The Buddy Project  Season 2 - Now in College

India-Forums

   
The Buddy Project  Season 2 - Now in College
The Buddy Project  Season 2 - Now in College

TBP OS - Starting Anew | Update Pg. 10 (Page 13)

HPHolic-3 IF-Rockerz
HPHolic-3
HPHolic-3

Joined: 01 May 2011
Posts: 7110

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Awesome update
I really liked new growing friendship between anya panchi n kiya
Ranveer n samar:ranveer is really possesive about panchi.
Waiting for next part

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

IndigoBlues IF-Rockerz
IndigoBlues
IndigoBlues

Joined: 05 May 2010
Posts: 9375

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Finally you updated!Big smile Haha, even I send PM's only those who like or commentLOL
I liked the chapter...esp when you showed that Bobby had another side to her...it would have been much easier to show her in a stereotypical jock mood...but that was inventive on your part to introduce her gizmo side too...and KD& Piddi's shock...LOL
I loved the advice Anya gave to Panchi!Shocked Its so ironical...but isn't Anya just echoing her own sentiments...the way Mrs. Gujral controls the sister's lives..hence she feels motivated to inspire another girl not to do the same thing...LOL
Waiting for your KiSha OS!!!!Day Dreaming
megz.Embarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

FieryLioness IF-Sizzlerz
FieryLioness
FieryLioness

Joined: 17 July 2012
Posts: 16248

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
oh finally we get a weekend treat with ur Update...
and dear no need for any apology, m sure everybody is delighted with such wonderful update...
i really loved it... 
Anaya is such a sweet heart in ur OS...and loved KD-Piddi-Bobby scene...
and also Samar-Ranveer scene...
update soon...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

dvmishra Senior Member
dvmishra
dvmishra

Joined: 29 March 2012
Posts: 490

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Lovely os. Plz continue soon. Plz pm me.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

-dark.horse- IF-Sizzlerz
-dark.horse-
-dark.horse-

Joined: 31 January 2011
Posts: 11152

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
pree update soon..
n KiAn r super cute... <333
n for d second part...it's really nice bt den it's incomplete kind off...n I m confused soo better u update fast ..Lol

Edited by SwaRonforever - 18 August 2012 at 4:01pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

crazysky IF-Sizzlerz
crazysky
crazysky

Joined: 27 May 2011
Posts: 10808

Posted: 18 August 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
this was really awesome
i liked how u worked on samar's dialog
i love him speaking his royal urdu version

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

muzzy_sk Goldie
muzzy_sk
muzzy_sk

Joined: 12 May 2012
Posts: 2061

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Here we are! :D
well sidhe sidhe bolu toh ws a bit disheartend to read at first that der no kiSha n Kiya-RV thngie here..but wen we read ur update it ws really gudd!! :)
wat i lovd d most is Piddi-KD-Bobby thingie!!..i love PIDDI :D.. Loved that part..secndly i kinda like anya gujral bt thn sumthng or the othr ws bothring me there..i dun noe wat..pata nhi..i loved Samar-RV part..its so cute to see nonu fi8 fr his moti!!..:D..
On the whole its ws a great update..worth waitng for..:) update soon,vl be waiting :)
p.s: thnx fr d scrap :D :P

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

thegameison IF-Sizzlerz
thegameison
thegameison

Crazy Creative Minion
Joined: 01 July 2010
Posts: 22646

Posted: 19 August 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
I is here. Finally. Pardon me for the delay. 

Now then, you have the audacity to ask me my age? Take it. I am fifteen. 

Dear lady, you have  one very crisp command over both English language and storytelling. There are hardly any FFs in IF that give you quality English and such pitch-perfect Hindi dialogues that suit the characters you've incorporated in your writing. 

Your skill at imagination and weaving one plot into another and another is commendable! I liked the beginning of chapter one so much, sister bonding after eons, it was a marvelous way to begin.

Samar-Ranveer one-on-one in chapter two is excellently penned and so is the KD-Piddi-Bobby part. You have had a strong grip on your characters all along which is why there are these tidbits from their consciences in between the paragraphs, they really beautify it all. (:

A very versatile writer there, you are! Approve
Waiting for more. 

Thanks for the PMs!

-Kankshita



The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

Go to top

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

The Buddy Project Season 2 - Now in College Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index