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HeartPrologue:
geet monolouge:
manathi hoon ki mein usse pyaar karthi thi 7 saal ke liye par mujhe 1 saal pehela ehassas ho gaya tha ki mujhe usse pyaar karna ka haq nahi hai is liye meine 1 saal se usse bahut nafrat karne lagi thi aur usme kamyab bhi ho gayi thi par 3 mahino pehela meri zindagi mein aise mod aaya ki aaj mein 18 saal ki honi wali hoon aur aaj hi meri usse shaadi hai..
di samajth hai ki mere 8 saalo ke pyaar ne is shaadi ko haan karvaya hai par sirf naina jaanthi hai ki mein usse hafrat karne lagi thi
par ab mujhe yeh shaadhi karni padegi sab ke khatir, jinho ne mujhese umeed ki hai unke khatir...
 
 
within that samera - di of geet and naina-friend of geet come and take her
down for the marrige rituals...
 
 
 
 
 
StarPART ONE
while going to the stage geet was rewinding her life
 
the flash back starts when geet was 4 years old...
her father MOHINDER HANDA and his brother RANJITH LAL HANDA was the partner cum owners of the their khandani shop named HANDA STORES in chennai..
their shop had a very big name...
 
 
 
roj subha mohinder 10 baje shop kholthe the phir thodi der baad BRIJ jo geet ke bade bhai aur ranjith handa ke beta the atte the...
phir ranjith handa atte the...
 
 
(HANDA STORES will be mentioned as HS...)
 
 
geet school jaathi thi aur woh higher kg mein thi aur jab bhi uske schoolmein chutti thi woh Ranjith ke sang HS.. jaathi thi.
 
 
waha ek naukar tha jiska naam tha ravi.
 
woh geet ko apni matlab ke liye istmaal kartha tha...
 
tab geet 4 saal ki thi tho use kuch pata nahi hota tha...
 
unke HS.. ke upar unka goudomn tha tho jab bhi woh wahan jata tha to...
 
 
 
R:geet chal thuhe chocolate detha hoon
(geet chali jathi thi..)
(woh usse goudoun le jatatha aur phir ander se bandh kar leta tha)
R:geet tujhe kya chccolate chaiye?
G:haan.
R:tho neeche late(lie down)
(he removed his pants)
R:acha mein ek game kheltha hoon phir mein chocolate deta hoon
G:thik hai..
 
 
geet came back from her flash back when samera called her..
 
 
 
she asked geet was there any problem..
G: nahi di, koi problem nahi hai...
geet's sister agreed geet always becomes angry wher ever she thinks of that bas**** raviAngry
 
 
 
 
HeartPART 2:
 
Geet was standing alone as all her cousins were doing some or the other work and naina was talking with RANO HANDA:MOM OF GEET...
 
 
 
Geet was thankful to naina as a friend she supported her with full faith in her decision.as she shares all the things going in her mind except the one
 
 
again she remembers the part of life where she was 4 years...
 
-----------------------flash back------------------
 
ravi removed my *******
 
 
and after 5minutes he wore his pants and gave me chocolate and took the things which he came to take and went away.
 
 
this happened almost every time he would go upstairs not only that he would not leave me even if we were alone
 
 
 
 
 
 
after some times i stopped talking to him and going upstairs along with him and i alwaysthought of reason for not being alone with him i was successful then after a year yash my brother was born then i also i was ignoring him
 
 
though i didnt know what he did and y.i always tried to ignore him
 
 
 
--------------------------flashback------------------
 
naina can and took me to have breakfast as after that i had haldi ...
 
 
 
PART 3:
 
 
 
during braekfast all were teasing geet except naina as she knew the truth why i agreed..
sameera:arre geet tu kha nehi rahi hai..
     kya mein tere unhe ko bulao!!!!!
G:arre di kya aap mujhe khane nahi dengi...
rajji-cousin of g:accha geet u kha kha(smiling)
G:achaa di ab mujhe akela khane do..
R:arre yaar aaj last ek baar humare saat kha lena phir kal se to tujhe apne unke saath khana padrga!!!(and R and S gave a hi fiv..)
 
 
i quitely sat and was eating but my sisters were teasing me but i went to flashback when i was in 3th std(8 years)
 
 
 
------------flashback--------------
 
 
during every annual holidays i my mom and yash we used to go to hoshiyapur for vacation...
 
that year as yash was only 3 years my grandpa came to pick us...
 
in hoshiyapur we had most of the relations..
i used to stay with my grandparents (nanaji And naniji)..
 
 
they stared alone
 
 
but all my mamas(mom's brothers)
were just next to our house..
 
i had 2 mamas
(this is at that time)
Elder one-(i will mention as m1)..
 wife-(mw1)
   he had a daughter(nandhini)..
  and a son(adithya)
second mama(m2)was having marrige
wife(mw2)
 
 
at that time i didnt know to ride cycle so my mother used to send me to her massi's house(name)-SAVITHRI DEVI..
who had had 2 sons and a daughter (the order is:)
 
DEV SINGH KHURANA
then annie singh khurana and the third is
MAAN SING KHURANA...
 
 
 
as msk would teach me riding cycle
for that purpose heused to put extra wheels to his cycle..
 
 
(ya readers you guessed it right that msk was geet's mamaji)
 
at that time geet used to spend most of her time in km..
msk was 2 yrs elder to me.
 
 
 
 
i always used to call maan as bhaiya and annie as didi..
 
 
mom always used to scold me and say to call as mama and maasi...
 
 
then slowly i started calling him mamaji..
 
 
he would teach me to ride cycle but i was very scared to learn at last i never learnt to ride it
-----------------flashback-------------------
 
 
 
those memories bring a smie on my face.
seing the smile
S:arre wah unke khayalo mein khoi hui hai. hai mein mar jaava
i started to blush(fake).i was thinking of him but which happened before 10 years i never knew that whom i used to call him bhaiya and mamaji will 1 day become the person whose name i cannot take..
 
 
 
ok readers there is a small change in the story as i wanted to start it from the part after 2 months when geet agerrd to the marrige...
and in this all the families are middle class and there may or may not be changes ...
and all these flashback were coming in the mind of geet on the same day at random placeses..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
PART 4:
Date:18 april 2011..
 
it was dinner time and geet was in chennai...
 
 
they were to leave for hoshiyarpur after 5 more days..
 
and in my friends only naina knew about my marrige and she with me for most of the time...
 
we were studing together in the same college and the same school ..
we were childhood friends and we were more like sisters...
 
during dinner my mom,badi maa and bade papa we there with my brother brij and nisha bhabi were sitting and doing the last minute preparations..
 
 
me and naina were in my room and we were chatting...
 
G:pata nahi yaar yeh log kyun itna jhanjat kar rahe hain.
N:haan main bhi yahi sooch rahi hoon..
G:tujhe pata hai na ki shaadi ki shopping abhi aur karni hai phir delhi mein bhi karni hai.min khud hi aapne dress design kar sakthi hoon ya tu tho kar hi sakthi hai, nahi?bata ghar par hi do designer rakh kar delhi ke designer se design kar wa na hain..
N:chal geet to chod.
G:aacha naina mujhe samajh mein nahi aa raha hai jab shaadi ke 15 din baad mein waapas aa rahi hoon tho itha sab laadke lee jaane ke kya jaararuth hai..
 
  mein delhi so shopping kar keunhe wahi chood kar aajungi  waise bhi waha south indian thodi na chalte hain..
N:geet mujhe pata hai ki tu aa jayegi par aunty ji ko aapa sapne poora kar ne de...
G:tu thik khe rahi hai..aacha time kya hua hai???
N:9:00 baj gaye
G:sun tu room bahdh kar kar yahi reh uska call aathe hi hoga..
 
Geet's cell rings.she sees the name-MAAN
G:very punctual...
N:aacha meri maa call uttha..
Geet reives the call and puts it in loudspeaker because when ever his call comes is attends when naina is there and puts it in loud speaker...
M:hai..
G:hello..
M:kya kar rahi thi.
naina was smirking and i knew why...
G:nothing just packing...
M:for want????
G:what?????i wanted to kill him making my life hell he was asking why i was packing
 
naina was smiling..when she saw i was angry she put a straight face..
M:ok sorry wrong question...
IS it over..
G:haan 1 mahine ki hi tho kar ne haain jaise har saal karthi hoon wasie he karni hai na haan bas thore bhaari kapde rakhne hain..
 
 
i was smirking...
 
 
M:arre geet mujhe pata hai ki tu shaadi ke 15 dino ke baad chali jayegi par baar baar bol kar mujhe dukhi tho mat kar na...
 
G:mein sach bolthi hoon agar dukh hota hai tho usme main kuch
nahi kar sakthi..
 
M:aacha chod bata lehenga ka colour kya hai?
 
G:see it urself...
 
It was 9:15 and i offed the loudspeaker and naina acted as if she called me and siaid him to hang..
 
 
i was everyday routine for 2 months he would call me at 9 and i would talk for 15 minutes and would tell him to hang with oe or the other reason...

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PART 5:
 
the next 4 days went with shopping..
they had no college as it was semester holidays...
 
naina was always with geet and she even agreed to go for her marrige because she knew that geet wanted someone who would support he...
 
 
 
 
it was 22 april...
and all were having breakfast..
 
naina came with her luggage with her mom...
 
the luggage was added to our luggage...
 
she was coming alone but her mom had full faith on our familybecause most of the time naina was with me...
 
 
 
we had flight tomorrow and the last minute packing i was little nervous...
 
that day i spent with my friends as after coming i would be a married.
though i didnt say them,,i was enjoying the day out..
 
then it was turning evening and everyone was in a hurry because the next day we were leaving morning and most of our packing was complete and they were doublechecking all the things...
 
then my cycle was repeating as it was 9.
 
then at 10 meri bhabi ne mujhe karan(his son) ko sulane ko kaha kyunki wo 1 1/2 saal ka tha phir wo thak jaatha aur mujhe bhi karan se bohut lagav hai isliye mein use sulane le gai..
naina  sab ki madat kar rahi thi...
 
 
us raat ko tho mein bhi bohut nervous thi meri yaad 7 saal pehela chali gayi..
 
----------flash back---------------
 
 
use saal bhi mein aapni nani ke yahan gayi thi...
 
 
ek din hu sab khel rahe the
 
mein,maan,varsha aur mahesh(we were all almost of same age group)
 
 
sab log ander baatein kar rehe the ..
 
hum bahar khel rahe the..
mujhe sab ko pakadna tha..maine varsha aur mahesh ko tho paked liye par maan baaki tha mein usse pakad ne ja rahi th par woh kamare mein ja kar bandh ho gaya.
 
2 second baad khola mein gayi tho phir ussne wapas bandh kar liye..
mujhe daar lagraha tha kyunki current nahi thi   baar baar usne aisa kiya..
 
 
 
ussi samay mujhe kaga mujhe kuch ho raha tha
 
---------------flashback-----------
 
 
karan rone laga...
 
maine use uthaya aur sulane lagi..
aab mujhe pata chala ki woh pyaar hain...
 
 
PART 6:
 
raat ho gayi thi...
 
 
mein puri raat nahi soyi
kyunki agle din tha 23 april jis din ko mujhe ek saachai ka ehaas hua ki mein ek jhali,pagal hoon jisne aapne zindagi ke 8 saal barbaad kar diya ek saapnon ki dhuniya mein reh kar
 
 
 
 
 
 
mein apni zindagi ke panno ko palet rahi thi...
 
-----------flashback-------------
 
usse raat ko mein usse naraz ho kar candle ke saamne ja kar baithe...
 
mujhe ajeeb mehoos ho raha tha..mein candle ko gor se dhekthi jaa rahi thi mujhe usme uska chera dekhai de raha tha mujhe ajeeb laga pur maine kise ko bhi nahi bataya...
 
phir use baar jab mein wapas jaa ne ke baad mujhe ajeeb sa mehsoos hona laga...mujhe har samay uski yaad aane lagi ...
 
 
usse saal hoshiyarpur mein krishnajayanthi ka utsav manaya gaya...
maa aur yash-mera chota bhai wahan gay the..
 
 
 
mein nahi gayi...
 
jab maa wapas aayi tho maine jab uski photos deekhi tho mujhe aacha lagne laga phir mujhe jab bhi uski yaad aane lagithi thi tho mein maa se chupke uski photo dekhne lagi ...
 
 
 
 
woh hi meri aadath ban gayi...
 
phir agle saal wapas mein gayi tab usse saal wahan par shiv ji ki bohut badi pooja thi...
 
hum saab wahan the...
maan ka parivar bhi tha ...hum sab bhagwan pooja kam aur khel zyada rahe the...
maine do minute ke liye shiv ki moorthi ko dhayan se dekha mujhe usse mein bhi maan dikh rahi tha...
 
phir mujhe shaq ho gaya ki mera saath kuch gadbad hai...
 
 
usse saal bhi main use baare mein jyada nahi sooch rahi thi...
 
-------falshback-------------
 
mera phone mein 4:00 baje ka alarm baja...
mein apne ghar ke mandir mein gayi aur kehene lagi...
 
 
 
G:baabaji iss samay poora ek saal ho gaya hai jab maine yeh waada kiya tha ki mein apne maan mein se usse attraction ko nikal dungi jise mein pyaar ka naam de kar bhati hui thi..
par mein aapne wade ko poora nahi kar paayi...mein rone ragiCry
 
naina mandir mein aayi main usse dekha aur aapne aasoo poch liye..woh kehena lagi
 
 
 
 
N:wah geet mujhe dost bolthi hain aur mujhse hi aapne aasoo chupathi haiUnhappy
G:nahi naina aise baat nahi hai...aacha tu bata tu is waqt yaha kya kar rahi hai????
N:mujhe aaj ki date pata hai aur mein yeh bhi raahthi hoon ki tu puri raat soyi nahi hogi...
G:haan...mein uske godh mein sar rakh kar roone lagiCry
G:men aapna waada poora nahi kar payi!!!!!!!!
N:roole geet tujhe jitna roona hai roole taaki tujhe is baat ko wapas yaad kar ke roona nahi aaye...
 
kuch deer baad mein ne usse kaha ki woh jaa kar taiyaar ho jaaye
 
aur mein jaa kar sab ko utthane kagi kyunki 6 baje ki flight thi...
 
 
sab utth kar tayaar ho gay phir hum 5:30 ghar se nikal gaye luckily flight 2 ghante late thi...
 
hum flight mein jaa kar baith gaye...
 
 
abhi meri manzil mujhse 3 ghante ki doori par hai...
 
 
mein flight mein naina ke saath baith gayi thi
 
fligth take off kar chuki thi
 
 
 
PART7:
 
mein soo jayi thi..
jab delhi aane wala thanaina ne mujhe jagaya..
 
 
maine casually ma se poocha ki airport koun aayaga
M:(mom)geet airport par maan dev aur naintara ayenge..
 
G:(st)kya...Shocked.
 aacha...
 
mein conscious ho gayi thi...Embarrassedhaan mujhe yaad aaya ki ek baar mom ne kaha ki hum dono ki families milke shopping karenge...
 
 
main ghabrane lagi ..
N:arre kya hua..
G:kuch nahi...seat belt laga le..
 
 
Flight land kar chuki thi...
 
mein aur ghabrane lagi..
N:geet mujhe bata kya baat hai jo tu ghabara rahi hai?????
G:agar tu sunagi tuho tere nhi yahi haal hoga...
N:tu aise bool rahi hai ki jaise maan airport aa raha hai????
G:tujhe kaise pata??????
N(shocked)kyaaaShocked!!!!!!!!!!!
G:haan aur nahi tho kya...
N:chalo MRS.MSK aapke hone wale se milte hain..
G:naina mind it...main aabhi MRS.MSK nahi hoon...
 
 
 
maine aapna cell switch on kiya..karte hi call aaya,maine naam dekhe bina hi utthaliya
G:hello...(maan ka call tha.)
M:geet kya flight land kar chuki???
G:Disapprovedo min mein pata chal jayega..
M:aacha..thora jaldi aana mein wait kar raha hoon...
 
 
 
 
maine usse baat poori nahi karne di call cut kar diya..
 
 
 
 
 
N:geet kya hua????
G:kuch nahi...aacha..thora jaldi aana mein wait kar raha hoon...Tongue(initating maan)
 
 
 
 
listening to this naina started laughing then i also joined her...we had fun time recalling it...
 
 
PART 8:
 
date:18:april.
time:breakfast table
place:hoshiyarpur-khurana mansion...
 
 
 
 
 
the table is rectangular with 8 chairs...
 
 
in the head chair was sitting rishab singh khurana the head of the family and father of maan singh khurana...opposite to him was sitting savitri devi khurana wife of rishab and  mother of msk..
left of rishab were sitting dev singh khurana elder son of family and after him was naintara khurana wife of dev and the darling SIL of msk...after her was annie rathord and opposite to her was her hubby arjun rathord and leaving a place was sitting(my ff hero...)maan singh khurana the love of the family...
 
 
 
 
 
 
he was the love of the family only because of his stubornness the agreed to marry him with geet...
 
 
 
 
 
 
(now everything will be maan's monolouge except conv...:)
 
 
 
aaj se ek mahine baad meri shaadi hai aur mein bohut zyada khush hoon mere maan tho kar raha hai ki main aabhi jaake geet ko aapni bahoon mein lee loon aur mehoos karu ki kaise lagtha hai par woh bohut dur hai. mein call karna chata hoon par iss samey woh mera call nahi utthayagi...
 
 
 
 
 
 
SOMEONE CAME    
 
Savitri:arre beta daksh aao nasta kar loo
D:ji aunty ji...
D:hi maan..
M:hi daksh...
 
 
daksh came and sat in the free chair...
 
 
 
nasta ke baad mein aur daksh terrace par jaye...
 
 
 
mein aapni fav. place par baith gaya...
daksh mera mazak bata ta ki mein aapni usse place ko leke kuch zyada possessive hoon mein nahi sunta kyunki woh place mera liye bohut special hai...
 
 
usse mujhe yaad dilaya ki ise place ki karan maine aapna ek dost ko kho diya
 
 
 
----------------flash back-------------
 
 
mere sare friends aaye the aur hum sab uppar cricket khelne uppar aaye the...
 
 
 
thodi der khelne ke baad hum thak gaye...mere terrace ke corner mein ek room sa bana tha jo open tha aur usse place mein baithne ke liye slab type bana hai...
 
 
 
 
 
hum sab wahan bahit gay aur mein aapni fav. par baith gaya sab ko pata tha ki mein use jajhe par kisi ko baith ne nahi deta chane woh meri family ho ya friend...
 
 
 
 
mein 2 min ke liye bahar gaya jab takmein aaya mera ek dost wahan baitha tha mera reaction deekhne ke liya mujhe itna jussaAngryAngryAngry aaya ki meine usski haddi todh di Confusedaur bola
 
 
 
 
agli baar koi yaha baita to REACTION isse bura hogaOuch.OuchOuch...
 
 
---------flash back------------------
 
 
uske baad se mera friends mere ghar aate the tho usse kamre mein nahi jate the...
 
 
 
mein ne kisiko nahi bataya ki woh meri fav kyun thi aur na hi mujhe pehale pata thi par aab pata chal gaya hai ki woh itni special kyun hai...
 
 
here is part 9:
 
 
mein aur daksh saath mein the...
D:chal maan aab bata bhi de ki teri yeh fav. place kyun hai???
 
aab mein daksh ko kya batau ki woh meri fav. kyun hai...
 
M:chood na kya laga kar rakha hai...tune packing kar li na 5 din baad delhi jaana hai...
D:haan maine packing kar li...aur tune(he himself answered)haan tune tho packing kar li hogiWink(in a teasing tone)..
mein khud soochna laga ki kab se yeh meri fav. place ban gayi...
 
--------------------flash back---------------
 
har saal geet chuttiyon mein yahan aathi thi.
 
yeh tab ki baat hai jab mein 10 saal ka tha...
 
 
usse saal geet aayi thi tab yash chota tha aur bohut cute bhi tha ...geet meri se cycle seekthi thi...
 
 
 
usse saal ek din hum awiee uppar aaye aur hum uppar wale kamre mein baith gaye...geet hamesha ek hi jaghe par baith ti thi usse terrace par tare dekhne aache lagthe the iseliye woh zyada samay uppar hi reheti aur usi place par baith ti thi...
 
 
 
use saal uske jaane ke baad mujhe chaine hi nahi hota tha mujhe pata hi nahi hota tha ki iska karan kya hoga...
 
 
 
 
issi soch mein ek baar mein upar aaya aur room mein baith gaya...
 
 
 
baiththe hi meri bechani door ho gayi...maine  habhi geet ko usse place par baithe hua dhayan nahi diya agar diya hota tho mujhe ussi samay pata chal jata ki is bechani ka karan kya tha...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
usse din ke baad jab bi mein bechain hota tho mein ussi place par baith jata...
 
 
 
woh sukun mujhe kahi aur nahi mila.tab se woh meri pav. place ban gayi thi...
 
 
 
 
------------------flash back--------------
 
mujhe aab pata chala kyunki usse place mein geet biththi thi aur wahan par uska ehassas hai jo mujhe sukoon deka hai...
 
aaj akl tho mera sara wakth yahan baithe baithe hi jata hai...
 
 
 
mein aur daksh baatie karne kage...(ofcourse geet kiWink)..
 
 
shyaam ho gayi thi...
 
 
geet mera mazak banathi hai ki mein usse baath karne ke liye call karne mein bohut punctual hai...aab mein usse kaise batou ki mein call hang karne ke baadh doosre din ke 9 baje tak wait karne mujhe itna mushkil hai...
 
 
 
mein jab bhi call karhta hoon woh 10 min baath kar kar call rakh deti haiDisapprove...pata nahi kyun par 2 mahine se yeh meri aadath ban chuki hai...
 
 
poora din wait karo aur 10 min. ki baathCry...
(EmbarrassedBOHUT BADI NA INSAAFI HAILOL
 
 
PART 10:
 
9 baj gaye the...
 
 
maine geet ko caal kiya
M:hai..Embarrassed
G:hello..
M:kya kar rahi thi.
G:nothing just packing...
M:for want????Dead
G:what?????
M:ok sorry wrong question...
IS it over..
G:haan 1 mahine ki hi tho kar ne haain jaise har saal karthi hoon wasie he karni hai na haan bas thore bhaari kapde rakhne hain..
 
 
 
M:arre geet mujhe pata hai ki tu shaadi ke 15 dino ke baad chali jayegi par baar baar bol kar mujhe dukhi tho mat kar naCryCry...
 
G:mein sach bolthi hoon agar dukh hota hai tho usme main kuch
nahi kar sakthi..
 
M:aacha chod bata lehenga ka colour kya hai?Embarrassed
 
G:see it urself...
 
It was 9:15
phone rakh diyaDeadDead
phir use naina ne bula liya...har samay aise hi hota haiCryCryCry...
 
 
 
raat ko zyada samay mein aur daksh saat mein rehthe hai(friendly only!!!!EmbarrassedTongueTongueBig smile)...
aaj usne mujhe chida ne ke liye jaan boojkar yeh gaana chalaya...
 
 
par yeh gaana sun kar mein sapne mein chala gaya...
 
 
hamaari shaadi mein - 2
abhi baaki hai hafte chaar
charaso baras lage ye hafte kaise honge paar
nahi kar sakata main aur ek din bhi intazaar
aaj hi pehanaa de (pehnaa de - 2)
ho aaj hi pehanaa de
teri gori bahon kaa haar
ho poonam ho jaanam ho - 2

niche ho dekhu to oshan hi oshan hai
upar jo dekhu to tu aakaash mein roshan hai
milan ki jaldi hai - 2
plen ki dhimi hai raftaar
meraa bas chale to main doon usaki chhat pe plen utaar
majhe sasural ke loon mahinaa puraa wahaa gujaar
use lekar lautu sang lekar lautu
use lekar lautu main jisakaa ikalautaa hakdaar
ho poonam ho jaanam ho - 2

har pardes mein jaanewaale ko meri hai raay
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jahan bhi jaaye apanaa dilbaar sang mein hi le jaaye
dooru ek pal ki - 2
mujhase ab so sahi na jaaye
kaash kismat meri thodaasa saath nibhaaye
mujhase milane ko woh dilhi airport pe aaye
usako dekhate hi achaanak dekhate hi
usako dekhate hi meraa dil joronse chillaaye
ho poonam ho jaanam ho - 2

hamaari shaadi mein - 2
abhi baaki hai hafte chaar
mahine beet gaye ye din bhi ho jaayenge paar
naa phir tarasaaungi aur karavaake intazaar
main yu pehenaa dungi aise pehnaa dungi
hak se pehnaa dungi tumhe apane baahon kaa haar
ho saajan ho baalam ho - 2

hamaari shaadi mein abhi baaki hai hafte chaar (this song is from vivaah)
 
gaana khatam ko gaya tha par mein sapno mein hi tha ...yeh dekh kar daksh ko ek aur bahana mil gaya th mujhe chida ne ke liye...
 

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THIS IS PART 11Smile:
 
Phir 4 din train ki tarah bhag gaye...
 
hum 22 ki shyam ko delhi ke liye nikal gaye the...
 
 
hum me ek vanity le li thi...
 
dev bhai drive kar rahe the aur bhabi unke sang baithe thi...mein nilesh aur devanshi ka dhyaan bata raha tha aur phir thodi der baad woh so gaye...devanshi bohut khush thikyunki kal unki geet didi aane wali thi...
 
aabhi hum mein geet ko lekar ladai ho gayi thi...
 
D:papaji kal meri geet didi aa rahi hai na...
DEV:haan aapko geet didi bohut aachi lagthi hai na...
D:ha papaji par pichle saal woh mera se sirf 1 baar milne aaji...
iseliye mein unse baat nahi karungi...
DEV:aise nahi karthe...agar aap baat nahi karenge tho geet didi sad ho gayagi aur agar geet didi sad ho gayi tho apke maan chcahu aapko dantahgeWink(maan ko dekthe hua,in a teasing tone)
D:Shockedchachu kyun dantange????
M:kyunki abi 25 days mein woh aapki chachi ban jayagi...
(haye me blushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed)
DEV:chalo nainu aab maan babu din bhi gin rahe hai...mujhe yakeen hai ki minute bhi gin rakhe hongeWinkWinkWink...
D:Angrychachu woh meri geet didi hi hai..aur wahi hi rahigi
M:Angrynahi beta devanshi woh tumahari chachi hongi...
D:papaji dekho na chachu se bolo ki woh meri geet didi hi rahingiAngryAngry...
M:bhai aapni beti se bol do ki woh uski chachi hongiAngryAngry...
 
thier fight continued naintara got fed up
N:bas karo tun donoAngry...Maan veerji aap idar aayeye aur devanshi aap bhi...
 
she pulled both's ears...
N:verji aap bade hai thoda samja kijye aur aap devanshi...
geet aapki didi aur chachi dono rahengi dono khush
M&D:LOLLOLok...
 
 
 
mujhe yeh soch kar hi hasi aa rahi hai...(mujhe bhiLOLLOL)
 
 
 
hum wahan pohuch gaye...
 
 
hume subha geet ko lena airort jaanaEmbarrassed tha par poori raat mujhe neend nahi aayi thi yeh sooch kar ki mein geet se kya baat karungaEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
 
shaadi pakki hone ke baad se hi mein geet se milne ki baat se bohut nervous hone lagjata hoonSmile...
 
usse pata hi nahi chala ki kab sochte socht uski aakh lag gayi...
aur aagla subha uski zingagi mein ek badi sachai shamil hone wali thi...
 
 
 
 
PART 12:
 
Subha 5:30 baje dev maan ke kamra mein akar usse uthaya...
D:bhai mera uttho...
M:SleepySleepykya hai bhai.sone do na...
D:maan utth kar zara time dekh..
Maan got startled and got up briskly...
M:kyun bhai time kya hua hai????mein zyada soo gaya kya..geet ki flight land kar chuki hogi...bhai bhabi tho tayaar hai na...aacha aab hatto mujhe tayaar hone jaana hai.hattooo naaa(all in one go)..
D:arre wah bha agar mujhe pata hota tu aaisa utthaga tho mein tujhe college ke time par bhi aise hi uttha rahunga...
M:matlabConfused
Dev made maan turn to the watch and showed the time as 5:31...
M:(sighed)
 
 
then only he realised that dev was joking...
M:AngryAngrybhai kya aapko chain nahi hai...meri jaan nikal di...
D:aacha baba sorry...aacha ek baat poochni thi(little serious)..
M:kya bhai?????
D:Evil Smilekya yahan par sethescope milage?????
M:kyun bhai...aur aap ithe serious kyun ho...
D:woh kya hai na mujhe kisi ki dhadkan sunni hai...
M:kiski????
D:hai koi...
M:aacha bhai...no comedy seriously batou kiskeliye chaiya??
D:tere liyeLOLLOL...
M:mera liyeConfused
D:aaj geet aa rahi hai na tho mein soch raha tha ki mera bhai kitha khush hoga...mein uski khushi sunana chatha hoon...
M:oh bhai...meri yeh khushi sirf aapke wajhe se hai thankuCry..
 
(haye me emotionalCryCryCry)
the room became emotional...
D:aacha aab yeh emotional hona bandh kar aur tayaar ho ja...
M:kyunConfused???
D:tu aajkal kuch zyada kyun nahi puchta...aacha chod hume jogging jaana hai...pir kya pata ki mera bhai kal se free ho ya na ho...
M:bhai apke liye me everytime and any time free...but meri first priority hogi sirf geet...
 
D:ShockedAngrykya tu geet ko aapne bhai se pehela chunega..
 
 
then suddenly started laughing...
D:mein bhi yehi chatha hoon...
M:aacha bhai mein fresh ho kar aatha hoon...aap mera neecha wait kare...
D:tikn hai maan...par zaldi aana...kya pata ki tum fresh hote samay bhi geet ke bare mein soocho aur hum late ho jaaye...
 
they were tensionless as they didnt know the coming danger...and the thing said by dev that he wants maan to always bhi by the side of geet will bhi tested in their journey of
"RISHTON MEIN ULJHAN
 
 
 
PART 13:
 
dono jogging ke liye nikal jate hai...
 
1 ghante ke baad ghar aate hai ...tab naintara kitchen mein nasta ki tayari kar rahi hoti hai geet & family ke liye...
 
 
maan turant kitchen mein bhag kar naintara ke paas jaata hai...
 
N:kya hua devar ji????aap itna haff kyun rahe hain???
M:bhabi nasta mein kya bana rahi ho????
N:kuch light jaise poha...aap aise kyun ho rahe hai???
M:aacha hua bhabi...nahi maine socha aap kuch aur bana rahi hai...
ya aapko yaad nahi hoga...isiliye mein bhag kar aaya aapko yaad diliyane ke liye...(said all in one go.)(AG tired of typing phew..!!!!!!)
 
N:kya yaad dilayana DEVARJI(smirking)Wink
M:(not noticing the smirnking..)bhabi maine sahi socha tha aap bhul jayogi ki GEET ko ghee se ulti aati hai...aap ne kisi cheez mein ghee tho nahi dala???
N:nahi pyare devar ji...aur mujhe aachi tarah yaad hai ki AAPKI geet ko ghee se ulti aati hai...aab jayiye fresh ho jayiye...
sirf fresh hona...sapne dekhne mat bathiye...
M:kya bhabi...aacha mein aata hoon...
 
MAAN became fed up of this teasing...from 2 months all were teasing him...but on one side he was very happy that the decesion of marrying geet proved to be good...
 
 
 
 
after freshing he went to wake up devanshi...
M:devanshi baby uttho...
D:Sleepy
M:uttho(little loudly)
D:kya hai(little rudely)
M:devanshi uttho(sternly)st:iske wajha se mujhe late nahi hona...
D:chacu mujhe sone do...PPLLEEAASSEE...
M:devanshi chalo hume geet ko lene jana hai...
D:aare haan...(getting up briskly)chachu kya aap pehele nahi uttha sathe...
M:(rolling eyes..)
D:khair chodo aap tho ho hi aisei...(maan's mouth open..)aacha mumma e bol do ki mera koi aacha sa dress nikal degi kyunki mujhe geet didi se best ban kar milna hai...
M:first bhabi ne tera dress nikal diya hai...aur second woh aapki geet didi nahi geet chachi hai...
D:(mouth open...)o hello...
 
 
without listening maan went out smirking...
 
 
it was almost 9:30 when they left home...
D:papaji hum GEET DIDI ko lene ja rahe hai(saying didi looking at maan...)
DEV:haan baby..aap bihut khush hai na...
 
they reached the airport...
 
the heard the announcement
FILGHT SG123 CHENNAI TO DELHI ARRIVED...
 
as soon as maan heard it he started calling geet..
G:hello...
M:geet kya flight land kar chukiEmbarrassed???
G:do min mein pata chal jayega..
M:aacha..thora jaldi aana mein wait kar raha hoonSmileSmile...
 
 
Phone rakh diya!!! koi baat nahi aabhi tho milne hi wala hoon...
 
 
 
 
the family started coming out...first came...
mohinder then rano then was brij and wife  then was yash and the last but not the least was GEET  with karan and naina with her...after seing her only maan's restlessness decreased to a great extend...
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet met every one except maan...maan knew this is to come...
 
 
then geet introduced naina...devanshi and naina became istant friends...
 
 
geet,naina and devanshi were always together throughout their drive to home...
 
 
 
maan tried to talk to geet but as usual she ignored him saying one reason or other...
 
 
 
PART 13b:
 
let me explain in detail what actually happened at the airport...
 
 
PART 13b:
Geet came and met...
first:dev...
G:nameste mamaji...
D:nameste ji...aur kaise ho...
G:aachi hoon mamaji...aur???
D:aap batao...
G:mamaji mein aabhi ayi..mami se milke aati hoon...
SECOND:
G:nameste mamiji...
N:nameste geet didi...oops sorry geet bhabhi ji...
G:mamiii!!!!!!
N:mami nahi bhabi...
G:par aap tho mera liye mami hi rahengi...
N:aacha ji...aap jithe gayi...
G:aacha mami mein devanshi se mil ke aati hoon...
THIRD:
G:hello devanshi baby...
D:hello didi...
G:aap kaise ho...
D:mein aachi hoon...aap kaise ho???
G:mein bhi aachi hoon...
D:aap meri didi hi ho na...
G:ha kyun???
D:aap chacha se kaho ki aap meri didi hi ho...
G:chal chodo...aur batao nilesh kahan hai??
D:didi yeh raha...
G:hello nilesh...
N:halleo diedi...
G:aap kaise ho?
N:meina aaacha houn...aapn..
G:mein bhi aachi hun...
 
 
then geet just said a formal hi to MAAN...
 
 
M:hi geet...
G:hi...mein aabhi aayi...
 
 
then she hurriedly went away from there to naina...
 
then she introduced her to everyone
 
 
THIS IS THE THING HAPPENED AT THE AIRPORT...
 
THIS IS FOR THOSE WHO WANTED TO KNOW..
 
 

PART 14:

After reaching home...
all went for fresh up...
then all came for breakfast...as maan already said that geet dosen't like ghee..
geet first asked that to naintara...
while every one was in their rooms..geet went to the kitchen..
 
G:lao mami mein aapki help karthi hoon.../
N:koi baat nahi didi mein kar lungi...bas saara kaam ho chuka hai..bas seving reh gayi hai...woh bhi ho jayagi...
G:aacha mami mein aapse ek baat puchu???
N:haan didi pucho...
G:naraz mat hona...kya aapne in mein se kisi mein ghee dala hai kya????
N:(started laughing..)
G:?!  mami... kya hua???
N:nahi mein ise liye has rahi hun ki bhagwan ne yeh jodi aachi banayi hai...
G: ?! matlab??
N:matlab bhaiya ke hota hua kya mein kisi cheez mein ghee dal sakthi hoon kya...
G:aap kya keh rahi hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha!!!!
N:matlab ki aaj subha bhaiya mera sir par aakar baith gaye aur ghee ka dabba chupa diya taki mein kisi mein ghee na dal saku...
G:oh...i see...now i am on relif...kisi mein ghee nahi hai...
N:say thank u to aapke hone wale(teasing)..
G:kya maami aap bhi...aacha mein isse bhaar lekar jaati hun...
N:aacha...mein zara nilesh ko dekhkar aati hun...
G:mein chali jaa rahi hun...
N:aacha...
 
 
 
 
 
geet went to the kids room but couldn't find them there...
 
[
let me say thier room arrangments...
 
there were 2 floors...
 
in ground floor was
1.KITCHEN..
2.LIVING ROOM...
3.A ROOM FOR TOTSE WHO CANT CLIMB(at present for rano and mohiner)...
4.A DINING ROOM...
 
 
 
in first floor
there were 3 rooms...
1.DEV AND WIFE...
2.BRIJ AND WIFE...
3.WAS A TYPE OF GUEST ROOM...
 
then in the last floor was...
3 rooms...
1.MAAN AND YASH...
2.GEET AND NAINA...
3.DEVANSHI,NILESH AND KARAN...
while the last room was a kids room...
 
 
 
this is all for the description for the house...
 
 
]
 
 
as she couldn't find the kids there she went to her room...
 
naina was there...
 
N:geet what r u doing here...u went to ask something...
G:ya naina i asked...have u seen nilesh???
N:ya dear...see straight...
 
 
 
geet and maan's room were opposite to each other in such a way that they can see each other when ever they want...
 
 
geet turned and saw that devanshi,nilesh and karan were with maan...
 
 
so geet turned to naina...
 
G:naina u r my best friend no...
N:ya(trying to read geet's mind...cause he says this only when she is in need of a help...)
G:o a small favour for me...pppllleeeaaassseee...
N:(expected)tell me...(seeing the present situation she guessed.)
G:please call the kids here(baby face)
N:(phew!!!knew it...)k dear...
G:thank u very much babes...
N:anything for u dear...
 
then she went to call the kids...
 
 
part 15..
but before that i want to give u a small information...
 
i know u all might be wondering that why is geet behaving like this with maan...
i just want to say that this will be revealed with the first twist in the story...till that all will be of maan's POV...with the twist everything will be revealed with geet's POV...
 
 
hope ur doubt is clearedSmileSmile...
 
 
 
PART 15:
 
Naina went to maan's room...
 
 
 
M:arre naina tum yahan???
N:haan woh kya hai na jiju...i mean kya mein aapko jiju bula sakthi hoon???
M:haan kyun nahi...(there was laadus in his mind)...koi kaam tha tumhe ya geet ko???
N:nahi woh bas baachon ko lene aayo thi...
M:aacha...
 
turning to the kids...
N:chalo aacho geet didi aapko bula rahi hai...
M:naina bacho ko geet bula rahi hai kya???
N:haan...
 
then she took the kids away...
 
Maan in self thought...:geet bachoon ko bhi bulane nahi aayiCryCry.
 
 
then keeping this away he started staring geet as she was opposite to his room...
 
 
then everyone went for breakfast...
 
 
then all collected in the living room...
 
{
M for maan..
G for geet..
NA:naintara...
D:devanshi..
Y:yash...
N:naina..
}
 
 
while geet's brother and parents went to rooms for resting...
 
DEV:chalo batao aaj kahan jana hai???
NA:aap geet se hi kyun nahi puchte...agar maan se puchenge tho woh bhi yahi kahega...
G:arre mami mein kya batau...aap hi decide kar lo. par aaj kahi nahi jaa rahe..mujhe thoda rest karna hai...please...
N:haan aunty geet sahi keh rahi hai...
M:haan bhabi..mujhe bhi rest karna hai...
NA:arre devar ji aapko kyun rest karna hai aacha hum mante hai ki geet traveling mein tired ho gayi par aap kaise tired ho gaye...raat bhar geet ke sapne dekthe hua????
 
all started laughing even geet..maan was happy that atleast in his related matter she laughed...
 
 
then all retired to rooms on one condition that at night they all will watch a movie...that too geet's fav...
 
 
so all went to rest...
 
 
(par humare maan babu ko neendh thodi na aane waali...)
 
so he sat in the balcony dreaming of the night for watching movieBlushing...
 
 
 
then by 2:oo pm all came down for lunch and the program was shared once again that after dinner they were to watch the movie...the movie wasn't disclosed yet...
 
 
so all went back...
by evening maneet,naina and the kids together came down...
 
geet and naina decided to go for walking and the kids came to play along with maan...
 
 
G:arre devanshi aap kahan ja rahi ho???
D:didi mein chachu ke sang khelne jaa rahi hoon...aap bhi aaou na...
G:nahi baby mein aur nania didi walk ke liye jaa rahe hai...
 
 
maan was listening to theinr conversation he wanted to talk to geet so he came between it...
 
 
M:WinkWinkgeet khelna bhi tho walking jaise hi tho hai...
D:haan didi aaou na...
KARAN:arre bua aa jaou na...
D:please...
K:please..
N:chal geet hum bhi khelthe hai...
G:ConfusedConfusednaina...(eye language)
N:bacho ke khatir...
G:thik hai...
 
 
 
SO they all went to play...

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PART16Smile:
 
saying so they went to the play ground cum park oposite to their guest house...
 
 
Naina went to play with the kids while the left over were our maneet...geet didnt want to play so she sat...maan went with the kids but after sometime he also joined geet...
 
 
Geet was sitting on one end and maan on the other...in between there was a gap for 2 people to sit...
 
 
as it was evening rush was coming to the park a couple came tho thier bench and asked maan...
CW(couple wife):beta kya tum dono saath ho?
M:ji mata jiEmbarrassed...
CM(couple man):tho kya tum thoda sarak kar baith sakthe ho???
M:ji bilkulEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...
 
 
he moved and sat...(near geet...)but geet didnt react...
 
maan was getting bored...
 
M:geet tumhe bore nahi ho raha kya???
G:meri aadat hai akele baithna...
M:(st)par meri aadath tho nahi hai na...
 
M:kya hum shuttle khele????(he knew geet liked shuttle)
G;(after 2 min..)k..
M:let me get it...
 
 
saying so maan went to get it...when he came back he saw geet with naina...so he went there...
 
M:cahle geet...
G:k...just a sec...
 
 
saying so she said something in naina's ears and with her expressions maan guessed that it is something very importantConfused...
but keeping the taughts a sidehe went to play...
 
 
 
 
Maan was on cloud nine that geet was playing with him...and what shockedShockedShocked maan was the cleanliness with geet played every move and how she handled the cock...
 
 
 
after playing for sometime he said that he wanted to walk for some time...he requested geet...and she also agreed...
 
 
 
while walking maan wanted to start a conversation...
 
M:u play very nice...
G:thank u...
M:oh ur welcome...did u learn????
G:yes...
M:where????
G:i took shuttle as my sports in college...
 
 
2 minutes gap...maan was thinking how to start the convo. again..
 
 
 
M:geet shall i ask u somthing???
 
there was no reply...
 
M:geeettt...
 
again no reply...
 
then he turned back and saw...what he saw shocked him to the coreShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked...
 
 
PART17:
 
When he turned he saw was geet was having earphones in her ear and was coolly listening to songs…….
 
At first maan was angry that like a stupid he was talking but suddenly he remembered his encounter with geet three years before when she came after completion of 10th std.
 
----------FLASH BACK--------------
 
 
It was holiday time and maan went for jogging in the park….
In the same park geet and shylu she came to park for jogging….
 
At that time also during jogging she used to gear songs….he saw that many times when he was crossing her she would busy hearing songs or talking in phone…
 
 
-----------FLASH BACK-----------
 
 
Then after some time all came and then went home…..
 
After dinner everyone assembled in living room to see the movie selected by geet.
All were eagerly waiting for her…
 
She came with the movie CD of
"HUM AAPKE HAIN KOUN"-Staring Salman Khan and Madhuri Dixit (hope u all know the movie)………
While watching the movie during some songs they itself would start dancing like for:
 
Wah Wah Ramji...Dance would be performed by naina..
then for phela phela pyaar maan would go to dream land...
then for maiene maiene geet would was forced to dace by her fav. lavi bhabi...
and then for lo chali mein naintara would dance with maan...
 
 
when it was nearing the ending of the movie almost every one slept except geet,maan,naina,lavi,and naintara...now the was like Nilesh sleeping on devanshi lap and she on dev's lap..dev was on lavi's lap and dev's head was resting on naintara's shoulders..naina and geet was sitting to gether with lavi geet was in between and maan was sitting between naintara and dev...many times maanwould steel glances to geet...
 
 
after the movie everyone went to sleep...
 
 
 
(LET ME TALE A SMALL LEAP OF 5 DAYS..)
 
like this it self 5 days went in the same routine as maan trying to talk to geet and geet avoiding him by some reason or the other...
 
 
PART 18:
 
 
 
 
Today all planned to go for shopping…
All were ready and they came down except geet…dev called 3 taxies…
 
 
 
 
In one dev,naintara,naina,devanshi and nilesh were ready to go…they had place for 1 more so they asked maan to call geet..he went and came after 2 min. saying that geet will come in another oneWink…so they called him but he said that he would come after everyone….so the first one was gone….
 
 
 
 
 
Then in second one brij,lavi,karan,rano and mohinder were there…they asked maan about geet so he said that she had already gone in the first one itself….so they too wentWink….
 
 
 
 
 
They maan had a victory smileBig smileBig smile on his face…..then he saw geet coming he wiped off his smile and was with a straight face….geet came out and was locking the door….after locking maan saw her searching for the taxies….he saw her confusion and was trying to control her laughter….
 
 
 
 
Then he saw her going to the drivers standing and asking about the other…
 
 
G:suniye bhai sahib saari car kahan chali  gayi?
TD:mam 2 car tho chali gayi hai…aab aap aur yeh bahi sahib reh gaye hai aur aap ko is ek taxi mein jana hai…
G:aacha bhai shab mein baithe thi hun aur mujhe mall chood dena…
TD:ji madam…
 
Maan's hope was shattered into pieces CryCry he thought that he and geet would go alone….but then too he didn't lost hope….he saw in the direction of the car…geet went and sat in the back seat and the driver was coming near the car………
 
 
 
 
Maan ran to the driver and asked him the keys….after getting the keys he went and sat in the driving seat and started to drive the car……after exiting the gate of the home maan adjusted the rear mirror in such a way that he can see geet…..
 
 
 
 
 
He wanted geet to talk to him but he didn't get any topic on how to start…..then suddenly an idea struck on his mind..
 
 
M:geet how is south India?(maan asked in English as he knew even if he ask in hindi geet's answer would surely be in eng. Only rarely would reply in hindi to maan….maan wanted to know why is it like that??)
G:gud…
M:u know tamil na??
G:ya…
 
M:(bas ek shabdh iaise tho mera pass tho topic hi nahi rahega geet se baat karne ke liye)is it easy???
G:no!!!
M:oh then how did u learn???
G:u know what if a person stays in a place for 18 years then that person is to surely leard that language…ok….
M:ok…(angry…meri bhalie isi mein hai ki mein aabhi aapna muh bandh kar kar baithe rahun….)
 
 
(meri bhiLOLLOLLOL….sigh…………..)
 
 
 
They reached the mall……the shopped for everyone….
 
 
These are the things that they took……..
 
 
 
PART 19:
These are the things brought by all…
 
This is only one piece of shopping…marriage shopping was still remaining
 
To start with
Mohinder:he brought a t-shirt..
Rano:a suit material..
Brij:a t-shirt..
Lavi:a top…
Dev:a shirt..
Naintara:a designer sari..
Naina:(on compulsion)a suit material…
Geet:a white simple saree with border made of red colour..
Maan:a red t-shirt with "COOL" written on it….
 
 
Shopping ke baad tho khana banta hi hai so all went to the caf…
It consisted of a 6 chair table…so they took 2tables…
 
1st table: rano, mohinder,brij,lavi,dev,naintara occupied….
2nd table..:maan sat first(to give detailed description is important…)
To his right sat geet and left was devanshi…after geet was karan then naina after naina was nilesh…
 
 
 
 
Then after some time they ordered the items…
 
Both maan and geet at the same time,
"COLD COFFEE"…seeing this the remaining 4 burst into laughter..
 

(hope no one is interested in adult talks so I am not gonna write what they are talking…if anybody wants it feel free to say…)
 
Then all ordered…it came and all started to hav their drinks..maan was bored so he started to extend his legs having a naughty smile on his lips…he found a leg thinking it's geet's leg he started to brush his legs..
 
 
But actually it was devanshi's leg…as soon as devanshi felt it she got shocked where as was getting shocked that geet did not give reaction for it…..
 
 
 
Then devanshi bent down and saw that maan's leg was brushing her leg
 
D:maan chachu mujhe khujli nahi machal rahi hai…
M:???
D:chachu aap kyun mujhe itne der se khujar rahe ho???
 
 
Then only his brain worked he bent down and saw that it was not geet but devanshi's leg that he was brushing….he was embarrassed..but no one else understood…then after sometime naina started laughing understanding the situation and then geet too joined it…
 
 
 
Maan was totally embarrassed…
 
Then it was time to go so all decided to go how them came as till now they didn't knew how geet and maan came…hearing this maan was very happy…but his happiness was short lived when he heard brij and geet talk….
 
 
 
G:bhai pichle baar aap mujhe wahan chood aaye the na…
B:nahi mera baacha maan ne hi kaha tha ki tum nikal chuki ho isiliye hum aaye…..
G:choodo par iss baar mein aapke sang aayungi…..
 
 
With this all dreams of maan shattered into pieces…
 
 
 
PART 20:
Like this 10 days went the same way maan trying to please geet and know why is her behavior like this…that day night he came to know that he is the reason because of why she is behaving like this when he came across geet's room and heard geet and naina talking….
 
 
N:geet I want to talk to u seriously…
G:say naina..
N:why are u behaving like this????
G:means???
N:don't act with me…u know what I mean….
G:oh..i got it….
N:ok now say me why r u like this????
G:don't talk as u don't know….
N:I know so only I want to talk to u….
G:ok say what do u want me to do??
N:I hav seen him trying to talk to u lovingly…I have seen pure love in his eyes….why don't u accept his love…u should be happy that a person whom u…(she stopped suddenly…maan was listening to all this..)
G:u want me to accept it and cause danger to his life????
(hearing this maan was totally shocked….)
N:geet I know it…but don't u think u should give it a chance….
G:(standing and walking to the window..)what chance naina….
N:(she went near geet..)geet may be this might be a misunderstanding.
G:It is not a misunderstanding..
N:(after sometime like thinking)ok then it might be a coincidence…
G:naina no…
(With her maan knew that she was crying…..)
G:ok leave u go and sleep…
N:u??
G:I am not feeling sleepy…
N:ok…
 
 
After this naina went to sleep and maan saw geet sitting down and crying….he wanted to go and be by her side..but he controlled and went from there…from that time geet's words were coming to his mind and his night was restless..
Next morning maan wanted to go to her room and know how is she but before that he knew made a determination to know what was troubling her….why she was saying that if she accepts his love why will his life be in danger……
 
 
He got up and saw the direction of geet's room the room was opened and geet was coming out of the room….seeing her face maan gussed that she had not slept the whole night…..
 
 
Then they went down for breakfast…today they had to go to the designer for getting their wedding dresses as there were only 10 days for marriage…the preparation was on full swing…it was decided that after 5 days they would move for hosiyarpur…the next say satyanarayan katha, then mehendi,sangeet with haldi and finally the marriage…..
 
 
All were ready to go but geet's face was showing her tiredness….maan saw it…he didn't want her to go out in this condition…..so
 
M:bhai maine aabhi designer se baat kari hai…aur who keh rahe hai ki aaj aap mat aana…
D:kyun???
M:who kya hai na ki aaj unka boutique bandh hai…
D:aacha….par unhone kaha ki hum aaj aakar le sakthe hai….
M:haan bhai maine bhi yahi bola…tho who bole ki unka aadmi aaj designs la kar dikha dega….
D:aacha….
 
Saying so they all went back….but maan's mind was still roaming on yesterday's events…..
 
 
 
PART 21:
 
 
After 5 days ---- they were ready to go the hosyarpur….
This 5 days were very tiring for everyone as in this 5 days they had to do lot of shopping…like gifts,dresses,etc.etc.,…the marriage lehenga came and it was packed neatly and kept without showing to any one….
 
 
 
The dress design was known to only handa's and naina…they planned to keep it as a little secret for the wedding….
 
 
Finally they boarded the bus for going….as it was their own bus (refer before..)they went dancing all the way….dev was driving and naintara was sitting near him….suddenly all heard the song ABCDEF (hum aapke hain kuon..) they were searching the source for the song when dev showed his mobile indicating that his mobile was on….
 
then all started dancing on that song the after that song the song hum jo chalne lage(jab we met..)was running…even for this they danced…many danced like maan ,naina ,lavi ,devanshi ,even naintara joined…naina many times called geet but she refused…..
 
 
They were nearing hoshiyarpur….maan was really very happy that after 5 days he would be married to his love but till now he cannot know the reason for geet's aloofness towards him…..but he thought that till how many days will geet be aloof….
 
 
after 5 days she will come to him only na…..thinking this maan also stopped forcing geet to make convo. With him….
 
 
 
Before going to HP rano and mohinder wanted to go to temple…so the asked dev to stop near the temple……. They got down even geet got down along with naina...she got a aarthy thal and started climbing the temple stairs….here our maan cant be even for 2 min.
 
without seeing geet…as soon as geet started climbing he got down and ran behind her….and dev and naintara were there making fun of him……
 
 
When he reached there he saw that they started praying….so he removed his shoes and went inside…when he saw geet his heart started beating like a drum…he saw that geet was covering her head with her white dupatta,praying…..maan thought she was looking totally scenic…he was totally lost in her until naina came and disturbed him….he cursed her under his breath for disturbing him…..but then what she said totally embarrassed him…..
N:oo mere hone wale jiju….bhagwan use taraf hai naki is taraf!!!!..
M:(totally embarrassed…but trying to cover up…)aacha honi wali saali sahiba…mein tho aapne bhagwan ko hitho dekh raha hun(referring to geet…)
 
 
Hearing this naina was totally shocked…she started feeling pity for him because ereelovesher this much and there……
 
She thought…geet u r very lucky…though u don't love him or…whatever he still loves u very much….may god keep them always together…inspite of geet's behavior….god please……
 
 
Then all came back for temple and then reached HP…..
 
 
There they were welcomed in a very grand way….they were to stay in rano's sister home which was a little far form maan's home…as they reached there they said formal hi and went to rano's sister home..(name:pammi…)..pammi was very nice natured…she was living in a apartment with his hubby and 2 children…..she has 3 but 1 was working….but for her sister marriage she came….pammi's home was filled with laughter as it was filled with guests…..
 
 
 
After reaching there her sister sameera started teasing her….some how naina came there and said geet to fresh up…..as they were going to do the final shoppings….(please note:in my ff don't consider HP as a small town….in this it is like a city…..so they have many facilities…)….
 
That's all for today…
 
 
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PART 22:
 
That day was schelduded for the ganpati pooja followed by the engagement…so all guests started coming and there was a lot of hustle bustle going on in the homes of the both families..geet was asked to get fresh as she should not look tired evening…
 
 
It was after noon and all the guests were resting….SAMEERA and GEET went to parlour with NAINA…there geet was made to get ready as the mohurat of pooja was 6:00 and engagement was 7:30..
 
On reaching parlour the beautician said geet to get changed…after changing she was made to sit in front of mirror…the beautician did golden facial…and her hair was made as a buff…then her nails were painted and face was made more beautiful by applying mascara,lipgloss,khol,and a simple bindi…her jewellery was put on…in true sense she was looking as a bride for her engagement…
 
 
the remaining just did simple facial and were ready….when the saw geet they started to tease her saying that MAAN would become flat seeing her…they had to stay there and was to go when rano would call them as the bride should not be seen by any one before the pooja…
 
 
it was 6:15 when the call came and asked them to come as all would be busy in the pooja…..so the beautician did touchup for geet and they left for their home..
 
 
when they reached they saw rano waiting for them…as soon as rano saw geet she took her to her room and made her sit in front of the AC to avoid the sweat….
 
After the pooja of the groom's side the pandit called the bride…rano went to bring geet….many gasps were heard when geet came….when maan saw her he just wanted drown in her eyes…but his bad luck that geet didn't even meet his eyes….when geet came and stood beside maan he felt goose bumps…
 
 
And the pooja started with the contribution of both bride and groom….after the pooja the pandit asked the groom's parents to came and bless both…..they came and blessed them together…after that all went to the terrace for the engagement since there only arrangements were made….
 
 
Maan wanted to talk to geet but she was not at all seeing him….he started to get  a little frustration…when they were going up without the knowledge of anyone he pulled geet aside and whispered…."U ARE MINE SO EVEN IF U IGNORE ME THIS WONT CHANGE THE FACT….SO STOP IGNORING ME AND ENJOY….THIS IGNORANCE WONT CAUSE ANY DIFFERENCE IN ME DECISION"…saying so he went off leaving a baffled geet….after calming herself and making a final decision she went to the terrace….
 
 
There almost all had come and now it was the time Afor the ring exchange….so the bride and the groom was made to sit together…and the families came with her ring….th first turn was of maan…he took the ring and looked at geet….she was still not looking at him….but he took her hand resulting in the hooting of the crowd and made her wear the ring…now it was geet's turn….she took the ring and kept in front of maan….all were waiting to know what geet will do but were disappointed when maan himself kept his hands in front….many said that maan would be"JORU KA GULAM"but maan didn't hear anything…geet made him wear the ring and they ware 1 step ahead in their relation and were called as eachother's fianc…after that all the guests started leaving….
 
 
Even maan's family was starting to leave….geet's family went with them to drop them….all were exhausted….so they decided to rest for some time as the next day would be mehandi and they had many works to do for that….so this day came to an end…..and there was only 3 more days for the name maan and geet to become MANEET…..
 
 
GEET's LEHENGA:
 
 
 
RINGS:
MAAN's                                                                   
 
 
GEET'S
 
 
 
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