Zeee...
I love you tooo... Yayyy
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Well even i was surprised at how long i'd written, but unfortunately i can't guarantee the same length everytime, bloody hectic schedule, you know, right?
I can so imagine your owl like condition, have been through the same a lot many times, lol...
Obviously, flattery takes away the fun, so totally avoid it ;)
Paisa vasool, that is what your ff is :p
If you still have any inhibitions, throw them away, this ff is one of the most successful experiments, thanks to your zeal for it...
I can understand the fear of no one appreciating or reading ur work, have felt the same a lot many times, but that's how we writers are, silly people...
Coming to my He man, he turned out to be Barun, wow! Don't i like him? Love him is the word...
I feel a little embarassed to say, but i'm eagerly waiting for the summary wala He man as well...
Because somehow, his personality is really intriguing...
He may be the bad guy, against the slaves, but i still feel a connection to him, like he could be Karanvir Bohra for all you know, and like girl's drool over him despite his negative role, i too feel a certain attraction towards him...
Hmmm... San and Em are also deep, though it doesn't show that much, lol...
Wow! I get a clearer picture of Em and San's relation now that you put it out properly...
San's naivety and cuteness appealed to my heart too...
And for once, i did relate to her, because i too have embarassed myself to the core in front of total strangers for something i love as much as San loves cars...
The longing, the excitement, just all of this has happened recently, and thereby, i loved San in this one...
Hats off to how well you put the emotions...
No, i wanna guess lesser, because this is a mystery, it's no fun if i get everything correct, i should be correct only some times, ok???
In this chapter, you allowed us a peek inside Em and Abhinav's minds...
Em is totally right in being on her guard against Abhinav, after those phone calls...
If someone bangs my phone like this, i would rather kill them :p
Abhinav definitely led a dual personality, so arrogantly rude on the phone, and so sweet on face, is there some catch?
I liked Abhinav and Barun's conversation hell lot...
Black blood???
I am super confused, because even vampires have red blood, werewolves too...
So what the hell are Abhinav and Barun???
Let me see... Barun and Abhinav belong to the clan of slaves, don't they?
Barun needs to be trained, i'm dead sure to fight off the He who was in the summary...
But what i'm confused now is, whether Barun has to be trained to fight with all the slaves, or does the summary wala He has some personal rivalry against Barun, maybe because Barun could be the son of the head of the slaves, and the heir to the slave clan, or whatever whatever whatever...
I'm eagerly waiting for more to unfold...
Regarding Barun, after Abhinav's cool and decent image, i'd thought Barun would be the arrogant jerk, more pig headed than his cousin...
But tables turned, because though Barun doesn't seem too social, he is the naive one amongst the two...
Compared to Abhinav, Barun is childlike, not actually childlike, but only when compared to Abhinav, coz for all you know, Barun may be hell fierce too...
Yet, Barun seems more emotional, or we could say has a difficulty in controlling his emotions, unlike Abhinav...
Barun brought the innocence in Abhinav and his relation, somewhat like San doew with Em and herself...
Wow! I'm badly dying to read more...
So make sure you update super soon Zee...
Love
pooja
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