Posted: 19 August 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SavageI is here. Finally. Pardon me for the delay.
Now then, you have the audacity to ask me my age? Take it. I am fifteen.
Dear lady, you have one very crisp command over both English language and storytelling. There are hardly any FFs in IF that give you quality English and such pitch-perfect Hindi dialogues that suit the characters you've incorporated in your writing.
Your skill at imagination and weaving one plot into another and another is commendable! I liked the beginning of chapter one so much, sister bonding after eons, it was a marvelous way to begin.
Samar-Ranveer one-on-one in chapter two is excellently penned and so is the KD-Piddi-Bobby part. You have had a strong grip on your characters all along which is why there are these tidbits from their consciences in between the paragraphs, they really beautify it all. (:
A very versatile writer there, you are!
Waiting for more.
Thanks for the PMs!
Actually after asking you, I found out somehow, so I won't have the falling-off-my-chair reaction again. Though it still amazes me. You're far more mature in vocabulary and your command over English than I'm right now, honestly. Having you comment on my story, is a privilege.
I'm really honored reading your praises and compliments, and I wish to simply say I have same sentiments with maybe a little higher adoration for your brilliant talent.
I really pride myself over putting those tidbits of conscience and not boring the readers. You on the other hand, you work on conscience and create a story out of you. You young lady, are a master of language and emotions.
Thanks a ton.