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||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147 (Page 63)

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Don't be sorry naina...it is okay...happy nahi bohot happy...yayy...DancingDancingDancing

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
i am so happy that u are happy... the wait will soon be over guys... may be only in an hour...
 
love u all...
muah...


Edited by naina927 - 14 March 2013 at 2:59am

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Originally posted by naina927


i am so happy that u are happy... the wait will soon be over guys... may be only in an hour...
love u all...
muah...



we want a longgg update...

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 6:33am | IP Logged
chap 23
in
10
minutes...
 
 
extremely sorry for the delay...
 

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THANKS NAINA
EAGERLY WAITING
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aur kitni stories hain yar apki??Smile 

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 6:48am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 24

manvi came down for breakfast...
everybody : happy birthday mannu...
manvi : thank u soo much...
rikesh : god bless my princess... so what does my princess need for birthday present...???
naina : hmmm... what a golden chance that is... dnt let it go...
manvi : dad i will get everything tonight n after that i will ask u for my birthday present...
rikesh : tonight...??? whats gonna happen tonight...???
manvi : there is a surprise for u all... it would just be amazing...
jeevika : yeah dad... a very amazing surprise... i bet...
naina : my dear daughters, what baout we have breakfast first...
manvi : haan haan... mujhe toh bahut bhookh lag rahi hai...

after the breakfast
badi b : aaj ye dayan itni khush kyun hai...??? kuch toh hai...??
naina : badi b woh... aaj virat manvi ko na propose karne wala hai...
badi b : kya karne wala hai...???
naina : propose... ab propose ko hindi mein kya kehte hai...???
badi b : bechare mere boyfriend ko teri beti pagal kar degi...
naina : badi b sambhal ke... aapka boyfriend meri beti se bahut pyaar karta hai...
badi b : bas tu samajh gayi na naina puttar mujhe kuch nahi chahie aur... aur mujhe propose ka matlab bhi pta hai... jeevika ne samjhaya mujhe...
naina : aap bhi na badi b...

after sometime...
naina saw her mobile ringing and picked it up...
naina : hello...
prem : aunty i m prem...
naina : prem beta... how are you...???
prem : i m fine aunty... manvi...???
naina : she is also better prem... are you okk...??? i mean dont worry too much for manvi... she will be fine...
prem : hmmm... by the way its her birthday today... can i wish her...?? please...
naina ; prem i know you have all the right on her but with which relation you would call her n wish her... she knows u as virat's friend... so its better if u wish her in the party itself...
prem : i wish i could... i have to go for an important meeting... i recently joined the business n i cant miss this... but i am afraid i wont be able to make it tonight...
naina : beta i dont want to hurt you but...
prem : its okkk... i understand...
naina : god bless you prem...
prem : thank u aunty... bye...
naina : bye...

after the lunch...
manvi was making last minute preparations for the party when jeevika came n scared manvi...
jeevika : bhooo...
manvi : di... u scared me...
jeevika : thats what i intended to mannu... okk tell me did virat call yesterday night...??/
manvi (blushing) : yes...
jeevika : haaye... so what did he say...???
manvi : jai maharashtra... obviously he said happy bday...
jeevika : haha... very funny... did he only say happy bday...?? (asked while smiling and nudged manvi)
manvi : diii...
jeevika : what diii...?? tell me na...
manvi : okk... he said taht he loves me and...
jeevika (excitedly): and... speak up fast manvi...
manvi : rest of teh convo is personal... i cant keep telling people about it...
jeevika : haawww... u called me people... what is this mannu...???
manvi : samjho na di... i cant...
jeevika : ok let it be... lets start getting ready...
manvi : yeah di... only 3 hours left...
jeevika : yeah... me going... u also get ready mannu...
manvi : thanks di... bye...

scene shifts
vadera mansion

virat : bhai i am nervous...
viren : nervous... mere sher darr mat... jaa aur bol de i love you...
virat : 100 logon ke saamne bolna padhe na tab pta chale apko...
viren : meri jeevika manvi nahi hai na... toh main kaise...
virat : kya...??? bhai manvi sirphiri nahi hai...
viren : maine kuch kaha tha kya...?? tune khud hi...
virat : hehehe... but this proposal thing is just...
viren : i can understand...
virat : bhai this time i wont let manvi go... i love her and she will be fine... i have now left everything on destiny... now destiny will either bring me n manvi togther or separate us...
viren : thats the best option probably... just live these moments virat for they might never come back...
virat : i know bhai... thanks...

at the party...
manvi came down the stairs with a spotlight following her and soft music being played in the background...
while 100 of ppl were admiring and congratulating the birthday girl who was looking no less than a princess but manvi's eyes were busy searching for the face she was dying to see... she scanned the whole hall but didnt find virat anywhere... manvi excused herself from the crowd and went to vanshika...
manvi : aunty...
vanshika : happy bday mannu...
manvi : thank u aunty... woh virat...??
vanshika : he was here only beta...
manvi : okk... i will look for him...
manvi saw viren and decided to go and ask him. while she was thinking only one thing that sonia was also not there and can she be with virat or not...
viren : happy bday ms. manvi chaudhary...
manvi : thank u viren bhaiya... wo apke sirphira bhai kahan hai...
viren : he was talking to sonia few minutes back...
manvi got jealous as soon as she heard sonia's name and smiled faintly at viren...
manvi : i will just be back...
just then  the light went off and manvi froze there as she was scared of darkness. suddenly a spotlight came on manvi and she was shocked...
virat : this ones for u partner...
manvi heard virat's voice and smiled. the she saw him coming from the other corner of the hall with a guitar in his hand...
 
Main ishq uska woh aashiqui hai meri - 2

i m her love, she is love of mine

woh ladki nahi zindagi hai meri - 2

she is not just a girl but she is my life

(he came near manvi, his eyes not leaving her even for a second and he contently watching her facial expressions which were changing rapidly... from anger to shock to happiness to a deep pink blush...)

Uske hi dil main 

in her heart

aab to rehna hai har dum

i want to stay every moment

uss dil ruba se kehna hai har dum

i want to say her everytime

(he stood in front of manvi and winked at her, to which came her reply of looking down n blushing...  he moved around her in circles and everytym brushed his fingers or shoulder with her... this made manvi lost herself in him n his touch... )

Main ishq uska woh aashiqui hai meri - 2
woh ladki nahi zindagi hai meri - 2

Khusboo jaisi aaye jaaye  (her back was facing virat and he moved in front of her)

like the fragrance she comes and goes

kitna dil ko woh tadpaye (pointing at his heart...)

how much it hurts the heart

meri sansein meri dhadkan

my breathes, my heartbeat

woh hai mera deewanapan (eyeing manvi n smirking...)

she is my craziness

betaabiyon main hai woh raahat ka mausam

in the restless time she is the season of peace

uske liye hi meri chaahat ka mausam  (pointing his finger at manvi...)

for her only, is my love season

main hosh uska woh bekhudi hai meri  (gave his guitar to a waiter and offered manvi to join him for a dance)

i m his senses, she is the reason of my restleessness

main ishq uska woh aashiqui hai meri

woh ladki nahi zindagi hai meri - 2 (manvi without wasting even a single second gave her hand into his...)

Aankhon main hai uska chehra  ( now they were dancing to the rhythm of the music in each other's arms )
in my eyes her face is there

yaadon main hai uska pehra (virat pulled manvi close to him...)

in my remembrance she is the one

main hu rahi woh hai manzil (manvi was now lost in his eyes and was smiling widely... )

i m walking for she is my destination

karna hai ab usko haasil (manvi moved her hand from his shoulder to his neck and riffuled his hair)

n i want to make her mine

in dhadkanon main baje uski hi sargam ( virat was now losing his senses, he pulled the love of his life more close to himself and his fingers roamed on her bare back making various unknown patterns sending shivers down her spine...)

my heart plays her tunes

woh meri jaana hain woh meri jaanam ( he then kiss her forehead showing her that he would always be there for here no matter what...)

she is my loved one and i m hers

Main chain uska woh tishnagi hai meri (manvi closed her eyes to absorb that touch of his... this sweet n cute gesture of virat was making her fall for him all over again...)

i m the peace of her , she is reason of me being restless

main ishq uska woh aashiqui hai meri (manvi settled herself in his arms and rested her head against his chest...)
woh ladki nahi zindagi hai meri - 2

the music ended but virat n manvi continued dancing as they were lost in each other. the lights were switched on n everybody was looking at the couple in front of their eyes in awe... viren saw this and started clapping for them. seeing him, the crowd clapped for virat n manvi which brought them out of their virman land... virat left manvi immediately and manvi blushed and she was about to move when virat held her wrist again. this hsocked manvi more, she turned back and whispered " virat... what are doing...??? leave my hand... everybody is watching... "
virat : lemme complete my punishment sweetie...
manvi pleaded " virat... "
virat : you only wanted me to propose u here in front of 100 unknown people... i am only doing what you asked me to...
manvi : i am nervous...
virat : so am i... but i have to...
manvi : hmmm...
virat : meri bandariya...
manvi : what...??? aise propose karoge...??? shit virat...!!!!
virat : shhh... ms. manvi chaudhary i want to be a part of your life... i want some time out of your busy schedule... trust me i just want next 60 years of your life... i want to marry you, have children with you, i want to bring them up with you, get them married and spend the rest of my life with you... manvi your life n your heart is like a big chocolate cake and i want just a slice of that cake... i want to be a part of your beautiful life... i want to be the one who will be loved by you... i want to be the one who will have lal right on you... i want to be th eone who you can look upto at anytime of your life... i want to the one on whose shoulder you can cry if u feel like... by the way i promise i wont let you cry ever... i wont let even a single tear come in your beautiful eyes...i want to be the one who will see your face every morning and every night... i want to wake up by you and sleep after seeing you sleeping peacefully in my arms... i want to fulfill each n every dream of yours... i want to show you the whole world... i want to be the one who will be only yours... so will you be mine...??? so will u gimme me the pleasure of being your life partner...???
manvi was now in tears and nodded in a yes...
manvi : ring...
virat : oops... yeah...
virat took out the ring from this pocket and made manvi wear it... manvi looked at the ring on her finger, kissed it and then hugged virat...
manvi : i love you... Heart Heart
virat : i love you too... Heart

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ps : this proposal thing have tortured me like anything ... so cope up with this... i know its lame... but i am not that romantic n experienced... so i couldnt give u guys a proper romantic proposal thing... Embarrassed



Edited by naina927 - 10 May 2013 at 5:55am

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Originally posted by fatima06

aur kitni stories hain yar apki??Smile 
 
 
thats a tough question... i also dnt know... have a look at my index...

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