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SAATHIYA-[KRIYANSH FF]CH-1 UPDT (Page 14)

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kriti_rox

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agar kuch aur copy na kiya ho toh
mein ne cut kia tha
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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kriti_rox

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agar nhi kiya tha toh
dubara paste karo
mein last one line cut ki,sirf woh line abki hain
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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged

Thanks to everyone for theircomment and likes.i am happy by ur respondes.Sorry for late update .this is 4th time I am writing this update,due spamming error.thanks aroma,kriti and himani fot their support,I am not satisified with this phir bhi jo aay who likh dia.


                                   chapter-1

Girl [to herself]:maa aap meri saath kya kel kel rahi hu.mein aaj vaha jaa rahi hu jaha mein 2 saal pehele mein sapno sakar karne keliye gayi thi,ab mein apni di ki bachone ke sapne pura karne ke liya vaha jaa rahi hu,mein inn dono ko woh zari khushi dena chathi hu jo meri di aur jiju dena chathi thi par woh  de nahi payi.is liye mein apni adid ki amne samne ane ke liye tyar hu,yeh meri jithni bhi zari yaade thi woh sab ek bura sapna tha,woh ab meri zindgi mein koi minear nahi rak thi.ab mere liye sirf pihu aur adi ki khushi minear  rakthi hain.maa mujhe uthna shakti dena ki mein yeh sab acha se kar pawoo.

the girl is none other than our dear kria.she was looking like an angel who has fallen  from heaven.her long thick wavy hair was left open.she wore an simple pink anarkali with matching accessories.

kria's dress-http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=pink+anarkali+salwar+kameez&start=128&num=10&hl=en&biw=1366&bih=634&tbm=isch&tbnid=reEzrhHXzGBC-M:&imgrefurl=http://www.cbazaar.com/readymade-salwars/readymade-anarkali/astounding-pink-net-long-anarkali-churidar-set-p-sldaa88559.html&imgurl=http://www.cbazaar.com/images/Astounding-Pink-Net-Long-Anarkali-Churidar-Set-SLDAA88559-u.jpg&w=800&h=1100&ei=E1dAUKOqLIbkrAeT64DgBg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=316&vpy=205&dur=904&hovh=263&hovw=191&tx=110&ty=129&sig=110571768724538619235&page=5&tbnh=138&tbnw=98&ndsp=35&ved=1t:429,r:11,s:128,i:141

she the goes out and starts  to walk.she is getting irritated as she is getting late + she is not getting any auto to reach college

kria:[irritated]:patha nahi mumbai ki zari auto wala kaha chali gayi,space mein auto walao ka meeting chal raha hain kya ki zarar ki zare gayab ho gayi.

kria[irritated,to herself]:wah aaj college ki pehli din hain aur aaj bhi late.universeji aap ko toh bohut maza aa rahi hongna mujhe aise dekhar.apko mujhse kya problem hain?mein apki kya bigada hain.duniya mein jithne bhi problems ho woh aap meri zaar pe rakh thi hu.mujhe kuch galat fami hui hain mein mother thearse nahi hu mein kria ghai hu. remeber  smriti ghai ki beti kria ghai.hhh chodo apko yeh sab baata ke kyu apna time waste kar rahi ho,muje aap se koi baat nahi karni.maa[durga]please meri help kar do.

Suddenly an expensive white bike comes and was going hit kria and she some how escapes

white bike-http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=white+sports+bike&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1366&bih=634&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=Qq7Ji0eBJunrTM:&imgrefurl=http://www.cmsnl.com/news/new-white-gsx-r1000-introduced-by-suzuki_news491.html&imgurl=http://www.cmsnl.com/news/img/Suzuki_GSX-R1000K8_white.jpg&w=455&h=322&ei=vX1AULGBI4q0rAfKuIAo&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=304&vpy=152&dur=233&hovh=189&hovw=267&tx=117&ty=105&sig=110571768724538619235&page=1&tbnh=126&tbnw=178&start=0&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0,i:76

Kria:oye dekha gadi chala nahi sakta ,anda hu kya,mujhe marne ki kasam ka ke aayi hu kya?gadha,Bandar

The bike take  reverse and comes towards her.the guy removes the helmet ,we could the face of handsome person.after seeing each other

Guy[surprised]:jaan

Kria;[surprised]karthi

The guy was karthik ,kria bff from childhood.they each other jaan and karthi respectively.they give a bone crashing hug to each other.

Kria:I missed u

Karthi:I missed more,waise thank god ki tumhe alzemir's nahi hu,warna muje laga ki tu muje bhul gayi

Kria[hits him]:ooye drama band kar

Karthi:aap jaise khubsurat ladki kehge toh drama hi kyu,jeena bhi band kar dethi hu

Kria;tera kuch nahi ho sakta,ladki dekhi hi flirting karna shuru

Karthi:tum saath degi toh kuch bhi ho sakta hain,aur aap jaise ladki ko dekhar flirting khud hi aa jaa ta hain

Kria:besharam,apne bf se flirt kar raha  hain,

Karthi:agar tum saath degi toh mein tumhari wo wali bf bhi ban sakta hain bas teri support chahiye.

Kria:besharam,nalayak,namune,tu flirt ki flirt hi rahega.  Waise tu yaha kya kar rahi hain

Karthi:kria ji mein yeh sawal aap se bhi puch sakta hu,phir bhi aap jaise beautiful girl poch rahi hain toh bata thi hu  mein yaha st.louis mein mba ke liye join ki hain.

Kria[screams]:tu st louis mein mba ke liye join ke hain

Karthi;arey meri maa tu chilla mat,agar tumhe problem hain ahi join karungi

Kria:sachi mein tu join kar rahi ho

Karthi:sach muchi meri dadi maa

Kria:mein bhi mba ke liye waha join kar rahi ho

Karthi;wow,[they hug each other-friends wali hug]

Karthi:jaan ab toh samjah ki teri universe ji bhi hume ek saath dekhna chathi hain

Kria;chup kar

Karthi;madam aap ko college jana koi irada hain kya,aap auto ke liye yaha wait kar rahi hain toh mein apko batati hu ki aaj Mumbai mein auto strike

Kria:toh mujhe kya

Karthi :mujhe kya ka matab

Kria:matlab ye ki hum dono bff hain,aur hum don ek hi college jaa rahi hain aut tumhari pass ithni achi gadi,toh tum chahti ho ki mein auto ya paidal college jaoo.kaise dost ho tum

Karthi:tu toh teez nikali,jo mein kahane wali thi who tumne kaha diya

Kria:ab meri tariff karna chod do,aur mujhe college leke chalo

Karthi:ji madam ji,jaise aap kaha

They both settle down in the bike

In this position-http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=girl+and+boy+sitting+in+a+bike&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1366&bih=677&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=dfiG4tWATdNqSM:&imgrefurl=http://www.dreamstime.com/stock-photos-adorable-boy-little-girl-sitting-toy-bike-image5613203&imgurl=http://www.dreamstime.com/adorable-boy-and-little-girl-sitting-on-toy-bike-thumb5613203.jpg&w=400&h=267&ei=QnxAUKyNL47rrQeM34DQAw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=363&vpy=170&dur=95&hovh=183&hovw=275&tx=154&ty=89&sig=110571768724538619235&page=1&tbnh=164&tbnw=219&start=0&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0,i:76

Karthi:ache se pakadna warna meri bike se neech gir jawangi aur phir mujhe balme mat kar na

Kria:tik hain tik hain,driver gadi chalo

Karthi:ji madam

The bike goes through road like a jet.kria gets afraid hold karthik tightly [they are bff,nothing else]


Precap: kria and karthik reaching st.louis

             Kria and louians face to face

 

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sanjana

 

 

 



Edited by pia18arsha - 31 August 2012 at 3:13am

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 2:16am | IP Logged
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yiippiieee yyyeeeyyy...

me first

I cant believe it

some one pinch me plz...

oucchhh

itni zor se nhi kaha tha ok







waise main yahan karne kya aayi thi
wo kya hai na
mujhe short term memory loss ki problem hai

toh main bhul jaati hoon


hmmm

yaad karne dooo





























ha yaad aaya main toh cmnt karne aayi thi is update par...

















par update kis ff ka hai hai...












ha saathiya...











par update main tha kya...


ab mujhe thodi der pehle ki baat yaad nhi rehti toh itni purani baat kaha se yaad rahegi




chalo dubara update read karti hoon






disturb mat karna



ok









reading





reading






reading




OMG
kriya indian dress pehan kar colg jayegi Shocked



space main auto wala ka meeting chal rha hai

mast line hai yaar LOL



wah ye karthik toh bohot bada flirt nikla yaar




plz make rey jealous of them 




all over awesome part
you roke it(hehe aru ki line)



chal bye


and plz update soon








Edited by Kriti_rox - 08 September 2012 at 2:14am

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 3:33am | IP Logged
awesome update...loed it
loved karthik and kria flirting...awesome
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WOW Awesome Update Clap
Loved It...Plzzz Update Next Part Soon  Smile

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