Maan: mujhe kyun pooch rahe ho? M'am ne oder dhi toh unne hi pooch?

Geet: kya? Mera bill dedo

Geet apna bill pay karke taxi se chale jaathi….

Maan sir, ye teek nahi hai……….

 

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:

PoonamTpreetymaaneettoofan_mailpreet.harmankabslocks-indu-goldenmoonspvd

goldenmoon

IF-Stunnerz

goldenmoon

Joined: 19 March 2011

Posts: 46684

Posted: 23 November 2012 at 1:39am | IP Logged
part 77
nice update

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ghsp2fan

spvd

IF-Stunnerz

spvd

Joined: 22 December 2007

Posts: 47663

Posted: 23 November 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
part 77
lovely part...
cont soon dear...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

ghsp2fan

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
Geet without its Geet 4 few days nehapushkar 0 354 11 October 2011 at 1:15pm
By nehapushkar
AR OS Love Blossoms PAGE 3 || Note PAGE 7

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

angelic_angel 58 24094 12 May 2011 at 11:08am
By swamii92
A Walk On The Beach..-AR[New Page Link: Page 150]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 150 151

Munchkin. 1200 133903 10 April 2011 at 8:10am
By Riddss
-Lost AR- Part 1 Page 1 Note: Page 4 7/31/2009

2 3 4

Veiledbeauty 31 12805 31 July 2009 at 8:30pm
By archielicious
Bewafa-LAST PART(pg.44)2nd to last(pg.43)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 55 56

simplyconfused 441 105792 07 February 2006 at 9:12pm
By nabz8888

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.