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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged
yea aishwarya is my favEmbarrassed too so i'l be adding her for sure !!!WinkEmbarrassednot only ash but some more exciting charactersEmbarrassedEmbarrassed which are not seen in pavarissh show LOLLOL

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
Re- curring &  characters
mr khanna grandad / nana/nanu to ahuja & ahluwalia kids ( sweety , pinky & lovely father) a sweet old man who loves his family n his grand kids alot )LOL
lovely & his wife ( lovely brother of sweety n pinky ) ( cool mama to ahujs and ahluwalia kids)( sweet mami n sweety n pinky's sister in law ) LOL

deepika mehta 16 yrs old ( friend of raavi )classmate of raavi ( cousin sister of nitin kapoor)(main)  has big secret which will be revealed later on ConfusedLOL
nitin kapoor 16 yr old ( cousin brother of deepika )( main) love interest of raavi but theres big twist which will be revealed later on , loves  raavi EmbarrassedConfused
tia mehra  16yr old ( best friend of raavi )(main) classmate Embarrassed
mohit sehgal  n auysh jain  16yr old  ( rocky's friends ) (main)(classmate)Embarrassed

gokul jaiswal 16yrs old (best friend of rocky ) (older brother of mukul) ( complicated life n feeling s revealed later on )( classmate)(main)
Embarrassed
mukul  jaiswal 8yrs old ( sunny's best friend & classmate )( younger brother of gokul jaiswal )Embarrassed(main)
sameer ,koel, meenakshi(13yrs old  classmates of ginny & raashi Wink(main)
aishwarya juneja 16yrs old ( rocky's classmate , love interest of rocky)EmbarrassedEmbarrassed(main)
later i'l will add more characters as the story proceeds
Embarrassed
LOL


Edited by lizzie1765 - 22 August 2012 at 8:46am

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 8:17am | IP Logged
interesting..continue soon

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
                   Prologue
a young grown up man(in a business suit)Wink is siting looking at a photo frame -OuchConfused in flashback a voice says:  you guys are loser, chod na yaar ...OuchOuchShocked
the man says uss din ke baad sab kuch badal gayaShockedShockedShocked !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Edited by lizzie1765 - 14 September 2012 at 9:24am

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Woah! Interesting Prologue Lizzie, cannot wait for the Parts. Long parts chahiaye ROFL anyways... Continue soon and update ur topic saying that Prologue pg 2! Big smile

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CHAPTER 1 ( Raaz  )
the story of honge juda na hum is situated
in Pune all the main characters -other characters are born n brought up  in  Pune , Maharastra !!!!

Ginny : nahii (  yells n gets up)
Raashi ( shocked n gets up  ) kya hua ginny ??
Ginny : ( scared n cries ) maine bahut bhayanak sapna dekha raashi!!
Raashi (relaxed) ginny , sapne toh sapne hote woh haqeeqat nahi bante ...( calming ginny)
Ginny : par raashi ...
Raashi ( cuts in & says ) par var kuch nahi ,kal school start ho raha hain , tum chilaogi toh raavi di ki beauty sleep disturb ho jayegi ( sarcastically smirking at raavi who is in deep sleep )
Ginny : ( still tensed about the dream ) theek hai raashi ( n lies down)( still thinking about the dream )
Ginny :(whispering to herself) mere sapne mein woh log  kaun the !!!!!!!!

 In the morning
AHLUWALIAS HOUSE ., PUNE , MAHARASTRA 
Sweety : ( calling) rocky singh , rocky singh , kahan gaya yeh ladka?,Rocky :(arrogantly) mom  mein aapke aagey hoon (smilingly), Sweety : ( mocks rocky jokingly) hayye rocky , itna jaldi tayaar hogaya, waise ginny,raashi aur raavi tayaar hogaye kya?? ( saying sweetly)
Raashi : mamaiji ginny bathroom mein ek ghante se hai!!
Raavi: ( jokingly says)challo accha hain raashi jaldi tayaar hogayi !!!( raashi gives the sarcastic stare)
Sweety: waise ginny ek ghaante se bathroom  mein kya kar rahi hain ( asking  the kids )
Raashi-Raavi-Rocky: ( confused face say together ) pata nahii !!!
Sunny: mamiji ginny aa gayi !!
Ginny( looks tired)ma humein kaun drop karega ??
Lucky:(happily) ginny puttar main hoon na (smiles), Sweety : challo baccha party breakfast ready hain!!!!
everybody eats N says bye to sweety ., Sweety: bye bete ( smilingly) ( n thinks ) in baccho ki kisi ki nazar na lage ...

KING RANGERS SCHOOL , PUNE, MAHARASTRA  :
Raavi n Tia are talking n walking .

Raavi: i hope  mrs sethi ki class boring na ho!! ( says with a smile)

Tia: haan raavi ( smiles) .

  one boy is walking with books in his hands some older boy bumps into him  & the books fall with him on the floor .

  Small Boy: oye idiot dekh ke nahi chal sakta!!! (angrily to the Older Boy ) .
 Raavi  n Tia go towards the little boy to help him . Small Boy : oye idiot sorry bol dete (to the Older Boy) .

  Older Boy : ( back is towards raavi ) waving his hand (n leaves).

Raavi: stupid kahin ka . aggar mere samne aaya toh ( saying angrigly to the older boy ) .
 Tia: chod na raavi ( raavi is looking angrily at the older guy)
Raavi : aap theek ho ( to the small boy) ,Small Boy: haan mein theek hoon - thank you didi ( says to Raavi n Tia ) Raavi n Tia smile >>>>
Part 1 ends





Edited by lizzie1765 - 03 September 2012 at 11:17am

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
good start..but give update soon and do pm your buddies after update

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Liz, Its amazing, I didn't know u write SO WELL! Ginny's dream is something to look forward too. Who are those people who Ginny saw.

Wasie all kids in Sweety's house? Pinky is sleeping and relaxing in her own house na ROFL Anyway its an awesome Update.

Thanks for the PM and update soonish! U can make a PM list on Pg 1 along with index, with the link to the pg the chapters are!

Keep it up Lizzie! Big smile
-Ridz

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