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SS The way of Love..ch 27 pg 140 note pg 139 (Page 5)

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Precap:

B4 she could complete she collided against a hard chest..and soon saw herself on ground by a push from him.She didn't knew whether to scream/not n finally her brain decided to let out a scream ahhh...

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Hi Krishna...
Read ur new ss character sketch,prologue n now precap and its all seems to be very intresting...Uday Tara in love with each other..scary for ManVeerians...I'm very excited about this ss...so plz pm me...

SORRY for late commenting...

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Poojapange

Hi Krishna...
Read ur new ss character sketch,prologue n now precap and its all seems to be very intresting...Uday Tara in love each other..scary for ManVeerians...I'm very excited about this ss...so plz pm me...

SORRY for late commenting...
will surely pm u...Smile

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
                                           Chapter 1...Smile


Pride college of Bussiness Management''''''

She was holding a file in one hand and mobile in other hand and running as though on a race..She stopped in between adjusting her chappals'.Ye bhagwan ye heels bhi mujhe aaj hi pehnni thi'Jab bewakoofiyan karti hain toh sabkuch ek saat'..

'oh oh bhai sry sry main yahan keh rahi thi'so bhai hum kahan thi..haan aap chinda mat kijiye main waqt pe pohunch jaoongi'trust me'ab aap phone rakhiye aur mujhe baagne dijiye'.bhai aap bhi na main aur girna'impossible atleast not here maine apni zindagi ka 5 saal isi college main issi raaste se guzra hoon.Iss building ka har kona mujhe pehchanti hain'haan nahi toh'.k bi,take care,love u'.

B4 she could complete she collided with something hard and the very next second getting a sudden push she fall off to ground on her back..She raised her eyes to see what happened in a second just to see a person in black suit wearing a black goggles..She didn't know she was confused whether to scream/not'finally her brain decided to let out a scream of pain'.ahhh


She saw the pair of legs moving ahead of her without any expression.While a middle aged man let out his hand to help..She just smiled at his helping mentality and got up herself..Thankyou bhaiyya..anyways I hope it was ur boss..Say him ma sorry it was a mistake from my part..


Man replied back with a smile and nod..She again walked but this time slowly as her leg was bleeding a bit.But she knewed she has a long way to go n hence ignored her pain'.Jisne bhi ye back side door banvayi na use ek tight se hug dena chahiye'kya planning hain.Main bhi na kitni bhakti hoon'oh no iam late Babs rush or else briganza will eat u alive

 

Stage:

 

Briganza shouting at top of her voice and nw the topper of the college and also the whole University 'ofcourse aapsab ki sweetheart sister cum friend..girl with magical talent in all fields yes the one and only        Manyata Khanna'

She looked out through her big specs(murmuring) Nw where is she'.Manyata '.phirse late i won't spare u today'.

 

Iam here mam'..A voice came followed by a beautiful princess type girl wearing  white anarkali suit,open silky hair and a smile plastered in her rosy lips'

 

Briganza(passing a fake smile): Now I request our chief guest to hand over the trophy and certificate'

She went up to stage..(to herself)oh teri ye toh wohi hain jisse maine takraya'Kya bhagwan ji sari ghadbad cheesen ek din'not fair'

She reached near'Manyata (blabbering)ghabra mat ye expressionless khada hain chup chap jaa aur ek sorry kehke certificate leke wapas aa.

She received her certificate'Sir..iam sor'b4 she could complete he moved backward ignoring her..Manyata didn't understood what was happening soon she heard Briganza announcing her name to present annual report of college.Manyata back offed from her attempt to say sorry and went to mike point'.

Guys hi its my last turn to present this report and ur last turn to listen so pls be patient enough to give ur ears a try..

 

She soon started off and gave up a beautiful presentation that all were dumbstruck '

After the function got over outside'

A group of students was standing .

Manya pls yar ruk jao na.Tumhare bina kal ki party mein bilkul bhi maza nahi ayega'pls ruk jao'.

Nahi rahul u knw na I can't ..My bro will kill me its his marriage and u knw iam the elder daughter of family I do have a lot of responsibility..Infact bhai already sent me car and driver so as  to avoid any chance of getting late..so really sorry bi .

Shristi(hugging) will miss u manya'

Will miss u all guys and do ring me for any help.

All: Bi manya'

     Bi guys'.

She went up to car and sat down'Ramesh khakha chale its already late'

Ramesh(driver): jee babyji.

pls rush khakha..

When they were moving out suddenly a car was overtaking them and in the act the side glasses of both cars collided.Both drivers came out to say eachothers side. And accussing eachother..Seeing the fi8 would go long manya came out..

Ramesh khakha bas kijiye aur chaliye humme jaldi pahunchna hain..Bahisaab aapki car ki jo koi bhi nuksaan hui hain uski paise de dengi  main.

 

A voice came from inside the car..raghu its k come lets go..

Raghu obeyed his boss.Manyata looked behind to see the person bt the glass was pulled up and hence person was invisible..The other car soon rushed out of sight'

Just thn her phone ranged'

Manyata: oh no ramesh khakha chaliye..picking the call.Iam already on the way sweety will reach soonbaby so just chill'.


To be continued...

I hope u enjoyed it anyways thanks for reading...leave back ur suggestions n do hit like...Smile



Edited by snowdream - 26 August 2012 at 7:31am

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
lovely so manyata is overall the best student of college and the man sh meet almost 3 times without talking to is uday right i loved this update beautifully written please update soon and thanks krishna for the pmBig smile

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Posted: 26 August 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
MY GOD!! Zor ka jhatka zoron se laga, aur woh bhi do do baar!!!!LOL
Manyata must have thought she hit a wall or something!!LOL God knows how she's surviving the impact. I would have DIED from such a collision, or even if I didn't, I surely would have after seeing him in dark glasses!!Embarrassed
Gr8 updateStar...but wanted Uday to at least give Manyata a slight acknowledgement, like nodding, after all, she's the topper of the year!! Big smile
 
Thanks 4 the pm..waiting 4 ur next update...Smile 

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