>|OS|<~PYAAR HAI TUMSE YAARA_COMPLETED!! - Page 6

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

Shona plz update rabba n tere ishq ne
I impatient now for both update
Plz plz it's humble request update both n complete

Di apko toh mein already bata dya Rabba ke bare mein
Tere Ishq Ne, can't say anything!!
I know u love them, dekhta hai kya hota hai ;)

Super duper ending
Muahhh
Net love
Hahahaha I always loved internet love ahem ahem ppl know why !!!!
Just mind blowing dear

Hey shona that was a very very cute os !
Love friendship m jealousy !
mujhese dositi karogay lyk
I luved it ! Thnx for pm

its amazing shona ;)
woh sanju kaha bhag gayi?
kiss wala scene continue Q nahi kiya :(
last main ek kiss toh banta tha :P

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

Super duper ending
Muahhh
Net love
Hahahaha I always loved internet love ahem ahem ppl know why !!!!
Just mind blowing dear

I don't no Y?
is that ahem ahem

Awww this was sooo cute n sweet n emotional n touchy n I donno what else...it was simply outta this world...OUTSTANDING 😊

Awesome awesome awesome concept shona n more importantly, beautifully penned down 😊

Enjoyed reading every bit of it...loved it to the core 😊

Again brilliant writing...keep it up 👍🏼

Thanx a lot for the pm darling 😊

loved it shona! 

Just heading out somewhere will read this as soon as I get back :D

Hey Shona

This was Truly Fantastic Dear :)) Loved it totally

this was super Duper cute Shonaa …….Beautiful Indeed !!! Kudos to you yaar jis perfection se U wrote ankahee & Uske baad yeh I am Speechless you are a Star :)) & a Very Special Thanks to Jaya for demanding Such a Cute OS ……Loved it to the Core Awesome !!!

The way you go with the Detailing of the actions & emotions is Brilliant & here it is fantastic throughout. Both are engaged now & telling each other truth had written beautifully. I just loved it, Arjun & Arohi's Dialogues & emotions were super intriguing for me. very well Articulated!!!  

The opening Scared me a bit Arjun marrying Sanjana & Arohi marrying Rohit :O I was stunned with first few lines But Arjun & his Sizzling way of Stopping Arohi was super blast :)) Loved it but Felt bad for poor Sanjana she is heart broken :( but didn't knew the truth :( I hated Sanjana after knowing the truth, She betrayed her Best buddy to win over Arjun & poor guy started meeting her thinking its her Softy Allhuwalia

Shona Amazing ID's I must say Softy Allhuwalia & Ajnabee Monster,……..Super creative Indeed !!! I Loved Arjun's Plan he had so much control over himself that he didn't let anyone even get an hint that he knows everything & he told everything to family & Sanjana's Parents too :) Super cool yaar

& The Kiss part was already planed he kiss her purposefully when he heard the click sound of door opening ,.,,,,,,,,,,,,Fundooo Dude !! Loved his planning but still there was a cute soft & innocent guy u picturised there who is madly in love with her & he fought like a true champinoon to destroy evil plans to Sanjana

Thanks to Aru she dropped her diary warna toh sab kuch mitti mein mi jata lekin Shona ji prasanna huyi & Arjuhi are together now. Loved the emotional moment shared by Both Truly amazing.  Reading this write up was Sheer Bliss !!! Thank you

Waiting for JL now :)))) Jaldi post karnaa :D

Love
Pranjal.

Such a sweet os :).. totally loved the way u wrote with the convos :)

thank u soo much for ur pm :)