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Sandy-Naz

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice Ff.thanks for the Pm..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome FF..👏

Con sooon..

And add me In PM list😳

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Aishwariya Mannan Dutta

@GauShi_MadHas

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Part 8(Concept by Zari and written by Aishwariya)

Police Station

Gautam enters.He walks to his cabin and picks up a file.Vikas comes.

Vikas : Sir(salute).Sir ACP sir aj nehi ane wale.

Gautam : Kyu?Kal bhi nehi aye the.hua kya hai?

Vikas : Pata nehi.

Another scene

Shikha is waiting.A receptionist calls her.

Receptionist : Ab ap jayiye.

Shikha goes to a cabin.Shikha enters.

Man : Sit.

Shikha sat on a chair.

Man : Name?

Shikha : Shikha Yashvardhan.

Man : Shikha Yashvardhan?!!The job is yours.Aj se hi kam shuru karo.Now leave!

Shikha : Okay.

Shikha left the room.

Shikha in mind : Ajib baat hai.Mera naam shunke itna chok kyu gaya?Naam shunke job de diya!Ajib admi hai.Gautam ko batana padhega.

Shikha takes out her phone and calls Gautam.

On phone

Gautam : Hello Shikha.Bolo.

Shikha : Mai tumhare saath nehi jaa paungi.Ajse hi kam shuru karne ko kaha hai.

Gautam : Phir thik hai.Mai tumhe shaam ko pick karne aa jaunga.

Shikha : Thik hai.Bye.

Gautam : Bye.

Inside the cabin

The man calls someone.He called Yashvardhan.

On phone

Yashvardhan : Hello.Tumne mujhe kyu phone diya?

Man : Shikha yaha ayi thi!

Yash : Shikha ayi thi?Par kyu?

Man : Job ke liye.Maine use job de diya.

Yash : Thik hai.

To be continued...

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Aishwariya Mannan Dutta

@GauShi_MadHas

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Part 9(Concept by Zari and written by Aishwariya)

Police Station

12:00pm

Gautam walks to Abhigyan and Shaurya.

Gautam : Mujhe kahi jana hai.

Abhigyan : Thik hai.

Gautam leaves.

After 15mins

Gautam stops his jeep infront of a jewelry shop.he got down and went into the shop.

Shopkeeper : Hello.Mai apki kya madat kar sakta hu?

Gautam : Mujhe kuch achche diamond rings dikhayiye.

Shopkeeper : Diamond rings.Thik hai.

Shopkeeper takes out a box which had beautiful diamond rings.He keeps that box in the table.

Shopkeeper : Ye dekhiye best rings.

Gautam looks at all the rings.

After 5mins

Shopkeeper : Ap pehle insaan hai jo itna time laga rahe hai ek ring choose karne ke liye.

Gautam : Kya karu ek bohot hi special insaan ke liye ring lena hai.Haan mil gaya!(picks out a beautiful ring and gives it to the shopkeeper)

Shopkeeper : Vah!!Apki choice bohot hi achchi hai.Mai abhi pack kar deta hu.

Shopkeeper packs the ring and gave it to Gautam.Gautam left for police station in his car.

To be continued...

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Udhay only

@Udhay

IF-Stunnerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Very interesting guys!! Keep up the good work!! 👍🏼

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Aishwariya Mannan Dutta

@GauShi_MadHas

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Part 10(Concept by Zari and written by Aishwariya)

Office of Shikha

Shikha is working in her cabin.Someone knocks the door.

Shikha : Yes?

A boy entered.

Boy : Hi.

Shikha : Hi.Who are you?

Boy : Oh.Hi.I am Rohan.Your colleague.Mai bhi yahi kam karta hu.

Shikha : Oh.Nice to meet you.I am Shikha.

Rohan : Ap yaha nayi hai to mai apse milne chala aya.Vo...ek baat punch na tha.Can i ask?

Shikha : Ya sure.

Rohan : Vo.subah jo police officer apko chod ne aye the vo kaun hai?Apke husband?Ya apke boyfriend?

Shikha : No.Vo nato mere husband hai na mere boyfriend vo mere best friend hai.

Shikha takes her phone.

Rohan : Oo.

Shikha called Gautam.He was not picking his phone up.

Shikha : Are Gautam ka phone kyu nehi lag raha hai!

Rohan : Ye Gautam kaun hai?

Shikha : Jo mujhe chod ne ate hai.(busy in calling Gautam)

Shikha : Abhigyan ko phone karke dekhti hu.

Rohan interrupts.

Rohan : Aaa...ye Abhigyan kaun hai?

Shikha : Excuse me...apko mere bare mei itne sare chize janne ki kya zarurat hai?First answer me this question then i'll answer your questions.

Rohan : Vo...aise hi.Hum ek hi office mei kam karte hai.Iss liye.

Shikha : Oo...okay.Abhigyan mera ek aur best friend hai.Vo bhi police officer hai...agar ap mujhe aur bhi kuch sawal punch na chahte hai to ap continue kijiye.

Shikha was about to call Abhigyan.A mesaage came in Shikha's phone.It was from Gautam.

Message : Kya hua?Mujhe miss kar rahi ho?(Shikha smiles)

Rohan : Ek aur question...ap muskura kyu rahi hai?

Shikha : (stops smiling)Agar ap mujhe abhi ek aur sawal bhi punchte ho to mai abhi mere dono friends se kah kar apko jail bhej dungi(angry)!!

Rohan : Sorry sorry.Mai chalta hu.(left the room)

Shikha sends Gautam a reply.

Gautam and Shikha's conversation in messaging(Shikha was smiling while chating with Gautam)

Shikha : Kyu?Tumhe aisa kyu lag raha hai?

Gautam : Kyu ki tum mujhe phone de rahi thi.Kya hua?Kam nehi hai?

Shikha : Nehi.Kam to bohot hai par socha tumse thodi baat kar lu.Tumhe kam nehi hai?Aj koi case nehi aya?

Gautam : Aj koi case nehi aya iss liye hi to free hu.Lagta hai Mumbai mei crime kam ho gaye hai!

Shikha : Par mera kam khatam nehi hua hai.Tum free bathe raho aur mujhe kam karne do.

Gautam : Thik hai.Aj raat tumhe kahi le jana hai.Chalo gi?

Shikha : Kaha?

Gautam : Vo tumhe abhi nehi bataunga.

Shikha : Kyu?Mujhe kidnap karne ka irada hai?

Gautam : Vo to tumhe raat ko hi pata chale ga.

Shikha : Okay ab mujhe kam karne do.

Gautam : Okay.karo apna kam.

To be continued...

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Aishwariya Mannan Dutta

@GauShi_MadHas

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

10th part is very big bcz 8th and 9th part are very small!!

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Udhay only

@Udhay

IF-Stunnerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Very interesting one!! U came up with the 10th part so quickly!! Great!! Thanks a lot!! :)

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Misbah

@Misbah12

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Going awesome!!!! please continue!!!!

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Shreya

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 24

Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely. Do continue soon. 👏

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