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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:28pm | IP Logged

You are right. That did not make much sense. But i think that is the uniqueness of this one shot. I loved it. Even though i don't know what happened there but it was well written. Sorry if i said something wrong. No offence.

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged

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Mais! You!

This was beautiful... The true definition of angst. Though i was bloody having a problem imagining anyone. There was such an amazing character blend of so many characters. Coming closest to Yuvi-Ashi.

There were certain portions that i just loved! Especially the after he left... They were brilliant.

One advice: start watching old episodes of any show that you love around the weekend. Such random outbursts are not good. I don't care that we get OS out of them... They shouldn't be happening like this.

And i hate you!

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged

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Originally posted by basket_101

Hey!!

That was a really nice OS!! Thank you!!
I just imagined it with KiSha though.. =P Lolz, I did give the liberty to. Dunno why I can only imagine RaHi in it

Anyway, what I loved about the whole OS was the description

I really admire the way you write and describe everything...

It just gives the story more depth, at least what I feel (= WOW! That's the best thing I've heard so far! My descriptive writing sucks according to me! So someone praising that, means really a LOT to me! THANK YOU SO MUCH for this!!!

I really loved it, and although it was an emotional piece, I really liked it! Bit too emotional, I know

Really well done! Big smile

THANK YOU!!!!!!!

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 11:46pm | IP Logged

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Originally posted by Analeez11

You are right. That did not make much sense. But i think that is the uniqueness of this one shot. I loved it. Even though i don't know what happened there but it was well written. Sorry if i said something wrong. No offence.

Oho! I am not offended and you said nothing wrong. I was pretty much aware while writing this that this won't make much sense. LOL

Now that I think about it, I should've put some kind of description of the back story, that would've made some sense Tongue

But since I am getting nice feedback for this, I won't! Let the readers either use their imagination or scratch their heads LOL

Thank you!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged

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Originally posted by CoffeeAddict

Mais! You! Yeah, ME!!!

This was beautiful... The true definition of angst. I dunno if it's the true definition, it's definitely my definition. My angst usually turns out like this. With lots of breaking, crying and breakdowns Though i was bloody having a problem imagining anyone. There was such an amazing character blend of so many characters. Coming closest to Yuvi-Ashi. Hmmm...Ashi-Yuvi? I'm gonna go ahead and make a totally insensitive comment here! Yuvi wasn't that tall compared to Ashi, he can't possibly stare down to her face Yeah, bad one

There were certain portions that i just loved! Especially the after he left... They were brilliant. I expect detailed comments from you But this one was good. Those parts had me going URGH! I had to make her stand and look at the blood. How? That was KILLING me! The answer to the 'how?' wasn't anywhere near me! Just randomly had to sqeeze something out

One advice: start watching old episodes of any show that you love around the weekend. Such random outbursts are not good. I don't care that we get OS out of them... They shouldn't be happening like this. I really should find some activity for the weekend. But here's the thing about me, my outbursts really are random. And they are these freaky kind of random. I can't write comedy or light stuff easily, fluff is just so not me. I have to always write about something dark, angsty, tragical. And honestly, this idea really was revolving around my head for the past week. This was just the half of the intended one. I was waiting for the appropriate time to write and post it (definitely on RaHi) but yesterday I heard "My Immortal" after ages and I was like, "Screw it! I'm writing!!!" and finished this in 30 minutes!

And i hate you! I'm the one supposed to say that!!! You still haven't unresed!!

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:00am | IP Logged

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res!! this was amazing!! really loved it

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged

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I read this and commented first thing in the morning. I can't give detailed comments on empty stomach. So consider that comment as a *res*. Tonight i'll leave a full comment.

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Posted: 27 August 2012 at 2:58am | IP Logged

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Originally posted by CoffeeAddict

I read this and commented first thing in the morning. I can't give detailed comments on empty stomach. So consider that comment as a *res*. Tonight i'll leave a full comment.

I hate you.

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