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TBP OS - Starting Anew | Update Pg. 10 (Page 13)

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Lovely os. Plz continue soon. Plz pm me.

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
pree update soon..
n KiAn r super cute... <333
n for d second part...it's really nice bt den it's incomplete kind off...n I m confused soo better u update fast ..Lol

Edited by SwaRonforever - 18 August 2012 at 4:01pm

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
this was really awesome
i liked how u worked on samar's dialog
i love him speaking his royal urdu version

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
Here we are! :D
well sidhe sidhe bolu toh ws a bit disheartend to read at first that der no kiSha n Kiya-RV thngie here..but wen we read ur update it ws really gudd!! :)
wat i lovd d most is Piddi-KD-Bobby thingie!!..i love PIDDI :D.. Loved that part..secndly i kinda like anya gujral bt thn sumthng or the othr ws bothring me there..i dun noe wat..pata nhi..i loved Samar-RV part..its so cute to see nonu fi8 fr his moti!!..:D..
On the whole its ws a great update..worth waitng for..:) update soon,vl be waiting :)
p.s: thnx fr d scrap :D :P

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
I is here. Finally. Pardon me for the delay. 

Now then, you have the audacity to ask me my age? Take it. I am fifteen. 

Dear lady, you have  one very crisp command over both English language and storytelling. There are hardly any FFs in IF that give you quality English and such pitch-perfect Hindi dialogues that suit the characters you've incorporated in your writing. 

Your skill at imagination and weaving one plot into another and another is commendable! I liked the beginning of chapter one so much, sister bonding after eons, it was a marvelous way to begin.

Samar-Ranveer one-on-one in chapter two is excellently penned and so is the KD-Piddi-Bobby part. You have had a strong grip on your characters all along which is why there are these tidbits from their consciences in between the paragraphs, they really beautify it all. (:

A very versatile writer there, you are! Approve
Waiting for more. 

Thanks for the PMs!

-Kankshita



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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 8:10am | IP Logged
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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged
*Edited*

Well, finally read the update. Smile . From yesterday only my system was creating problem and I was not able to access internet. But now finally all is well. Big smile

Coming to the update. Loved how you started the update with completely different plot with Piddi-KD-Bobby. It was short but nicely done but left us wanting to know more. Hopefully we have lot more to read about trio in next update. And yeah it was good to see Bobby is interested in something other than football too.

Now coming to the next part. It was a sheer delight for me as fan of Samar to read it. You were so right about him being the soul of the next update. Whether his amazement on herding abilities of girls or his outburst on Ranveer, everything was masterly done. And it was really pleasing to see his dialogues in such an awesome urdu. But even though I am fan of his urdu accent but it was his english monologue that was  the highlight of this episode. And about Ranveer I would only say he is in big trouble. Waiting for his face off with Anya.

Now coming to the restroom talk of girls. It was nicely done. But Anya as a character suddenly started to look more like Swayam than Anya we were introduced to first update. As you said she suddenly started to act more like a hermit than the elder sister of Kiya. It may be because rapport of Anya and Panchi was not established like Kiya and Anya. But that flaw apart it was interesting part.

Over all an awesome chapter which creates a nice platform for upcoming parts :)




Edited by marauder - 19 August 2012 at 9:45am

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by xKishaxForevahx

It was very nice. I like the idea of the gang hanging out together. ^_^

Update soon and DO NOT forget to pm me! 
I'll be waiting! ^_^  

Thanks. Will PM you, don't worry.

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