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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ridzzi-

Oh ho.

Beautifully written,
Very interesting, looking forward to the next chapters.

I am just worried, yeh Singhania and raashi ka kya connection.

Anyway. Well written.

Keep rocking!!! :D

-Ridz

 dr singhania is one of a way interesting character wait for the suspense ,in my ff all the klids have tracks Wink
ginny dream ,raavi' encounter with trhe hooded guy , n rashi ka track its  big suprise Wink
ginny also has a  big raazShocked   actually all of them have Wink
 just wait its gonna be real inetresting Wink
somebody mite die soonShocked

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Oye! Hoye! Kaun mare ga?Shocked
And please lizzie, this time update soon.Big smile

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AhsaanBaig94

Oye! Hoye! Kaun mare ga?Shocked
And please lizzie, this time update soon.Big smile

 arey wait karo na
they re lot of tracks to resolveEmbarrassed so wait haan koi marega soon Shockedwith that person death the real story will soon that is the big toofan(big twist)  is gonna come both the families and their friends are alsoo gonna be affected with this big toofan Wink start n probably 1 yr leap to happen but after some time Wink
 im already on the second part of intezaar so pls wait for it
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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 3:44am | IP Logged
@lizzie,
Okay.Tongue
Bas I hope, ke koi khushi bhara track bhi aaye.LOL

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AhsaanBaig94

@lizzie,
Okay.Tongue
Bas I hope, ke koi khushi bhara track bhi aaye.LOL

 dont worry  happy track coming soon !!!!!!!!!Embarrassed

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Chapter 7

Intezaar ' par kab thak '..

Milton hill,pune

Dr singhania house

Dr singhania sitting with a a drink in his hand and is thinking

In flashback mode seeing raashi n getting shocked

Dr singhania : saying  ye kaise ho sakta hain iss ladki ki shakal hu bahoo uss ki tarah mithi jhulti hain ( shocked)

Dr singhania puts his glass on the table and goes to the store room

 He searches n then finally sees a rusted old file in which a burnt picture of a baby is shown he reads the surname but due to termite s the paper is have eanten by them  .

The picture has turned yellow !!!!

Dr singhania : iss picture ko  dobara develop karna padega ( says a loud )

The scene shifts '..

Ahluwalia house(Parth Enclave)

INFO-Ahuja house ( Asiad Enclave )

Sweety n lucky are looking  shocked at sunny rasshi n ginny

Sunny ,ginny raashi  are looking down and say sorry

Sweety : lucky ji itna saara ho gaya par kisi ne kuch nahi bataya ( shocked)

Luckyjoi : sweetyji aap relax ho jayo

Nanu : sweety puttar unki koi gathi nahi hain

Then rocky tells his parents about the boys  fight

Sweety gets realaxed n says:(angrily) kal hi hum police station jayeenge un ladko ke  khilaaf fir denge '.

Luckyji and the rest nod 

Luckyji : challo late ho gaya hain challo bed time

All of  them leave '.

Somewhere in pune '.

A girl is making soup

The  girl about raashi age goes to give soup to a lady but lady throws the soup and says chali ja manoos kahin ki tumahari wajah seh but stops in her tracks ''..

We see a shadow of a man coming towards the lady he tells the girl to go

The girl leaves sadly

The man face nt shown gives an injection to the lady falls asleep

He tells the girl

Shadow man : kitni baar tumhe samjhaya hain par tum ( looking at the girl sternly ) ab yaad rakhna  ki uske samnien nahi janna ( advising the girl with a serious tone )

The girl nods and the shadow man leaves

A tear trickles down from the girl's cheek >>>>>>>>>

 

In  dheradhun the same time in pune

The two ladies are in their hotel room discussing the conversation btwn them and mr rai

Flashmode scenes

Mr rai ( face nt shown) : haan sab perfect hona chahiye aur koi galthi nahi honi chahiye iss kaam ke liye mein tumhe 40 ,000 doonga aur kaam karne ke baad 40,000 aur par kiski ko kaano kaan khabar nahi honi chahiye ( saying strictly almost threateningly '..)

2 ladies to mr rai:  ok  mr rai par kaam kya hain //

Mr rai : tells the 2 ladies  about the work they have to do

Back to the present scne

1st lady says to the 2nd lady : ye mr rai jo  bhi hain bahut chaloo admi hain

2nd lady ( laughing) : haan woh toh hain humein toh kam se hi matlab haina na ( says with a smirking smile )

1st lady ( smirk smile ) : haan aur soccho woh dugne paise de raha hain kaam ke liye ( says with a wink)

...

Antop hill,pune

The hooded guy is quietly sneaking in

A loud voice says

REHAAN GAREWAL!!!!!!!!!

The hooded guy turns around and sees a boy just about his age

The  other boy comes upto him

(Its revealed that this other  boy is the one who dropped a little boys book in the beginning of the story and who raavi got angry  , face was nt shown earlier)

Both the boys are face to face

'

Rehan ( face shown thin boy short hair has light brown eyes and a scary look) the other boy is nitin kapoor  ( same as shown in parvarish show )

Rehan ( with  a smirk ): hey nitin , dad ne lagaya hoga apko mere peeche na waise din bhar aapki itni tareef jo  karte hain( saying with jealousy n hurt )

Nitin : rehaan tum mujhe galat samajh ' but before nitn can say anything rehaan leaves in anger

Nitin stares at him and says :

Rehaan tum mujhe bhai samjho ya na samjho par mein tumhein apna bhai samahjta hoon  (saying sadly) '...

Scene shifts

Palam street

an expensive car stops a man in an expensive business suit gets down ( face not shown)

a man says to the bussines man: ( smilingly) welcome home sir !!!!

business man says: ( with a smile- face not shown, only mouth is shown ): not welcome "HOME SWEET HOME"  ( says with a laugh)

 

chapter  7 with that end of intezaar episode ''

precap : somebody pushes ginny down the school steps ginny screams !!!!!!!!!!

 



Edited by lizzie1765 - 22 January 2013 at 4:51am

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
OMG.

Kahan the aap. ROFL Kya mazedaar chapter tha. It was really good, i cannot state whats on in my mind.

Its really good, the way u've written and explained it. Well done. Love it. Precap is shaking me up, because u said someone is gonna die :(

Anyway. Lovely do continue soon :)

-Ridz!

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ridzzi-

OMG.

Kahan the aap. ROFL Kya mazedaar chapter tha. It was really good, i cannot state whats on in my mind.

Its really good, the way u've written and explained it. Well done. Love it. Precap is shaking me up, because u said someone is gonna die :(

Anyway. Lovely do continue soon :)

-Ridz!

 i know it was and with less actionOuch par aagey chapters Embarrassedwill be really interesting Wink
raashi 's enemy is gonna enter Shocked

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