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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AhsaanBaig94

Btw, is update main Raavi Rocky nahi the...Shocked I'm surprised.LOL

 arey haath paair todh  diyaROFLROFL unko rest diya thode dinno ke liye WinkROFL
wait ab rocky,raavi n sunny ka raaz bhi rehta hain WinkLOL
 chapter 9 lovely dolly track even they have track
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@lizzie,
Haan, unhe abhi door he rakhein... Unhe dekh dekh kar mein pakk gaya hun.LOL Ab padhna nahi chahta.D'oh
I want to see other characters, and you are doing a wonderful job.Thumbs Up
Kaash, aap Parvarrish ki Creative Head hoteen...ErmmEmbarrassedTongue

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AhsaanBaig94

@lizzie,
Haan, unhe abhi door he rakhein... Unhe dekh dekh kar mein pakk gaya hun.LOL Ab padhna nahi chahta.D'oh
I want to see other characters, and you are doing a wonderful job.Thumbs Up
Kaash, aap Parvarrish ki Creative Head hoteen...ErmmEmbarrassedTongue
 dont worry maine itna screen space ROFLrocky raavi ko itna nahin dya LOLWink
parvarish creative kaaash hoti LOLWinkLOL
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Chapter 9

itefaaq ya haqeeqat( part 2)


mr  khanna's home

 preety talking to dolly''

(INFO :preety is dolly's  older sister )

Preety (says) : pata nahi dolly ki tumne usse kyun pyaar aur shaddi kuyn  kiya??!! .  isse toh better  " WOH" tha !!!

Dolly : ( serious tone) preety di  lovely jaisa bhi who mera husband hain (sadly)toh kya hua lovely ke paas accha job nahi woh mujhse bahut pyaar karte hai aur woh mujhe acche se treat karte hain woh amit jeeju ke tarah bilkul nahin hain  !! !!

Preety : ( sad n says)dolly main tumhari bhalai keh rahi hoon , aagey tumhari marzi !!(n leaves  the khanna house angrily)

Lovely outside the house door hears this , preety  gives  him an ugly stare n leaves!!! '

lovely (smiles sadly n says ): mein tumhein bezzzat nahi karunga  dolly kal se hi ek acchi naukri dhoonunga !!(enters the house) '.

  

 

Scene shifts   

St xaviers school

Ginny is coming out of the girl toilet and going towards the school starirs the stairs are deserted she walks down 1 step when suddenly somebody pushes her down( that  somebody is nt shown )  the school stairs  ginny screams !!!!!!!

Ginny lands in somebodys arms ginny opens her eyes sees a 'BOY 'about her age she is in  his arms!!!

(gaurav - he is the same boy who was siting next to koel in the class when ginny had the mad woman dream )

Gaurav : ( says staring at her in the same position ) tum theek ho ??(coldily)

Ginny : ( staring at him )(says nicely) haan mein teek hoon thank you aggar tum nahi aate' even before she finishes her sentence he leaves !!!!!!

Ginny stands  there confused and Gaurav  smiles codily !!!

Sam n meenakshi come there >>>

Sam: Are you ok ginny ??

Meenakshi : kaun tha jisne tumhe dakha diya

Ginny : pata nahi minakshi ( still tinking about gaurav n his cold behavior )

Sam: ginny ??

Ginny : (wakes up from her thought)haan sam sorry main bas soch rahi thi kisne mujhe dakha diya ?? ( says wid a lie)

Minakshi  : Im sure woh koel hogi , aggar koel  hain main use chodungi nahi ( in anger )

 Sam : minakshi  is right koel ki toh mein band bajaunga ( says wid a naughty smile )

The school bell rings and all three of the leave ''

 

 Scene shifts ''

Antop hill police station , pune

Inspector vineet shinde talking to his junior in the police station

Constable mahatre :(says)sir aapko kya aisa lagta hain ki who ladke thein unhone janmooch ke unn dussre ladkon se fight kiya ??!!

Inspector shinde: (says rudely) tum kya kehne ki koshish kar rahein ho , baat ko gol gol 'gol gappe ki jaise mat karo

Constable mahatre : sorry sir , mujhe lagta hain ki who fight jamooch ki hui hain , pehle se hi plan kiya hoga

 

Inspector shinde : (thinks and says )hmm ho sakta hain mahatre , par mujhe ek baaqt ajeeb lagi ( says loudly sittinh in his chair )

Constable : ( curious) kya sir??!!

Inspector shinde : woh ladka kya naam tha !!??haan rehaan garewal kuch theek nahi laga mujhe !!

 Constable mahatre : haan sir who murga rehaan toh mujhe khatrnak pagal lagta hain !!!!

 Inspector shinde ( smiles with a nod and says ) : haan ek kaam karo mahatre uss rehaan pe har waqt nazar rakho mujhe iss rehaan murga murge pe zaara vishwaas nahin hain , par aksar jawani ye ladke kuch zyada bura kaam karte hain !!!!!!!!!!!!woh mugra rehaan zaroor chot pahuchage un ladkon pe ek aur  baat mahatre unn dusre ladke aur who 2 ladiyon pe bhi nazar rakho ,100%woh rehaan ladkiyon ko bhi takleef dega ( says with a worried look on his face )

 Constable mahatre : ok sir !!( salutes him )

Inspector shinde gives pictures of rocky , raavi , mohit, ayush ,gokul ,ginny, shivam and rehaan photos to mahatre

Scene ends on inspector shinde face !!!!!!

Xxx

 In the evening

 Palam hill caf ,6pm.

Gokul waiting for arjun in palam hill caf

Ajun comes'.. ( tall boy , fair skin and dak brown eyes )

Gokul ( says ) : kahan tha yaar ??

Arjun ( smiles and says)  sorry yaar (hides n says ) kuch zaroori kaam agagya tha par now im free ( smiles ) , Arjun ( says in his mind) : nahi mein gokul kuch nahi batayunga ki mein kis kaam ke liye gaya tha , yehi hi theek hain ' agar use sab pata chal gayya toh ??

Gokul : arjun ?? arjun (waving his hand in front arjun face) ,Arjun : (wakes up from his thought )sorry yaar !!

 Gokul : ok sorry vorry baad mein ek coffe ho jayeye ( wid a smile )

 Gokul gives the order to the waiter and the waiter leaves '.

Gokul : so pune wapas aane ka plan kab hua aur kaunsa school join kiya jhain ?? arjun actually dad ne kahan tha U.S. mein study kar ke  ki mom akeli ho gayyi india mein aur hamesha mom arjun arjun kehti hain toh moein ke liye wapa aya hoon . dad ne mera admission "Springdale School"mein kiya abhi tak naya  school accha hain nayye friends bhi banaye hain ( wid a smile )

 Gokul: that's nice arey apne nayye  friends se bhi milao ( teasingly)

Arjun : arey sahi time pe milaunga ( smiles but a tensed look onhis face  ) ,Arjun : toh tum batayo kya ho raha life mein ?? ( curious)

 Gokul : arey kuch nahi mom ki halat waise ki wasie hain aur shool toh school hain bas ( smiles sadily ) ( gokul and arjun are still talking , behind gokul seat a man is sitting facing towards the ortherside  talking on the phone /neither arjun or gokul can see him )

Man : haan sir aap kab aarahe ho ??!!

Sir ( unknown ) : abhi aa raha hoon waahi bethna!!!!!!! ( telling in a serious tone )

 Man : ok sir !!!

The "Sir" enters the caf and sits opposite the man, meanwhile gokul n arjun leave the caf

 Both the men start talking ''

 Outside the caf arjun and gokul are there they exchange numbers arjun leaves in an auto /gokul takes his mobile its not there he goes back to caf to search for his mobile !!!!!

Gokul enters when he sees two men (the same men who were siting behind hin and arjun ), gokul gets shocked !!!!!!!!!

 Gokul ( shocked ) : dad ( mr ritesh  jaiswal) , dad yahan kya kar rahein hain who toh London mein hain toh!!!!!!!! yahan kya kar rahein hain ye dusra aadmi kaun hain??!! ( curious)

Gokul dad ne mujhse jooth bola par kuyun ??!! ( confused and leaves in a despair mood)

Meanwhile in the ortheside of pune >>>>>

Raashi and sunny are in HUDA market  '.

Raashi : sunny tum ice creanm parlour mein abhi aa rahi hoon ek cheez mein bhoool gayyi buy karne ke kliye who men bas lekar aarahi hoon  kahin mat jaana sunny ok !!

Sunny ( worried n says ) ok raashi di

Raashi leaves to get the stuff she forgot to buy '

Rasshi enters the HUDA shop

 Raashi and the mysterious aurat in the same shop!!!!!!!!!!

raashi buys the stuff she forgot and is about to exit when she bumps into somebody !!!!!!!

Raashi: (says)  sorry!!! (stands up and looks up ) Kya taqdeer raashi aur uss aurat ko amne samne le ayeyegi!!!!!!!!! (  voice over says )

Scene freezes on raashi face !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Itefaaq ya haqeeqat episode part 2 ends ''''

Precap : mr ritesh jaiswal slaps gokul , rocky and ginny shocked !!!!!!!

 



Edited by lizzie1765 - 12 February 2013 at 1:24am

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Amazing Update.

Really loved the way u have incorporated all the characters. Gaurav. aah, new guy for ginny :P

Anyway, precap is sounding scary and bad, for what was the slap? Looking forward hun.

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Originally posted by -Ridzzi-

Amazing Update.

Really loved the way u have incorporated all the characters. Gaurav. aah, new guy for ginny :P

Anyway, precap is sounding scary and bad, for what was the slap? Looking forward hun.

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 yea gaurav personally i like his charcter you will see alot of gaurav EmbarrassedWink
 preety is mean but amit is downright digusting fellow  Confused
you will Winksoon know abt the slap Shocked
but raashi track coming soon she will end up inOuch
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Very good update lizzie.Clap Ohh!!! That's why you said to me ke, whether I liked the update or not?Shocked Gaurav, Ginny in his arms.Embarrassed BTW, Baaki ki story going brilliantly.Thumbs Up Interesting precap.Wink Update soon.Big smile

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Chapter 10

( toofan se pehle ye khamoshi >>) 


Dreadhun , india

The two ladies are packing their suitcase in the hotel

1st lady says/ vaishali  : kya mr rai hamein pune ya Mumbai milenge promilla  ( still packing her bag )

2nd lady says/ promilla  :  mr rai hamein pune mein milenge aur phir hamara kaam shuru !!! kaam aasan toh nahi hain par mushkill bhi nahi just wait n watch vaishali jab hamara kaam khatam hojagyga humein kitne paise milenge ( smiles with a wicked smile on her face >>>)


Scene shifts

The kapoor house

Nitin in his room when he sees gyanesh coming out of rehaan's room

Nitin calls out to gyanesh the servant

Gyanesh comes

Gyanesh : says haan nitin baba aap ko kuch chahiye

Nitin :kuch  nahi  chahiye gyanesh dada par aap rehaan ke room mein kyun gayye apko pata ki koi rehaan ke room pe jayye rehan ko pasand nahin hain (with a smile )

Gyanesh : ( smiles) nitin baba actually who rehaan dada ne hi mujhe ijazat di thi unko apna moblie phone repair ke  liye dena tha par maine har jagah dekha par unka mobile phone nahin mila mujhe

Nitin : confused pata nahi kaha hain  ye rehaan bhi na par don't  worry gyanesh dada lagta hain rehaan khud mobile phone repair karne gayya hoga

Gyanesh : theek hain nitin baba and he leaves

Nitin 's chacha hears this  outside in the corridor and has wicked smile on his face and says in his mind

Nitins chacha: says in his mind  nitin beta uss rehaan ka phone maine aise jagah  daala hain koi aur aur khud rehaan bhi nahin dhoond payega ( with a wicked smile on his face gooes away )

Mean while in the otherside of pune


HUDA Market shop.pune

Raashi stands up and "sorry aunty "and doesn't see anybody

Raashi : arey ye aunty kahan gayi ( looks confused )

Her mobile rings and she picks it up

Sunny is on the line

Sunny : hello raashi di aap kahan ho mein intezaar kar raha  hoon app kab aayogi

Raashi : sorry sunny , main abhi aarahi hoon

Sunny : ok

Rasshi keeps the phone and looks around just nods her with a smile  head and leaves

On the ortherside of the shop in a small alley the shadow man talk to the mysterious lady

Shadow guy  ( angrily ) kya kar rahi ho mana kiya hain ghar se bahar nikal ne ki

Mysterious lady : (confused n scared )  mein mein !!!

Shadow man disgusted

Shadow man (thinking in his mind ) aaj to baal bachey agar wo ladki iske samne atti toh kya kya hota who mein hi jaanta hoon

Gaurav hears this  conversation  from thre backside and leaves !!!!!!!!!!!



Scene shifts to the business man house

Businessa man sitinhg on the counch and is remembering

In blur white n black  flash back scenes

A man with his family is standing

The  man saying

Tum usse nahi leke ja sakte ho kyunki who idhaar nahi hain

Young man

Main use le jayounga aur who bhi aap sabke  nazaron se

Papaji a voice says and all them turn around and see

Another young man and a young woman in married clothes

The other young mans says hesistantly

Papji humne shaadi kar li all of them  are shocked

Flashback ends

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Businessman says mein tumne nahi chodunga ( angrily) dials a number on his cellphone says

Businessman : kaam  shuru karo ( in an angry mood )

Voice : ok boss !!!!

Business man open the cupboard  and says looking at the big photoframe ( not shown to us)

Business man : kaun keh sakta tha ki hum pakke dost nahi par  balki pake bhai  jaise the ( says in sad tone but is also  angry )

And hits his hand on the desk

 

Jaiswals house , pune

Mr ritesh jaiswal at home , in the other room mukul/sunny n ginny are playing and talking

Mr ritesh talking to a client on the phone

Mr ritesh : haan mr mittal jo iss haft eke profit 60%hamare companyne  kitna munaafa kiya aur aapne bhi mr mittal ( talking happily).

Mr mittal : party toh banti mr jaiswal ( happily says on the otherside off the line )

Mr jaiswal : ok and keeps the phone when the doorbell rings

Ginny comes out

Ginny : uncle mein door khol deti hoon ( smiles ) ginny opens the door its rocky

Mr jaiswal : rocky beta gokul kya tumahare saath hain

Rocky : nahi uncle uska phone bhi try kar raha hoon par lagta switch off hain (confused)

Mr jaiswal : ok ( worried )

Mukul n sunny also confused

Suddenly somebody enters the jaiswal house , its gokul he is angry and has something in his hand ( ginny , mukul,rocky,sunnya nd mr jaiswal turn around to see gokul standing angrily there )

Rocky:  says arey gokul where were you tum kahan the  yaar aur tumhara cell bhi off tha ( enquires) aur ye tumahara hatth mein kya hain ( confused )

Gokul : smilies sylily sorry rocky par mein apne dad ka asli karname sun ke aur dekh ke ayya hoom!!!

Everybody shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Rocky :  kya matlab gokul , tum anpe dad ke bare mein aisa kun bol rahe ho!!

Gokul : angry job bol raha hoon sach bol raha hoon!!!!!!!(angrily says )

Mr jaiswal :(angry ) kya bakwas keh rahe ho gokul!!!!

Gokul : yeh koi bakwaas nahi hain  mr ritesh jaiswal jane mane business man bribe lete hain aur who  bhi politician seh !!!

Rocky n ginny ( together say ) whaat??

Ginny: (calmily) jaroor koi galat phemi hain gokul bhaiya uncle aisa kucch nahi  kar saakte!!

Gokul ( smile slyiliy to his dad )  trust me ginny who bahut kar sakte ,dad ye dekhe and throws the pictures!!!!!

Everybody see the picture and are shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Gokul : dekh liya aap sab ne ( shouting )

Mere dad ek baade nikamme hain woh guss khatte hain!!!!!!

Mr jaiswal : ( angrily) gokul and slaps gokul hard

(Ginny rocky sunny n mukul all shocked )

Tum doosron kei baat seh  apne papa pe  shak kar rahe hoo ( says angrily )

 Gokul in  tears

 Gokul : mein sach bol raha!!!!

 saying this gokul angrily runs out of the house is still running  angrily on the road

Rocky goes after gokul while ginny wipes away mukul tears and mr jaiswal goes to his room and closes door with a bang)

Rocky on the road shouting

Rocky : gokul gokul yaar ruk gokul !!!!!!!!!

Episode ends on rocky's worried face ''''.



Precap : promo 2

Raashi in the hospital '' doctor says khoon zyada behe gaya hain aap jald  hi ab negative blood ka imtezaa kaare ''''''. warna raashi coma mein challi jayegi >>>>>>>>

Family members shocked '''''''

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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