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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Wow! Lizzie... Very good update.Clap
Precap, Ginny track coming.Dancing

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AhsaanBaig94

Wow! Lizzie... Very good update.Clap
Precap, Ginny track coming.Dancing
thanx Wink
 haan ginny track coming soonEmbarrassedWink . i said all the kids have tracks Embarrassed

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@lizzie,
You are welcome.
Good.Tongue
I wonder if, Parvarrish CV's were like you.LOL
Anyways,
Update soon.Smile

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AhsaanBaig94

@lizzie,
You are welcome.
Good.Tongue
I wonder if, Parvarrish CV's were like you.LOL
Anyways,
Update soon.Smile
 arey cvsLOL dont have amazing imagination Wink like me haan nahi toh ROFL

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 2:16pm | IP Logged

Chapter 8

Itefaaq ya Haqeeqat(part1)

Pune ,maharastra

Ahluwalia house

Sunday morning '..

Ginny searching for her mobile  in her room

Ginny : kahan rakh diya phone maine ( saying loudly ) n then remembers that she  kept her phone in the black bag!1

Ginny : ( laugh n says ):  main bhi na !!!

Ginny opens the black bag and the silver box rolls out she rememebers the silver box from the previous night

Ginny : arey ye box ke bare mein toh bhool hi gayyai (think n says loudly )

Raashi  says"  ginny "  in the hallways room( rasshi  doesn't see the silver box or sees ginny hiding  the box but has doubt on ginny)and ginny hides the silver  box underneath the bed '..

And turns around!!!

Raashi is at the door and looking at her suspiciously !!!

Raashi ( says in her mind ) zaroor ginny mujh se kuch chupa rahi hain  par kya ( confused )ginny:rasshi tum idhar ?? (says worriedly)

Raashi ( smiles n says) mausji bula rahi hain sabko !!

Ginny ( smiles) ok  and leaves the room wid rasshi but ginny stops one last time to see but '.

Raashi: ginny kya hua ?? ( confused as ever)

Ginny : kuch nahi ( smiles n both the girls leave the room )

After they leave,

The silver  box is shown underneath the bed.!!! ''

Scene shifts '

Metro enclave , Pune

Gokul Jaiswal's House

gokul lying on the bed thinking about the previous night

gokul : mujhe usse dur rahana padega!!!! ( says loudly n sadily )

phone rings '

gokul  picks up thephone

arjun : gokul its me arjun remember!!!

gokul : arjun ??

arjun : tumahra child hood friend arey chuddy buddy yaar ( says smilingly)

gokul: oh haaan arjun how can I forget toh dude ab tum kaha ho

arjun : mein pune mein hoon lets meet up yaar after school on Monday 6pm

gokul : ok palam hill caf mein milte  hain

arjun : ok sounds good ( somebody calls arjun )

arjun : ok koi bula raha hain bye ( smiles n says )

gokul ( smiles) ok bye  aand keeps the phone down..

That Sunday evening '..

Mystery Business man House '

business man talking to somebody on the phone...

business man : sab kaam hogaya!!

voice : haan sab kaam hogaya par ek mushkil hain!!

busineesman : mushkil kaunsi mushkil  hain (angrily)

voice : ( hesitates) n says usse hamare plan ke bare mein sab kuch pata chal gaya

business man : koi baat nahi  uska bhi mein imtezaam kar lunga par hamein plan ko thoda change karegege !!!(says wid an evil smile )

business man tells the voice the new plan!!!!

voice :  aap ka kaam ho jayega SARKAR !!!!!

businessman : good very very good ( smiles evily ) and keeps the phone down

business man : says loudly angrilgly  ab dekhta  hoon kaun bachayega un logon ko ( says laughing eviliy ''''''''')

scene freezes

Monday morning

St xaviers school '.

Ginny is talking to Anushka Shah her classmate n friend

Anushka :  (says) koel na itni badi jealous bug hain ki mein class president ban rahi hoon aur who sabko  keh rahi thi ki usne anushka ko jeetaya hain !!! can you believe it  (says with a smirk smile )

Ginny ( smiles n says ) : anu tumhein pata hain koel kaisi hai toh forget about her yaar

Anushuka :  pata nahi ginny tum koel ko kaise tolerate karti hoon ( says with a naughty smile ) anyways im sure ki tum ( ginny) hi treasurer iss saal banogi  ( says wid a smile )

A girl comes n says

Girl 1 : anushka mrs sethi bula rahi hain ( leaves)

Anushka : ok ginny bye ( ginny also says bye n leave s for her next class )'.

Sringdales School,Pune

( Info : Reehan and nitin dad are the same but rehaan is step son of mr kapoor

Rehan kept his dead  father s surname mr kapoor didn't have any objection  to this either )

Rehan garewal in school

Reahan is talking to shivam in boys locker room...

Rehaan : un ladko ki life meine destroy nahi kiya to mera naam rehan garewal nahin hain!!! ( says angrily punches the bench )

Shivam : par rehaan bro kya hua ( confused )

Rehaan tells shivam in flashback scenes ( black n white scenes ) where the police comes to  rehaans house and tells his mom and chacha (Mr kapoor's brother )about the big fight !!!

Rehans mom cries and tells the police that rehaan will say sorry to those boys who got hurt  the police give rehan 1st warning , after the police goes away . rehan tells his mom it wasn't on purpose but his mom doesn't hear him the chacha slaps him and says tumse bada jhoot  toh koi bol hi nahi sakta!!!!!!!

The chacha tells him that that rehan will apologise to each n every person who got hurt by going to go their home .Rehaan gets angry!!!!!!!!!!

His mom tells the chacha that he will do exactly what you says and his mom leaves in despair!!

Rehaan : mein un ladkon  ko chodunga nahin mom ke aagey mujhe bezaat kiya mujhe ,mom mujhse nazra hain unki wajah se  , I wont leaves those boys !!!!! (angrily hits the wall blood drips from his right hand )

Shivam gets shocked n says in his mind : tum sahi keh rahe ho  rehann  bro un ladkon  se mujhe bhi  badlaa lena!!!!!!!

Shivam : im with you rehann bro kya karna padega ??( serious tone )

Rehaan tells shivam about his new scheming plan (wid an evil smile)

 

Mean while st  Xavier school

 Ginny is coming out of the girl's  toilet and going towards the school stairs, the stairs are deserted she walks down 1 step when suddenly somebody pushes her down( that  somebody is nt shown )  the school stairs  ginny screams !!!!!!!

Episode ends

Precap : raashi in  HUDA shop the mysterious aurat (who was given  soup in intezaar episode) also in the same shop !!!!!!

Kya taqdeer raashi aur uss aurat ko amne samne le ayeyegi!!!!!!!!! (  voice over says )

Chapter intefaaq ya haqeeqat part 1 ends ''''''''''..

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by lizzie1765 - 08 February 2013 at 2:18pm

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AMAZINGGG UPDATE!

I loved the way u've written. Lovely. Really scared about the last part, hope ginny is safe yaar.

Precap is also nice, Looking foward for the next part.

Keep it up.

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Excellent update and well written, lizzie.Clap
I wonder, what's inside that silver box?
Ginny ke paas phone? Show mein toh Sweety ne le liya hai na.LOL
Jasoosni Raashi.LOL
I'm looking forward for that Business man and Rehan and Shivam's plan, it's not looking good.Shocked
And the last part, bechaari Ginny.Cry Us Koel ne he dhakka diya hoga.Angry I hope, She'll be okay.Tongue

At last, precap, I am thinking of Raashi and that Aurat's relation, and loved the voice over.TongueLOL In the end, brilliant update.Thumbs Up Update soon.Smile

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Btw, is update main Raavi Rocky nahi the...Shocked I'm surprised.LOL

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