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shadi shadi shadi...itna hungama itna shor itni chahal pahal itni excitment...pta nhi logo ko dusre ki shadi me itna intrest aur excitment kyun rhta h...khair ho gyi shadi chhut gya purani jindgi ka hath...wo jindgi jise m aajtk apna samajh kr jeeti aa rhi thi ...jiske hr pal ko hr lamhe ko mne pakad k rakha taki kabhi bhi wo ankho se chalke na...kahi khoye na..wo jindgi jisse jyada apna mera koi nhi tha..wo jindgi jo mere chehre ki hr muskan hr majburi hr ummeed hr ansu ki gawah thi...wo jindgi jispr m apna haq samajh kr jiye ja rhi thi ki ye h meri jindgi ...aaj do pal me pta chal gya ki wo to kabhi meri thi hi nhi...use to hamesha se pta tha ki use yhi rh jana h...ye to m hi thi jo is bhrm se us jindgi hath itni majbuti se pakda tha ki kabhi chhutega hi nhi..hehehe..lekin kya hua...tut gya na bhrm chhut gya na zindgi ka hath...

Kamal h na...jis jindgi ko jindgi bhr apna samajh kr ji rhi thi wo to apni rhi nhi aur jo apni ban k mere samne khadi h ab use apnane se dr lag rha h...lekin ab to phir se ek nayi jindgi ko apna kr phir se ek naye sire se sapne saja kr phir se utne hi apne pan k sath ise bhi jeena h...to yha se shuru hota h jindgi ka ek naya safar...khair...

Ab ye hai mera ajnabee ghr ...jisme na jane kitne ajnabi chehre hain jinse jan pehchan bnani h phir unhe apnana h phir apne se bhi jyada apna bnana h...hr chehra ek paheli h..sabki ek ansuni kahani h..hr rishte ki ek alag nishani h..jinse mujhe jan pehchan bnani h..chalo bhai shuru ho jao...ek ek krke namune samne lao..khair is waqt to sabse badi namuna m hi hu...qki sari nazare to mujhpr hi tiki h...jane kya dekhna chahti h ye nazare..kitni andr tk dekhengi mujhe...ufff..kitna mushkil hota h itni nazaro ko sehna...khair...ye imtihan bhi paas kr liye...baki test to jindgi bhr chalte rhengen aur paas fail hona laga rhega...lekin ab bari h jindgi k sase bade imtihan ki jo jindgi ki dasha aur disha tay karega ki wo kis raftar se kis trf chalegi...

To ab main aa gyi is ajnabee ghr jo ki abhi abhi mera hua h..k ek anjan kamre me..jo shayad kuchh der,kuchh pal,kuchh ghanto ya kuchh dino bad..meri kisi bhi apni cheez se bhi jyada apna hone wala h...is kamre ka hr kona jo mujhe is waqt ajube ki trh ajeeb si ankho se ghur k dekh rha h..whi tab mujhe apni inhi ankho me beshumar pyaar bhr ke dekhega...mere hr pal ke khushi gum ka gawah banega...meri is so called ajnabi jindgi jo ki bht hi apni ho chuki hogi ka ek atut hissa ban jayega...

Ufff...kitna sannata h yha ...na koi awaj na koi hulchul..phir bhi kitna shor hai...
Shor un sanso jo aj se pehle ek ek krke ati thi aaj tufan ki trh chal rhi h...shor un dhadkano ka jo aj se pehle 72/m thi...aj 172/m ho gyi h...shor un chudiyo aur kangano ka jo aj pehli bar mere hatho me ek sath ayi h aur aate hi bhs krne lagi...jane kiske liye itna shor macha rhi h..shayad dr aur ghabraht me bhs ho rhi h...shor us payal ka jo apni maujudgi ka ehsas krane k liye kabhi kabhi is bhs me shamil ho ja rha h...shor us jhumke ka jo sabse jyada bechain h us chehre ko chhune k liye jiske sath aaj uska naya naya rishta bna h...ufff...itni shor k beech badlo se nikal kr wo chehra aa gya...jise ye sb dekhne k liye bht bechain the..aur ab to bechaini k sath sath..shor bhi aur jyada ho gya h...hr koi apni apni trh se laga hua h us ajnabi chehre se hone wali mulakat ka ehsas karne ke liye...pr in sb k chakkr me halat to meri khrab ho rhi h...pta nhi kya hone wala h...aaj to zindgi aisi lag rhi h jaise koi museam h..jiske andr bht salo se bht sari cheeze rakhi hui h lekin mne abhi tk nhi dekhi...jane andr jane pr usme se kya ajube dekhne ko milenge...hadh h...

Jaise wo chehra pas aata ja rha h shor badhta ja rha h..dusro k liye itna sannata h ki sui girne ki bhi awaj aa jaye aur mere liye itna shor h ki meri bhi ahat mujhe na sunayi de...ab wo chehra bilkul mere samne h...ekdm kareeb...ab sab kuchh shant ho gya...sab kuchh tham gya h..bs ek dr reh gya h ki kaise is chehre ko apnau ki ye hmesha k liye mera apna ho jaye aur kabhi dur na jaye...

Ufff...ye achanak se itna shor kaisa hone laga...hadh h...kya h ye...
O teri priya...teri shadi to awaz ke sath ho gyi h...shit...achha hua tune aj hi ye sapna dekh liya qki is ghr me to tujhe sapna ane se rha ..qki sapne dekhne k liye chain ki neend chahiye aur wo tujhe is ghr me to milne se rhi...ok priya welcome to voice land...hahaha...& welcome 2 u also mr.kharrate kapoor...fr disturbing my life & my neend...waise sote hue bade achhe lagte hain..bs awaz bht krte h..

Priya ram ko dekhte dekhte sone ki nakam koshish krti h...

Aplog soch rhe honge ki m itne purane episode pe os kyun likh rhi hu...qki m ye episods dekh rhi thi to deemag chal gya...hahaha...enjoy..


Edited by veena23 - 17 August 2012 at 2:34am

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 12:19am | IP Logged
so true... great job

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasshuu

so true... great job
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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Hi veena23... Its excellent n awesome... You r just great... You have narrated it beautifully... I like the concept of AJNABI... I love it... Simple n different... Thanks

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Hi veena23... Its excellent n awesome... I must say u r great writer... U have narrated it beautifully... I like the concept of AJNABI... I love it... Simple n different... Thanks

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PURVIVA

Hi veena23... Its excellent n awesome... I must say u r great writer... U have narrated it beautifully... I like the concept of AJNABI... I love it... Simple n different... Thanks


aww thank u sooo much dear...glad that u like itHeart

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
awsm...mzawa gya...isko continue kro bht cute story bnao,..ajkal to ram priya milte ni ap hi story bna k khush krdo:-):-)

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loved it veena. thanks

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