Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
geet found maan..
guru is in danger..
may be the bullet is also 4 guru..
the hard shell msk crying..
hmmm that is called blood
geet saying funnily she will garland maan..
n we know geet maan ki hai..but how..w8ing 2 know..

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged
part 6
nice part...
so Geet has seen Maan...
and he has come to know about his siblings too...
cont soon dear...

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Desigirls12 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged

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H2 - 7


As morning rays falls on Maan , he wakes up.  Due to exhaustion, Maan slept in te gym last night.

Maan gets up and saw he was lying in te floor and  he saw  te time, it was 8'clock

Maan : oh shit, I slept so long, he got up , went to  his  room and  get ready and  gets into te car. He went to finish his mission

Maan got a call : were is he

Person : at ur xy construction site

Maan and Adi went to xy  site. Maan enter to site  in his style, there MR.Gupta was tied  and blood was  flowing non stop  from his body. Wen he saw Maan

Gupta : Mr.Khurana, aap , so  behind  all tis u r te one

Maan smirks  at him : so smart Mr.Gupta

Gupta : Khurana  stop ur play or u have to face te consequence , u don't know  to  who im

Maan laughed : how come  both te friends saying te same thing

Gupta : both friends ?

Maan : chopra

Gupta was so shocked : so u killed  him

Maan : any doubt

Gupta : ur  playing with ur death KHURANA, u know whom ur dealing with

Maan laughed hysterically : RAHUL KHANNA

Gupta was shocked

Maan : am I right Gupta

Gupta :  u know  him, but u don't wat kind of person he is, u want to die like ur parents did, then go ahead

Maan  tightened his fist and closed his eyes.

Gupta laughed :  now  u scared,  u  know   ur dad   too  mess  with my  boss  Rahul,  he  didt leave  ur dad's ashes too. Te great  YASH SINGH KHURANA ,  was disappear  from  tis world , but no proof against my boss, te same thing is going to happen to his son.  He will make te name  khuranas  to disappear from te world. u meet  him soon  Khurana, he is cuming to meet u.  he is cuming

Maan opened his eyes , Gupta was  was shocked to see  Maan's eyes  which pured burning volcano.

Maan laughed :wat did u say he is cuming to meet me, and he smirks, nice joke

Maan : I  made  him  to cum  here.  I was  planning  for  20 years  u listened  20 years,  wen   I came to know  he  killed  my  parents  and  separate  me  from  my  siblings.  My papa   YASH SINGH KHURANA very  soft  heart  person,  forgive  even  his  enemies.  But  me  im  MAAN SINGH KHURANA,  te real  HELL, will  burn  tis  whole  world  to  get  wat  im  want,  roaring  like  lion  which  echoed  te  whole building.

Gupta was so scared to see him, he felt he is standing in front of  angry sher who hunting for his prey.

Maan : so better don't threaten with  ur silly jokes. Now sign tis , and wait for ur boss in ur hell.

Gupta : no I wont, do whatever u want, any how  u will kill me after I sign, so better u do it., I will not sign

Maan : ok then as u wish, but before u die  u want see ur daughter

Gupta  was shocked : daughter

Maan : ah  Mr. Gupta ur  daughter  who  is  staying  with  ur  mom  in  ur  village, u  want  to  see  her

Maan  eyed  Adi,  then  Adi  on  te  screen,  16  year  girl  running  in  te  field, some  mens  watching  her away.

Maan : Gupta  I  should  say  ur  daughter  looks  pretty  sexy  rather  than  ur  girlfriends,  whom  u  r changing  for  seasons.

Gupta :  pls  don't  harm  her, pls  he  started  to  beg

Maan : I will if u sign or else see my mens are watching her

Gupta   tilt his head in defeat,

Maan :  good

Adi  gave  te  papers , Gupta  signed  it,  Maan  got  from  te  chair to leave

Gupta :   Khurana  u   think  u  win,  but  my  boss  Rahul  wont  leave  u,  u  will  suffer  for  ur death , how  ur  parents  struggled. U  will  Khurana

That is  te limit   for  Maan, he closed his eyes , took his gun, wen he opened his eyes , there lied Gupta's dead body due to continous gun shot.

Maan  came  out and fuming in  angry, now  he   wants to  burn  tis  world  to  calm  himself ,  he  took his  alcohol  bottle  and  drunk  fully. Adi  stopped  him, but  he  glared  him  and  sat  inside  te car.

Te  car  started to  move, that  time  his  phone  started  to  ring,  seeing  his  condition,  Adi took te call.

Adi : wat , ok I will inform sir, Adi was  so  happy to  hear  te  news  tat  Guru  and  Ani  was  alive,  now he  know  tat  Maan  will  get  his  family  back  and  his  happiness  too.

Adi : sir  tat detective agency called and said tat they mailed full details of Guru

Maan  saw  him,  Adi  nodes  his  head  and  had  tears  in  his  eyes  and smiling  at him.

Maan  opens  his  mail and saw,  was so  shocked  to  see  Guru  who looks  like him.

Then  he saw  his  princess  Ani  and had   tears  but wipe it  with  out other  notices  it.

then he saw some  girl's pic

Maan (st) : oh  she is  Guru's  fianc

Then  he go  through   full  details  , he  came  to know  tat  Guru  finished  his studies  in   through  orphan   school,  and  now working  in  small  consent,  for  40, 000 salary.  Now  he is  staying  in  small apartment  in  xyz  area with  his  sister and  his  finc.

Maan  (st) : multimillionaire,  working  for  40,000 which  he giving  for  his  Body guards

He  started  to read , he came to know  he is  working  as  police  informer . then some thing  stircks  him

Maan : Adi did u  try  to  find  them, who attack  tat day

Adi : ah  sir  some  Shankar lal,  some  local  goon,  aimed  to  some one,  but  our mens  are tracing  him  sir

Maan : Adi Guru's life  is  in  danger

Adi  was  shocked  : wat , then  tat mens  thought  u  as  Guru

Maan  nodes  his  head

Adi  :  now  wat  to  do

Maan : ask  driver  to go  to  tis  address

Adi  smiles  at  him ,  and nodes


Here ,  Guru's flat

Dadi : Guru  we  are  going   for  shopping  to  buy  some girls  stuffs, 

Guru : no Dadi  im  not  cuming

Dadi :  good  better  u be  in home  till we  cums

Guru :  ok   Dadi , me too  having some  works, so I  will be  in home  till u cums

Dadi   stares  at him

Guru : wat Dadi why  u staring at  me

Dadi : u  same  like Maan, he too  always  work, work, like  machine  he will works

Dadi  had tears  in her eyes thinking  abt  Maan. Guru cums  and side hugs her.

Guru : Dadi  don't  worry  we  will change  him and  get nice girl  for him like our Geet

Ani : yes  Dadi, we will change my Maan  bhai too and get  him  married  to a girl like our Geet, she too hugs  Dadi

Dadi  hugs  both of them

Geet :  Guru  don't think smart  abt u,  all tis  only now,  after  our  marriage  I will house arrest u

Ani : Geet  its  not  house  arrest  ,  room  arrest

hearing tis Geet's mouth open to touch te ground

Geet :  chi  chi  babaji naughty girl  and  started to  chase  her , and  Ani  runs  and hides  behind Guru

Guru   holds  Geet's  hands  :  wat  is  wrong in tat , she is  correct  and  winks  at her

Geet  glares  at him and   Guru too glares at her

Geet : beshram

Dadi : why u all teasing  my bahu

Geet : thanku Dadi  , and  shows  her  tongue  to  Guru  and  Ani

Dadi  : ok  cum  now we  hav  to go  or  it will be late

Three left  Guru  alone  in te flat

Guru was  working  , his  phone rings, he took te call

Guru :  hello inspector

Ip : Guru I got  a information, tat Shankar is planning  to kill u, so better be  care ful

Guru : don't worry  sir , we will catch him before  he harms  me

Ip : I will arrange  security for u

Guru : no need sir, I will manage

Ip : but Guru

Guru : its ok sir  and  they started  to discuss abt some thing, his  door  bell rings

Guru opens  te  door , with phone  in his ear.. went to  door opens, he stood numb, his phone drops to  te floor.

Maan was  looking at him, like a  five  old  boy, who  missed his brother   in a crowd and got  him after  long search.

Guru and  Maan   was  staring  at each other, with out  a word, as they heart was bursting .




NEXT PART :part 8


Edited by Desigirls12 - 04 November 2012 at 4:59am

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Sparkling-eyes5 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged
amazing update...

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vrinda22 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged
me grabbed second position
awesome update
maan a true devil
he killed that man
wow..loved that line
i made ur boss come here..
truely brilliant maan...
guru,ani n geet part was funny
light hearted
teasings was gud
maan guru met..
so next part emotional atyachar hai kya????

Edited by valli22 - 28 October 2012 at 5:35am

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shri12 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:35am | IP Logged
wow this is awesome maan and guru met and guru's life is in danger

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sanam1234u Goldie

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
wow...nice finaly maan meet guru...cant wait for next part..

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lovesia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged

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