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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged

Promo 2:Embarrassed

Doctor is talking to the ahluwalia family members &raavi-sunny.

Sweety: (worried) kya hua doctor, raashi kaisi hai??(While the rest of them look on )

Doctor: (teling all of them) (serious tone) dekheiye abhi patient khatre seh  bahar nahi hai .raashi ka zyaada khoon behegaya hain,aap jaldi hi khoon ka imtezaam kare . we don't have much time to save her,otherwise (hesitantly )woh coma main chali jayegi.

All shockedShocked>>>>>>>>>>>



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OMG!

Looking forward to the next part.

The promo seems shocking. How all is well.

Also, i love ur writing skills, do participate here: ~*Parvarrish One Shot [OS] Contest*~

Thank You! Embarrassed

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Posted: 27 November 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Oh No...!!! Raashi Coma??ShockedShocked
Btw, great Promo...
Waiting eagerly for the chapter...
And again welldone..Thumbs Up

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Chapter 5 coming soon i hope you guys will like it WinkSmile

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waiting Big smile

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Chapter 5

        Hadsaa ya Haqeeqat ...

Pune , Maharastra

Nanu  walking up and down in tension looking at  the big clock hung on the wall  , outside there is pouring rain and thunder .raashi and sunny are looking with worried look on their faces .

Raashi (saying): nanu don't worry raavi di , rocky bhai aur ginny jaldi wapas aayenge !!

Sunny : haan nanu, aap tension mat lo !!

Nanu: beta mein tension nahi le raha hoon, par mujhe aisa kyun lagta hain ki kuch bahut bura hone wala hain !!( with a  severe worried look on his face  )

Raashi & sunny are worried and confused of  what nanu is saying !!!

Rashi: akhir nanu konse  bura honewale ki baat kar rahe hain!!! ( muttering under her breath )

Xxx

Scene shifts

Gransen hill highway road

Ginny and raavi head towards gransen hill road highway ,the highway road is deserted and pouring / thunder .

Ginny: ravi di kya woh stranger ne apko yahi bulaya tha !!

Raavi: haan ginny, usne mujhe yaheen bulaya tha par!! ( walking , trip and  falls down on the ground )

Ginny : (shouts )raavi di !! aap theek toh ho(helping raavi to get up  )( suddenly  ginny sees a a small box on the ground)

Raavi: kya hua ginny ??

SILVER BOX



Ginny: Di , yeh dekho ( shows her the small  silver box). She tries to open the box but it does not open ) . raavi also tries to open the box but it doesn't open also !!

Raavi : ( looking at the silver  box) akhir iss box mein hai kya !!!!

Ginny: pata nahi ! lagta hain ki woh stranger jaan buch ke yeh box hamare liye  chodke gaya hoga

Raavi : hmm you have a point ginny !! ( saying with a smile)

Ginny : (sees two drunk men looking at them ) raavi di, yahaan se chalte  hain , ye jagah khatre se khali lagti hain!!! ( pointing towards the two drunk men)

Raavi( also scared ) haan chalte hain ye box ko ghar pe khole genge !!( so raavi and ginny put  the small silver box in the black bag and go away  from there).

Xxx

At mr jhunjunwalla's party :

Sweety ( talking): luckyji , main ghar pe phone karti hoon !!

Luckyji : ( telling) arey sweety ji sab ghar pe theek honge fit n fine aap tension mat lo !!( smiling)

Sweety : par ' lucky cuts in and says

Luckyji : par var kuch nahi , sweetyji ghar pe sab theek hi honge don't worry !!!

Luckyji: (assuring smile) okay luckyji  !!

Mr jhunjhunwala : ok fellows dinner is ready !!

So lucky and sweety head for the grand dinner '

Xxx

Scene shifts to an un disclosed location

The two boys group come towards each other and are staring at each other angrily!!

 Shgivam: ( telling rocky ) oye im sure tumhari behen toh bahut hi interested hogi , kuch toh ghass toh degi hamare upar !!( smiles with an evil wink)

Hooded friend : youre absolutely right bro !!( laughing cruelly)

Rocky pushes the hooded guy !!

Rocky ( says ): shut the f***** up loosers !!!

Shivam  punches rocky and the hooded guy fights with rockys friend , the hooded guy is fighting with ayush and gokul simultaneously the  fight starts really badly where shiv and rocky are fighting while hooded guy is fighting with ayush and gokul .hooded guy takes a hockey starts beating ayush ,hits ayush with the hockey on his head he bleeds profusely, while gokul starts beating the hooded guy with another hockey stick !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rocky : ( fighting with shivam) don't you dare meri behenon se dur rehna warna!!!!!! ( with a finger towards shivam)

Hooded friend : warna kya ?? oh mein toh dar gaya !!( says while fighting with gokul with an evil smirk)''.

Meanwhile , raavi and ginny are walking in the pouring rain when they  see a group of boys fighting with each other !!

Raavi noticies its rocky and his friends who are fighting with a hooded guy and another guy!!

Raavi: ginny ye toh rocky hain!!1 (scared n shocked)

Ginny : kya rocky bhaiya ( shocked)( both the girls run towards rocky's direction)

Ginny :  bhaiya , rocky bhaiya!!!!! ( the boys stop fighting with each other and look towards the two girls who are completely wet in the rain)

Shivam : (evily)rocky bhaiya , waah tumhaari behen, oops tumhari ( looking towards raavi) dono behenein hot lagti hain!! ( smiling cruelly)

Hooded friend: (looks at raavi) haan !!!! ( getting closer to raavi) ( smilingy evilily )

Rocky boiling with anger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

          Gokul comes in between of raavi and hooded guy and tells him angrily!!!

Gokul : (angry almost to punch that guy) stay away from her warna !!!( warning him)

Hodeed guy : ( smirking asks raavi ) ye ( gokul) tumhaara bhai hai kya ( smirkinhg evily ) rocky pushes him,hooded guy gets up angrily and punches rocky hard . Rocky falls down and bleeds very badly, he literally faints ( all of them are shocked and raavi pulls the hooded guys collar and he yanks her off  with full force and she falls down the small hill with a scream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raavi (screams)" ginny"!!!

Ginny: raavi di !!!!!!!!!!!!(screaming in tears)

All the boys are shocked !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shivam : ( shocked tells hooded guy )  bhaag yaar bhaag !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( they run away )

Gokul ( totally shocked ) ( tells ayush ) ayush tu mohit ko hospital leja ,ginny rocky ko samballo !!

Ginny : towards gokul) ( while ayush nods and goes away ( with an badly injured mohit )(with a worried look on his face ),( ginny says) ok bhaiya !!!

Gokul : ( serious tone ) ( to ginny) main raavi ko dhooondata hoon!!!!!!! ( ginny nods holding an injured and unconscious rocky)

Gokul goes down towards hill forrresst to find raavi ''

Gokul: ( shouting ) raaviii , raavi  underneath the bushes bleeding and has fainted '!!!!

Gokul : oh my god !!!!raavi tum teek toh ho ( touching her soft  wet face) oh god ye toh behosh hain ( gokul  thinking ). He lifts her up in his arms and walks towards the opening of the road where ginny is standing .

Ginny ( crying) raavi di , gokul bhaiya bhaiya kya hua raavi di ko !!!

Gokul: ginny , raavi behosh ho gayi( in sad tone ) , challo ghar chalte hain!!! ( gokul worried, ginny nods )

Gokul (walking and thinking ) ( while ginny is holding an injured rocky and walking alongside gokul bhaiya )

Gokul : he sees raavi ' ( thinks) ye mujhe kya ho raha hain mein kyun keecha chala jaa raha hoon raavi ki arur ??!!! Kyunnn??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( flashback the scene between hooded guy , gokul and raavi )

Chapter 5 ends on gokul's confused and worried face '..


PRE CAP : an expensive car stops, a man in an expensive business suit gets down ( face not shown)------- voice over  ye kaun hain jo apne des wapas aya hain...



Edited by lizzie1765 - 05 December 2012 at 11:01pm

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...Clap...
Excellent Chapter lizzie...Thumbs Up And a sad one... Nothing good happened to those children... Worried... But, Gokul develping feelings now... Rocky, bichhara apni behno kay liye injured hogya... Hope, kuchh serious na ho...Unhappy And eager to know who is that guy in car...Ermm... Anyways, again amazing part... And continue soon..Big smile

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
OMG! Awesome Part! Shocked Lizzieee Big smile

Loved the way you've written, presentation is lovely.

Woahh.. Raavi OMG.. So worried for her. Amazing part, i have no words to express. BEAUTIFUL. Promo is interesting. Wanna know who is this guys!

U gotta participate in that OS contest haan.. PLEASEE!

Thanks for the PM and update soon!!!!


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