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Part 14-Another half of this part(Concept by Zariyat and written by Aishwariya)

Rohan : Ab mai chalta hu.
Yashvardhan was looking at the pictures.
Yashvardhan : Wait iss picture mei Gautam ne Shikha ko uthaya kyun hai?(Looking at the picture were Gautam picked Shikha)
Rohan : Vo dono cabin mei the iss liye mujhe nehi pata.
Yash : Aur iss picture mei Gautam Shikha ko ring kyun pahna raha hai?(Looking at the picture in which Shikha wearing ring by Gautam)
Rohan : Ap mujhe sirf unki activities ke paise dete hai agar vo kyun kya karte hai janna chahte hai to detective hire kar lijiye!
Rohan leaves Yashvardhan Mansion.
Police Station
Gautam enters the police station.Everubody are sitting in their seats.
Gautam : Are kya hua?Tum sab aise kyun udas bathe ho?
Aditya : To aur kya kare kuch kam hi nehi hai!
Gautam : Kam nehi hai iss ka matlab ye to nehi ki udas bethe raho!
Vikas : To ap hi bataye kya kare?
Shaurya : Gautam kaha se a rahe ho?
Gautam : Shikha ko usske office chod ke a raha hu!
Anand : Isi liye to ap muskura rahe ho.
ACP Karanveer enters.Everyone jumped from their seats and gave salute to him.
ACP : Tum logo ko kya hua?Koi kam nehi hai?
Chandan : Nehi sir.Lagta hai Mumbai mei crimes kam ho gaya hai.
Gautam : Achcha hi to hai.Hume kam zaada nehi hai.
Shaurya : Sir ab Sonia kaisi hai?
ACP : Thik hai.Achcha mai mere cabin mei jata hu.
ACP left for his cabin.
Gautam to Shaurya : Tujhe bari chinta ho rahi hai Sonia ki?
Shaurya : Haan to?
Gautam : To?To kuch nehi bete mujhe sab samaj mei ata hai!(teasing)
Shaurya : Kya?Kya samaj mei ata hai?
Gautam : Kuch nehi.Abhigyan nehi aya abhi tak?
Shaurya : Nehi pata nehi kab ayega.

To be continued...

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Lovely concept was going awsome jo bhi kuch lag raha tha aage hoga uska ulta ho raha very good ZARI and AISH

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If any of you want to give suggestions then PM me your ideas!!
Thank you
Zariyat

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Ha! So it was Rohan! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!

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Part 15(Concept by Zariyat and written by Aishwariya)

Shikha's office
12:45pm
Receptionist : Rohan sir ne tumhe andar bulaya hai.
Rohan : Thik hai.
Rohan goes to sir's room(the man who took Shikha's interview).
Rohan : Sir apne bulaya.
Man : Haan.Yashvardhan ka kam kaisa chal raha hai?
Rohan : Achcha chal raha hai.Agar vo apke dost nehi hote to mai unka kam kabhi nehi karta.
Man : Thank you mere dost ko help karne ke liye.
Rohan : Sir apka kam karne mei mujhe khushi hogi.Aur koi kam ho to batana.
Man : Zarur.Tumhi to ek ho jisspe mai varosa kar sakta hu.
Rohan : Thank you sir.
Rohan leaves the cabin.
At night
Gautam , Shikha and the two house owners are having dinner.Door bell rings.
Gautam : Mai dekhta hu.
Gautam opens the door.A man is standing.The man gives Gautam an envelope and left without saying anything.Shikha comes to see.
Shikha : Kya hua Gautam?
Gautam : Pata nehi.Ek admi aya aur ye de kar chala gaya.
Shikha : Khol ke dekho kya hai.
Gautam : Haan.
Gautam opens the envelope.Gautam and Shikha were shocked!There were the pictures of  yesterday.
Gautam : Ye kaha se ayi?
Shikha : Mujhe bhi nehi pata.Kisne khichi ye photographs.
House owner from dining table : Kya hua?Kon hai?
Gautam : Kuch nehi aunty!Pata punch ne aya tha!
Gautam : Ye baad mei sochenge.(puts the envelope in his pocket.Ab chalo.
Shikha : Haan.
They went inside.
After dinner
Shikha's room
Gautam and Shikha are sitting and thinking about the photographs.
Shikha in mind : Ab mujhe Gautam ko sab batana padhega.
Shikha told everything to Gautam.
Gautam : Ye tumne mujhe pehle kyun nehi bataya?
Shikha : Maine socha tum pareshaan ho jaoge iss liye.Ab kya kare?
Gautam : Ab...mai kal station jake tumhare protection ka intezam karta hu.Ab so jao.
Shikha : Usski zarurat kya hai?
Gautam : Zarurat hai.Tum ab mere bate sunogi.Ab soo jao.Good night.
Shikha : Okay.Good night.I love you.
Gautam : I love you too.(kissed in Shikha's forehead).Ab soo jao.
Gautam left Shikha's room.

To be continued...

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