Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

virman ss pyar aur dosti.. part 29 (LAST) updt - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wanna know d past.eagerly waiting 4 it.
amazing update...cont soon nd thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read both the parts.You are an awesome writer and you do know how to keep us hooked to ur wonderful  writing.🤗Loved both the parts❤️.Thanks for the pm yaar. Pls continue soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome girl loved it
oh k so may be evn manan loved manvi n so virat lost his friendship😲
cont soon eager to read more and thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome i loved it...pl updt next part soon...n pls dont forget to pm me...pls pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww that was soo sweet!!
Awesome!!!
Loved it!!!
But wat happened to manan!!
Ok any way continue soon
And thnx for the pm!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update:)
sorry 4 late comment...:(
pics were reallly cool:)
eagerly waiting 4 next update:)
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 3
virat  remembered about their first meeting and the following fight... it brought a smile on his face and he turned back to look at manvi sleeping peacefully with her hand on her stomach...
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virat saw manan taking manvi away  and he smiled... n then he said to himself "  stop it... stop smiling u idiot... she just fought with you in front of the whole college and you are staring and admiring her beauty..." virat went to the canteen and texted manan "m in canteen... come asap n dnt bring that bandriya with you..."
manan replied "okay bro... coming in 15 mins and dnt call her dat... "
virat texted " why...??? is she dat special to u...??"
manan replied " cmon... stop it ..."
virat  replied "okk... lols... come soon..."

it was already 20 mins but manan was still not there... 
virat : so at last u r here after 20 mins..
manan : yeah... 
virat : uss bandriya ki company chod de bhai... wo teri aadatein bigaad degi...
manan : hain...??? matlab...
virat : tu kaisa bhi ho par punctual tha yrr... par aaj tu 5 min late aaya hai...
manan : arrey wo main manvi k...
virat : dekha ussi ded futiya ne late karaya na
manan : virat... control yr... uska naam manvi h... manvi chaudhary...
virat : chaudhary... toh theek hai abse wo chaudhrain...
manan : tera kuch ni ho sakta...??? kya kaha h usne tjhko...??? peeche padh gya h us bechari ke...
virat : manan hosh mein aa yaar... wo bechari ni hai... pehli meeting me milke jaan gya hu k wo ek jungli billi hai... aur tu use ab tak pehchaan ni paa rha...
manan : waise tu usme itna intrested kyun lag rha hai...??
virat : pagal hai kya...??? main aur uss chaudhrain mein... meri next wali na sabse khoobsurat hogi dekh lio...
manan : haan haan... kyun nai... waise manvi bhi khoobsurat hai aur...
virat : aur thodi... nai puri pagal hai...
manan : waise tune notice kia k she didnt drool over u like every other girl of the college... kya baat hai, ni...???
virat : wohi toh... y didnt she..??
manan : kya...???
virat : arrey kuch ni... chal lets go for a game of pool...
manan :nahi yaar... wo actually mujhe manvi ko promise kia h for a movie today... uska mood kharab kar da na tune, iss liye...
virat : waah... ladki k milte hi dost ko bhool gya... ye hi thi teri dosti...
manan : gussa mat ho yaar... tu bhi chal na... we will sort everything between you two...
virat : tu force kar rha hai... sirf iss liye warna i am not intrested in that ded futiya...
manan : hehe... okkay then... tu car nikal, main manvi ko leke aat hoon...
virat : chalo gi... theek hai...

i know its a short update... but its difficult for me to write 3 stories together... so pls cooperate and plss like it...
guys tell me are you still interested in this ss and want me to continue or not... i feel may be bcos of time gap, u may hav lost interest in the ss 

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
continue and pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
So cute update.cont soon nd pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls pm me wn u strt nxt prt!! btw.luvd ur story!!