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FF :Honge Judaa Na Hum(Ch 11new p+Promo2 Updated)) (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ridzzi-

Liz, Its amazing, I didn't know u write SO WELL! Ginny's dream is something to look forward too. Who are those people who Ginny saw. Wasie all kids in Sweety's house? Pinky is sleeping and relaxing in her own house na ROFL Anyway its an awesome Update.Keep it up Lizzie! Big smile
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thannx Star , you will soon know about ginny 's dream , its a  major suprise Embarrassed . lots of suprises are in store Wink
well u will know where pinky & jeet are soon enoughLOL . the stranger boy watchout for him toShocked he will turn theConfused  ahuja's& ahluwalias life upside down ssshhh
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 4:39am | IP Logged
PROMO 1 : Honge Judaa Na Hum
 bahut tez baarish ho rahi hainShockedShockedShockedShocked ...
rocky , gokul , ayush are fighting with shivam and his hooded figure guy friendShockedShockedShockedShockedConfused .
the hooded figure guy punches ...
ginny screaming Cry"raavi di "!!!!!!!!ShockedShockedShocked
all are shocked !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ShockedOuch

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 5:39am | IP Logged
OMG!! Fab Promo. I guess this is the dream Ginny saw about the people there! Looking forward for the next update Big smile

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 7:21am | IP Logged
thanxEmbarrassed i  think ur the only one who is excited about my ff: Ouch
anyways just wait n watchLOL , it gets better Wink, the dream depends on wether it becomesEmbarrassed true or not ConfusedEmbarrassed. theyre lot of fight sequences in the upcoming track Star
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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
dear don't think except ridzzi no one is excited for ur ff..the only thing is that you don't send pm so none is aware about ur update..
i read ur chapter 1 and promo and seriously you write very well..and enjoyed reading and worried about ginny's dream

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aru_86

dear don't think except ridzzi no one is excited for ur ff..the only thing is that you don't send pm so none is aware about ur update..
i read ur chapter 1 and promo and seriously you write very well..and enjoyed reading and worried about ginny's dream

 thanks  i got little emotionalLOL . so you liked itWink .   the message of the dreamShocked is there s a huge storm coming this is just the beginning... the statementShocked !!! it will rock the very foundation of ahuja n ahluwalia familyOuch !!! you will soon know ginny's dream !!!Wink!

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Chapter 2 ( Kaisi ... Ye Kashmakash !!!!)


The Next Day ( Morning)


KING RANGERS SCHOOL , PUNE
rocky : ( siting in the clasroom & talking  to ayush ) arey mohit kahaan hain  subaah se usse dekha nahi ,mr shinde ki class mein bhi nahi tha ??
gokul ( comes to them) mohit aaj school nahin aaya ( tells them & sits besides rocky )
rocky : ( suprised ) par kyun ??
gokul: (confused) pata nahi yaar , kal mein usse baat kar raha tha , aur  beech main usne phone call kat kar liya!!! ( getting irritated )
ayush:( confused look on his face ) strange ??
rocky : strange toh hai !! mohit aise kabhi nahi karta toh...(thinking )
ayush( cuts in & says) chodna rocky , i guess uske dad bula rahe the canada se !!!!!
rocky ( thinking & says , while gokul nodding in agreement ) haan yeh bhi sakta hai!!!

deepika(with raavi) : hi rocky !!
rocky& ayush ( gokul just smiles at them) : hi deepika ,hi raavi
deepika : guys tum log aa rahe ho na party ke liye , mere farmhouse par hai raat 7:00pm !!!
rocky & ayush: (smilingly):hum saab aayenge !!!
gokul:(nervous face ), raavi(asking with care ) kya hua gokul, any problem??
gokul: no, koi problem nahi hai ( fake sad smile)
students:good morining sir!!

(rocky,raavi &their friends take their seats)

raavi looking towards gokuls nervous face, he sees her & smiles (sadly)

raavi;(thinking) jarror kuch baat hai , par kya( confused) ??

AHLUWALIA HOUSE , PUNE

sweety: ( on  phone) haan papaji ,aap aa rahe haina ??

papaji: haan puttar mein aa raha hoon. Sweety tum lucky ke saath uss business party mein jayo ,baccho ki fikar maat karo ( smilingly) .

sweety: theek hain papaji!!(smilingly) the door bell rings?.

Sweety:papaji mein aapse baad mein baat karti hoon, darwaze par pe koiaaya hain!!!

Sweety opens the door its lucky ji !!! lucky: hayee itni garmi hain !!!( says jokingly & sits on th sofa )

Sweety goes n gets a glass of water ... sweety ji tells lucky ji '..

Sweety: maine papaji se baat kar li hai , woh aa rahe hain !!!!!    lucky: (smilingly ) challo accha hua papakji maan gayye !!!

The phone bell rings

Lucky : (picks up the phone ) hello lucky ahluwalia speaking ( happily) '..hello , hello ( confused face ) & puts the phone down

Sweety: lucky ji thode dino se ye wrong number bula raha hain !!( telling her husband)

Lucky: lagta hai koi apne rishtedaar ko bula raha hain , par number lag nahi raha hoga !! ( telling his wife sweety)

Sweety : haan ye  bhi ho sakta hain ( thinking suspiciously ) .

Part 2 ends



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