Virman-Beyond Control (note pg-151) - Page 6 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

shilpa09

@shilpa09

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...awesome...👍🏼

i read ur story and must say...really fab work:)😊

virat's character is quite scary..😲.but our mannu is same chirpy:)😃

i have request..😳..can u plsss (if it is possible) write dialogues on new line...it makes more readable...:):):)😊

but overall one damn hell excellent work:)

good luck:)👍🏼

and plsss dear pm me as u update next tym:):):)🤗

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Aarti

@__Aarti__

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update !!!!! loved it . since i m also a college student from delhi , and me and my best friend ,we r same as manvi and ananya.so i could relate to d story ,just loved reading it a lot .thanks a lot for d pm dear .

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 11 years ago

Luvd Manvi's character n also her luv for family n her relation wid ananya... Hmmm y is she going to chandigarh?? Update soon hope she meets virat soon... Thanx for pm:)

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761220

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely update can't wait for virman to meet

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Radhi

@Rads24

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Posted: 11 years ago

wondeful update! 😊

continue soon and thanks for the pm

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preetipc

@preetipc

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Read both the updates and loved it to the core.Arrogant virat and bubbly manvi.Would like to read more. so pls accept my buddy request and pls pm me next time after u finish ur update😊 Edited by preetipc - 11 years ago

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