[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 9

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by bangalores


*sigh* been missing ur stories... and am i glad u started one * big smile... twirling with joy*
beautiful poem...
of course you always make me go fida over ur storis and this is no exception...
as always i cud see the frightened eyes of the little girl and her heart going bang bang each time he comes around...
the thrill of anticipation for the party now...same as the excitement of knowing something special  is going to happen  which geet must me feeling
oh ! no matter how many times u restart ur buddy list count me in always😃


You make me hide my face in my pillow and grin like an idiot😆
You are too sweet to tolerate my crap and say sweet things about them :)
Added you in my buddy list and btw belated happy birthday once again :)

Originally posted by Tyro


Congrats on the new SS...

loved the start...

n it was maan n not rehan who wrote the card it seems...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...


Thank you. 😳


Originally posted by --Neelam--


lovely part...
I am sure rohan knows his  bro's feelings for geet ...
what about geet...waiting to know...


Haha, Geet's feelings would be known in future updates :)

Originally posted by namita25


loved the beginning...
seems like it's Maan who wrote that note...n geet thinks it's Rehan...
waiting for the next part...
continue soon...



Hm the curious case of misplaced note 😆
I can't say who put it but can say it does play a major role in the story.

Originally posted by punam2712


what a lovely start
one scold from maan left a scar on her for ever
she loves him byt fears him too

and maan wants to tlk to her but finds it impossible
what is rehan upto

wish you could change it into an ss or ff


Sometimes simple things leave a big impact, and especially if they happen at a tender age. This is a SS of three parts buddy :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag


lovely n amazing part


loved it a lot


Originally posted by ammu5


fabuls start. do continue n add me to ur pm list


Originally posted by singh24



 Interesting part ...
 Cont.   plz...
 
 

 


Originally posted by dona86


congrats on the new ff
interesting start
cont soon


Originally posted by Serious-Beauty


absolutely loved it
awesome start dear👏


Originally posted by Krishnaluv94


Interesting! Can't wait to read more!


Originally posted by hinal_maaneet




Originally posted by Gcs-girl


Congo on new ss
Awesome concept
loved the update
continue soon
thankx for pm




Originally posted by sridevi_n


awesome update. i guess that card was kept by maan and geet is asuming that rehan has kept it. please continue soon.


Thank you everyone🤗
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by maneet-laksh


ITS MAAN OBVIOUSLY!AN THIS STORY GOONA BE SPECIAL COZ MY BIRTHDAY IS 16 FEB!!😃


Wow! That's great :)
Bang on for coincidences :)

Originally posted by mandymore


awsome start...maan scared hell out of her..
 
is geet thnkng d card is frm rehan..😕


Maan is a maahir at scaring people. Don't you think?😆

Originally posted by SweetestPari


awesome yar... very nice concept... maan had written tat card for geet but geet misunderstands it to b rehan... n i think will be one playin among maaneet... n tats y he confessed his long back mistake now as i thinh he as a slite idea of maans feelings for geet... waiting for next pat... update soon yar... n do PM me... i lik all ur works... yar


THank you so much. Have added you in my PM list..

Originally posted by spvd


congrats hon...

part 1
awesome start dear...
waise what are the current ages of Maan and Geet?
so Geet is scared of Maan...
and Maan has feelings for Geet and seeing her scared infuriates him...
cont soon dear...


Well what will be marriageable age? 🤣
Jokes apart, Geet is 21, and Maan 26 right now

Originally posted by FeistySoul


Mein tumhein ithni jaldhi nahin chodungi...
So expect a request from me buddy🤗...
Now coming to the update...
Each seen was so , kya kahein, dekh sakthi thi apni aankhon se...
Geet ke baalon ka hawaaon mein udna thak...
Acha ji! Tho bachpan se lekar paden hain Maan saab apni Geet mohtharma ke peeche...
It's really great na, bachpan ka interest or woh chota love badein ho kar bhi humaarein saath rahein...
Aisen log bohuth bohuth lucky hain na Shikhs...
Rehan tho cupid khel raha hain ek saal se I guess...
So kisko kya answer milegi jaldhi batha na!
I am waiting on my toes...
Love ya...
🤗



Aa gayi meri not-so-choti behan?🤣
Yes people are indeed lucky to have their love known all their life, but if you ask me, don't they get bored of the same face?🤣
Alright enough of my silly jokes. I am very very glad you are here feisty soul ji😆
And you might be the first one who assumed Rehan to be positive😆
Love you too Nidha🤗

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ukdesigirl


Love it Shika👍🏼


Originally posted by PaintedSky


beautiful !! will wait for the next part.


Originally posted by swetha10


Awesome!!!!
luved it.. very interesting!!!
plzz continue


Originally posted by sekhonpuneet


Awesome


Originally posted by soniya_lovesu


Great plot!! :) how can we forget u? 😊 Aww..maan must have written tht poem, oh god! And geet loves rehan? Y?😭


Originally posted by Shruti_Goyal


wow...


Originally posted by SuperbDrashti


- - - - - - - - 😃
I loved it  superb start ⭐️
thanks for pm 


Originally posted by Ash1991


amazing update...


Originally posted by Kaval05


this is interesting, i wonder how this story will turn out


Originally posted by rs12345


wow awesooome loved it...


Originally posted by -memorable-


beautiful concept


Originally posted by sona-rai


welcome back dear  🤗 🤗
awesome lovely start eagerly waiting for next update


Originally posted by gargi12


awesome strt...
Loved d concept aloottt...
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm


Originally posted by --Dia--


When are you updating next part?? 
Nice to see you back with another awesome work.. 😊


Thank you everyone🤗
Next update would be in a day or two :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by LILY111144


read ur all wrk ,wt 2 say ,SUPER,run away bride my favrte ,sistrly lov each one is a master pc created by u ...about dis one ithink geet also lov maan ,card is from maan its obvios ,rehan know it ,   nd wil play cupid, lets see wt u hav planed..nd wen is next prt?


Sister's love is really close to my heart and Run away bride is something I enjoyed a lot while writing. Glad to know you liked them😳

Originally posted by alfik


i jst dint understand d last paragraph of part 1???

Edited
sorry forgot to write...its reallly a lovely part n pleaaassseee do not disappear update this story soon n also ur other stories...i m dying to read them pleeeaaassseee

 
Ermm in the last para Geet says Rehan would get his answer this time, as far as I remember. Anyway lemme know what you didn't understand exactly so that I would try and clear that. And I would try not to go into hibernation this time😆
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Cloud9.



Dude what are you doing here?😆
It is really embarrassing when our friends read whatever crap we write. Isn't it?😆
oh yeah about the scared uncle wala part even I have a memory. I will tell you more about it in 5 minutes. Right now me in skype and doing combined studies with my friend :P rofl
Edit:
So when I was a kid, there was this uncle near to our home and I dreaded him. He was sweet with all the kids but I don't know why I was shit scared of him. For no apparent reason. So much so that whenever our Rikshaw crossed their home, and if he was outside I used to hide myself crouching back. He many a time tried to call me, get me chocolates and what not but I always ran away from him. Actually my bhai and all the kids of our locality were friendly with him and even my parents were his friends whatever. So one fine day he got pissed off, stopped the Rickshaw on the way back my home, and with the help of my co rickshaw mates, who were laughing, he pulled me out, literally carried me like a sack of potatoes over his shoulder, took to his home, dumped the chocolates he bought for me and made me watch TV with his mother. Forcefully. I hated watching that show. But who'd listen to me. Argh. I hated him. BTW I was studying first standard then😆
Ok..Shika dear... Please stop repeating this word! CHOCOLATE! 
You are tempting me to spend all my bacha kucha money on chocolates! 😆
Sadly, I had no such uncle who showered chocolates on me ! *Sigh* But yeah I was always showered with lots and lots of never-ending lectures! 😳
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by World-of-Dreams


Ok..Shika dear... Please stop repeating this word! CHOCOLATE! 
You are tempting me to spend all my bacha kucha money on chocolates! 😆
Sadly, I had no such uncle who showered chocolates on me ! *Sigh* But yeah I was always showered with lots and lots of never-ending lectures! 😳

🤣Oh by the way you asked me why I named the teddy erm you know what right?
Well, It is because I always wanted to name my teddy that but since my teddy is not brown but butterscotch in color, i named it Butterscotch and since this is fiction, I named Geet's teddy You know what.😆


Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful
who put the cardthere?
was it maan? or was it rehan?
sorry, the 'like' button is not working
Posted: 11 years ago
sweety welcome back 😊

geet loves rehan 😲

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