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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Hey guyz
main fir se aagyi sabko pakane...
lekin ye kaam sirf main aru k kehne par kar rhi hoon...
ok ok ab pani bakwaas se aapko nhi pakaungi...
Prologue nhi dungi seedha 1st update deti hoon...


Part 1

A girl of age 20 is sitting on the bed...with the bridal dress her face is covered with long veil...and the room is decorated with flowers...and she wait for her unwanted husband to come and rape her...and the door clicks open and a guy wearing golden sherwani enter the room...he came near the bed...and

Guy :maaf kijiyega kriya ji...aapne jo mujhse umeede lagai hogi wo main puri nhi karsakta...(yes and the girl is Kriya Ghai...and now Kriya _____)...kyonki main ek baal bhramchari hoon aur maine kisi bhi stri ko na chine ki sogandh khayi hai...aapse shaddi bhi maine sirf apni marti maa...ko thodi khushi dene k liye ki thi...

(To listen all this kriya doing bhangra garba geeda...all the dance forms in her heart...and she uncovered her duppata and with excitemant...and then we show her beautiful face with a big smile...)

Kriya :oh thank u sooo much Swayam...(and kriya so called husband is Swayam shikhawat age 23 years old and verysharif bacha of his parents)...tum nhi jaante tumne mere dil se kitni bari tension utaar di...whoo...(she take a sigh of relief...warna pata hai mujhe kitni tension ho rhi thi...tum jaise champu k saath main apni suhag raat manaungi...yuck...mujhe toh soch k hi...ewww eww...bura mat maanna...par jo sach tha maine wo kaha...

Swayam :(with smile)nhi kriya ji ismain bura maanne wali konsi baat hai...jo sach hai wo sach hai...

Kriya :ha sahi kaha...acha ek baat sunlo...main koi ek achi biwi wale koi kaam nhi karne wali...like tumhare kapde nikalna...khana banana...mujhse ye sab kaam nhi hote...

Swayam :Kriya ji khaana banane k liye yahan par chef hai...aur kapde toh main khud hi nikalleta hoon...(he said very sweetly and innocently...)

Kriya :ok cool...lekin main ek kaam bohot ache se karne wali hoon...tumhare paise udana...ghar se toh bade ameer lagte ho...(she said while looking at the interiors)

Swayam :nhi nhi kriya ji...aap galat samajh rhi hai...ye toh humare duur k bhaiya ka ghar hai...aur humara ghar toh...jodhpur main hai...aur humare maa papa bhi wahi rehte hai...aur hum toh apne bhaiya ki company main hi assistant manager ki post par hai...aur humari salary sirf Rs 10,000 hai jismain se 5 hazar hum apne ghar bhej dete hai...

Kriya :(in mind)oh god meri toh kismat hi phuti hai...ek baap hai wo bhi kangal aur ek pati mila wo bhi kangal...ab main kaise apni saari wishes puri karoongi...

(guyz kriya is totally a spoil girl who loves shopping parties and all but due to her father less salary...she unable to fullfill her desires...then she made boyfriends and spent their money...her parents are very well aware of their daughter acts...to they decided to get her married...but she is not ready for the marriage so her mom blackmail her with her fake heartattack...coz she loves her mom)

few days passed...and these days swayam is busy in his office work and kriya...at home busy in watching movies...kriya ignores swayam mostly...she wears jeans and top...at homes and also not wearing sindoor and mangalsutra
                                                                  
Precap :rey's entry...                 

now reviews tym
hows it..?
should I continue or not...?
kriti <3

Add kritzd3pm for the pms...




Edited by Kriti_rox - 15 October 2012 at 12:50am

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index :
part 1 page 1
part 2 page 11
part 3 page 35
part 4 page 40
part 5 page 73
part 6 page 103
part 7 page 120


Edited by Kriti_rox - 15 October 2012 at 12:51am

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Res

Unres

Yippie im first to comment

Haha aro ke kehne pe start kiya aur aro hi late

aww poor baby

dekh le aro

me first

comment aur unres dono mein

dekha

okies ab aro ko sataana chodo aur update pe aati hun

but update mein kya tha...????

kriti didi mujhe yaad nahi aa raha ...!!!!

batao na..!

arey comment nahi chahiye kya jo tum mujhe bata nahi rahi...!!!!

mat batao main jaa rahi hun

jab mujhe pata hi nahi update mein kya tha toh likhungi kya khaak

bye bye im again off to kriyaansh land





























































































































































































































arey baar-2 neeche kyun aati ho

mujhe akela chod do meri bestie ki tarah

huh...!!!!


































































































































































































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ROFL




sachi mein laga main phir se comment nahi dungi...???

na...!!!

pehle toh title

awsm...!!!!!

just luv it

and den ur prologue

Kriyam marroed Shocked

ye kaise ho gaya

main sapna dekh rahi hun

but sapne toh dekht hain padhte thodi

dat means

u..!!!!! Angry

next mein rey is entry

hehe gonna b fun Wink

oh did i tell u

swayam baal bhramachaari

and kriya a spoilt girl is awsm thingy..!!!!

and and and

ek baat batao

swaron ka kya hua...??? Wink

haan-2 bolo

chalo me going bye...!!!


Edited by abhiyakreya - 28 August 2012 at 4:04am

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nice story kriti

sumthing diff.

Kria is really a spoilt girl...

Still interesting

Waiting 4 reys entry

thanx aroma

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 27 August 2012 at 6:46am

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***Unres***
lovely part...
kriyam are married... Shocked
kriya is spoil girl... nice
its really different concept...
and i think swayam is working in rey's office..
eagerly waiting for reys entry...
update soon
thnx for pm

Edited by GayatriJethani - 27 August 2012 at 7:10am

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
asa lag raha hai ki tv serial..chal rah hai.LOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
waiting.next part
bachaara patiShocked

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 7:19am | IP Logged
ye Swayam ko kaisa bna diya
BAAL BRAHMCHARI
hahah


Or Kriya to bs... socha bhi nhi tha

Kriya to use kha jaayegi kyuki woh Thehra BAL BRAHMCHAARI au hmaari kriya Spoit gal




bt jldi se Rey ki entry krwaaoSmile
fir Kriya change hogi maybe

waiting for the next part
update soonSmile

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