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Posted: 11 years ago
Very good update lizzie.πŸ‘ Ohh!!! That's why you said to me ke, whether I liked the update or not?😲 Gaurav, Ginny in his arms.😳 BTW, Baaki ki story going brilliantly.πŸ‘πŸΌ Interesting precap.πŸ˜‰ Update soon.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 10

( toofan se pehle ye khamoshi >>) 


Dreadhun , india

The two ladies are packing their suitcase in the hotel

1st lady says/ vaishali  : kya mr rai hamein pune ya Mumbai milenge promilla  ( still packing her bag )

2nd lady says/ promilla  :  mr rai hamein pune mein milenge aur phir hamara kaam shuru !!! kaam aasan toh nahi hain par mushkill bhi nahi just wait n watch vaishali jab hamara kaam khatam hojagyga humein kitne paise milenge ( smiles with a wicked smile on her face >>>)


Scene shifts

The kapoor house

Nitin in his room when he sees gyanesh coming out of rehaan's room

Nitin calls out to gyanesh the servant

Gyanesh comes

Gyanesh : says haan nitin baba aap ko kuch chahiye

Nitin :kuch  nahi  chahiye gyanesh dada par aap rehaan ke room mein kyun gayye apko pata ki koi rehaan ke room pe jayye rehan ko pasand nahin hain (with a smile )

Gyanesh : ( smiles) nitin baba actually who rehaan dada ne hi mujhe ijazat di thi unko apna moblie phone repair ke  liye dena tha par maine har jagah dekha par unka mobile phone nahin mila mujhe

Nitin : confused pata nahi kaha hain  ye rehaan bhi na par don't  worry gyanesh dada lagta hain rehaan khud mobile phone repair karne gayya hoga

Gyanesh : theek hain nitin baba and he leaves

Nitin 's chacha hears this  outside in the corridor and has wicked smile on his face and says in his mind

Nitins chacha: says in his mind  nitin beta uss rehaan ka phone maine aise jagah  daala hain koi aur aur khud rehaan bhi nahin dhoond payega ( with a wicked smile on his face gooes away )

Mean while in the otherside of pune


HUDA Market shop.pune

Raashi stands up and "sorry aunty "and doesn't see anybody

Raashi : arey ye aunty kahan gayi ( looks confused )

Her mobile rings and she picks it up

Sunny is on the line

Sunny : hello raashi di aap kahan ho mein intezaar kar raha  hoon app kab aayogi

Raashi : sorry sunny , main abhi aarahi hoon

Sunny : ok

Rasshi keeps the phone and looks around just nods her with a smile  head and leaves

On the ortherside of the shop in a small alley the shadow man talk to the mysterious lady

Shadow guy  ( angrily ) kya kar rahi ho mana kiya hain ghar se bahar nikal ne ki

Mysterious lady : (confused n scared )  mein mein !!!

Shadow man disgusted

Shadow man (thinking in his mind ) aaj to baal bachey agar wo ladki iske samne atti toh kya kya hota who mein hi jaanta hoon

Gaurav hears this  conversation  from thre backside and leaves !!!!!!!!!!!



Scene shifts to the business man house

Businessa man sitinhg on the counch and is remembering

In blur white n black  flash back scenes

A man with his family is standing

The  man saying

Tum usse nahi leke ja sakte ho kyunki who idhaar nahi hain

Young man

Main use le jayounga aur who bhi aap sabke  nazaron se

Papaji a voice says and all them turn around and see

Another young man and a young woman in married clothes

The other young mans says hesistantly

Papji humne shaadi kar li all of them  are shocked

Flashback ends

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Businessman says mein tumne nahi chodunga ( angrily) dials a number on his cellphone says

Businessman : kaam  shuru karo ( in an angry mood )

Voice : ok boss !!!!

Business man open the cupboard  and says looking at the big photoframe ( not shown to us)

Business man : kaun keh sakta tha ki hum pakke dost nahi par  balki pake bhai  jaise the ( says in sad tone but is also  angry )

And hits his hand on the desk

 

Jaiswals house , pune

Mr ritesh jaiswal at home , in the other room mukul/sunny n ginny are playing and talking

Mr ritesh talking to a client on the phone

Mr ritesh : haan mr mittal jo iss haft eke profit 60%hamare companyne  kitna munaafa kiya aur aapne bhi mr mittal ( talking happily).

Mr mittal : party toh banti mr jaiswal ( happily says on the otherside off the line )

Mr jaiswal : ok and keeps the phone when the doorbell rings

Ginny comes out

Ginny : uncle mein door khol deti hoon ( smiles ) ginny opens the door its rocky

Mr jaiswal : rocky beta gokul kya tumahare saath hain

Rocky : nahi uncle uska phone bhi try kar raha hoon par lagta switch off hain (confused)

Mr jaiswal : ok ( worried )

Mukul n sunny also confused

Suddenly somebody enters the jaiswal house , its gokul he is angry and has something in his hand ( ginny , mukul,rocky,sunnya nd mr jaiswal turn around to see gokul standing angrily there )

Rocky:  says arey gokul where were you tum kahan the  yaar aur tumhara cell bhi off tha ( enquires) aur ye tumahara hatth mein kya hain ( confused )

Gokul : smilies sylily sorry rocky par mein apne dad ka asli karname sun ke aur dekh ke ayya hoom!!!

Everybody shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Rocky :  kya matlab gokul , tum anpe dad ke bare mein aisa kun bol rahe ho!!

Gokul : angry job bol raha hoon sach bol raha hoon!!!!!!!(angrily says )

Mr jaiswal :(angry ) kya bakwas keh rahe ho gokul!!!!

Gokul : yeh koi bakwaas nahi hain  mr ritesh jaiswal jane mane business man bribe lete hain aur who  bhi politician seh !!!

Rocky n ginny ( together say ) whaat??

Ginny: (calmily) jaroor koi galat phemi hain gokul bhaiya uncle aisa kucch nahi  kar saakte!!

Gokul ( smile slyiliy to his dad )  trust me ginny who bahut kar sakte ,dad ye dekhe and throws the pictures!!!!!

Everybody see the picture and are shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Gokul : dekh liya aap sab ne ( shouting )

Mere dad ek baade nikamme hain woh guss khatte hain!!!!!!

Mr jaiswal : ( angrily) gokul and slaps gokul hard

(Ginny rocky sunny n mukul all shocked )

Tum doosron kei baat seh  apne papa pe  shak kar rahe hoo ( says angrily )

 Gokul in  tears

 Gokul : mein sach bol raha!!!!

 saying this gokul angrily runs out of the house is still running  angrily on the road

Rocky goes after gokul while ginny wipes away mukul tears and mr jaiswal goes to his room and closes door with a bang)

Rocky on the road shouting

Rocky : gokul gokul yaar ruk gokul !!!!!!!!!

Episode ends on rocky's worried face ''''.



Precap : promo 2

Raashi in the hospital '' doctor says khoon zyada behe gaya hain aap jald  hi ab negative blood ka imtezaa kaare ''''''. warna raashi coma mein challi jayegi >>>>>>>>

Family members shocked '''''''

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by lizzie1765 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very good update lizzie.πŸ‘
I wonder what those two Aunties gonna do.πŸ€” And what's their plan.😲
And looking forward to Rehaan and co. plan too.
Raashi ka accident hone wala hai?😲 Anyways, excellent update. Waiting for the mahaepisode.πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry guys for the  very late update  internet was down 😑

Chapter 11

 ( Pareshaan )


 Kapoor House


 Vineet kapoor ( nitin chacha  and nitin fathers older brother ) talking on the phone to his son akash  kapoor  who is 28 years old nitin's  older cousin brother )

 Vineet chacha : akash  beta tum kab aa rahe ho beta u.k. se pata hain ki wahan k business improvemenyt ho gayyyi  hain

 Akash ( on the orther line ) : haan dad sab ttheek hain aap ye batayo nitin aur rehaan kaise hain

 Vineet chahcha : ( hearing rehaans name he smirks and says ) : haan beta nitin toh theek hain new school join kiya hain

chote ( nintin dad ) ne ye bada accha decision lliya hain nitin puttar ko doosre school mein daalne ko

 Vineet chacha : so tum kab aa rahe ho  india wapas

 Akash : dad thode legal documents sign karna hain and then straight back to india mom kaisi hain

 Vineet chacha : tumhe bahut mis kar rahi

 Akash  : ok dad meeting ke liye jana hain india aake apko sab business ke bare mein bata hoon bye

Vinnet :ok  bye beta and keeps the phone down n smiles

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Meanwhile on the road

 Gokul is still running its is night he stops next to some side of the road the  side of the road is deserted

 He rememebers what happens back inb his house and cries angrigly 

 In flashback>>>>>>>>>>>>

  its revealed how a stranger calls gokul on his mobile phone tells him a shocking news  gokul goes  to meet that stranger when he reaches  that deserted place the stranger is not there but there is a envelope on the envelope its written GOKUL JAISWAL on it

 He opens the enevelope and gets shocked

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

Rocky sees gokul sitting on the otherside of the road on a big slab stone

Rocky comes to gokul where he is sitting

Rocky : gokul yaar tum kitna bhagogey marathon mein participate karna hain ( teasingly)

Gokul doesn't say anything

Rocky : I know gokul tum upset ho yaar but im sure uncle aisa kuch nahi kar saakte

Uss picture mein kyaproof hain ki uncle bribe le rahe thein aur agar who le rahe the inmn sure kuch mmajboori mein rahe the

Rocky : theek hain gokul tum aur mukul mere saath hamare ghar mein raho 10 days ke liye uss time hum pata lagayenge ki why uncle took the bribe

 Gokul nods his  head and they leave for gokuls home to pick up ginny sunny and mukul …………

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Ahluwalia House

 Raavi and sweety talking to mrs dave neighbor

Mrs dave says : sweety apko pata hain crime ktna zyada ho gaya hain

Sweety : haan mrs dave

 Raavi goes into the kitchen to get biscuits

 Raavi in kitchen

 She remembers ginny telling her about the silver box

 Suddenly her mobile rings

 Its deepika raavis friend on the other line

 Deeipka says : hey raavi 10 deys ke baad mere farmhouse pe party don't forget yaar ( smilingly)

Raavi : sure deepika hum sab aayengey( smiles n says ) don't wory and hangs up

 Raavi says to herself mujhe silware shop jaana chahiye warne uss box ka raaz kabhi nahi pata chalega ( says thinking)& goes out side ……

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 Jaiswals House

 Rocky and gokul enter the house

 Mr jaiswal with two suitcase in his hand

 Tells rocky

 Rocky beta mein 20 days ke liye Bangalore jaana hain  kya tum gokul and mukul ko apne ghar mein daal sakte ho

 Rocky : a little surprised says of course uncle ( with a smile on his face)

 And with that  mr jaiswal hugs mukul and leaves ……………………

Rocky tells gokul

That's great know we can get proof (gokul doesn't say anything but smiles sadily )

With that rocky , goukul , mukul, sunny and ginny leave for ahluwalias house ………….

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Pune Mental  Asylum

 A lperson screaming in her room

 Mein use mar doongi ( laughing hysterically )

(the room not shown )

two ward males speaking

 ward new  man 1 says : ye kaun hain

 ward man2 : says : pata nahi ye paagal aurat ko kya problem par doctor saab keh rahein ki isse koi khatranaak bimari hain >>>>>>

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 The Scene Shifts To Singapore

 a small little apartment

 jeet and pinki sleeping

piknki gets up to drink water she goes to kitchen but accidentley the glasss breaks

pinki shocked jeet goes  in the kitchen and sees the broken glass and pinki shocked &  nervaous

 pinki says ( to jeet ) kaanch ka tootna ye accha  shagun nahi hain jeet , kuch bura honealla hain ( says with fear )

jeet says : pinki  bas kaanch toota hain kuch boora nahin hoga ( says assuringly )

 the episode ends on pinkis  worried face ……>>>>>>>>>


 precap 1: ginny see ayush taking drugs😲 , mysterious  girl hugs shivamπŸ˜²πŸ˜• >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>



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Posted: 10 years ago
well what's FF ??! i'm still a newborn baby at IF!! 🀣Edited by PritamDas01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: PritamDas01

well what's FF ??! i'm still a newborn baby at IF!! 🀣


 its a fan fiction😳 you can write stories regarding your fav show the way you want want the show to be like πŸ˜›
 you have to read my ff from the beginning i hope you like it πŸ˜‰
 other forum shows also have ff 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
will read soon 😊


Thanks Lizee for the PM :)