RS:An Angel in White<3updated pg 6:) (Page 5)

parineeti28 Groupbie

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
this is beautiful :))... Awesome RS neetha... i have no worts dear... really Amazing RS dear :))... thank u so much :))... keep rocking... god bless u !! :))

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shahz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:28am | IP Logged
That was a fantastic RS yaar I luved it. Tongue

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neetha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
@all thank u soo much guys fr all ur lovely comments..well i ll try to write the second part of this u all hav demanded..Big smile

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TANHA_H Goldie

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
this is beautiful

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sweety71 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Superb RS Neetha.  Loved very much.

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
@ neetha- thanku thanku dear, itna beautiful RS ka toh part banta hai boss, anya interactions in the beautiful locales of kashmir depicted through your narrative style, wow i am excited to read the subsequent part.

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Posted: 15 August 2012 at 12:26am | IP Logged
neetha di amazing rs an just luved reading it

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neetha IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Rs contd...

k on jantha ke bhaari demand par maine yeh RS continue kiya hai..LOL
ranbir looks at anant to observe his reaction, n to his astonishment anant was 

ranbir 'oye tu has kyun raha hai??'
anant ' yeh wohi pari hai..'
ranbir (excited n screams)'kya???'

navya n everyone wer shocked..anant stared at ranbir..ranbir felt akward

ranbir 'woh..sorry'
anant 'tu pagal ho haya hai kya?'
ranbir 'nahi yaar..u knw this is called destiny my friend'
anant 'haan yaar..the angel is in front of me'

deepak 'tum dono ek doosre se akele main baat kyun nahi karthe'
om 'haan bilkul..yeh unke zindagi ka faisla hai..jao anant baat karlo'
anant 'k dad'

anant luks at navya..she luks at anant n then she takes him to their 
terrace..navya was walkin in the front n anant was blindly followin her..iit 
seemed like she is the wind n he is dried leaf..the wind was carryin the dried 
leaf in the way she wants..they reached the was around 7:00 in the 
evenin..sun had almost vanished n moon had taken over the sky..stars 
twinkled..may be rather they danced..heavy breeze flowin..
there was an akward silence spread in the air..they stealed glances at times but 
both wer shy to start the convo..anant decided to break the silent..

anant 'jee main anant..aur apka naam??'
navya 'main navya'

the soft voice of her hit his ears as pleasantly as possible..her flyin hair made 
her luk more beautiful than ever..

anant 'navya ji..nice name'
navya 'thank u..aur aapko navya ji kehne ki zaroorat nahi'
anant (chuckled)'huh..k..waise aap karthi kya hai?'
navya 'meri phadai poori ho gayi hai..but mujhe gaana bohut pasand hai..'(she 

anant was staring at her breath takin beauty..the smile on her was 
unresistable..navya luked at anant wonderin abt why is he nt reacting..

navya 'ji kya hua?maine kuch galat keh diya?'
anant ' singin..aap koi gana gaa sakthi hai?'
navya 'abhi??'
anant 'haan..'

navya started singing..

hum tumse na kuch keh paye..
tum humse na kuch keh paye(2)
lagtha hai darr yeh baat yeh dil ki..
dil main na reh jaye..

anant starts singin..

hum tumse na kuch keh paye..
tum humse na kuch keh paye(2)
lagtha hai darr yeh baat yeh dil ki..
dil main na reh jaye..

navya was shocked to hear anant singing..a smile curved on her beautiful 
lips..his voice reached her heart..he started walkin n moved to the edge of 
terrace n stood there holdin the bars..

anant singin..

tum suno gaur se
kya ke raha hai sama..

navya moved towards him wit tat gorgeous smile constant on her lips..n stud next 
to him holdin the bars..navya singin..

hamnashi ched do
chahat bhari daasthan
kitne dino tak kuch na bataye
tum humko tadpaye

anant luked at her..under the moonlit night..she luked no less than a moon 
herself..the long hair was hittin her face..wic she slowly n nicely tucked behind 
her ear every now n then..he just kept lookin at her..anant singin..

hum tumse na kuch keh paye..
tum humse na kuch keh paye(2)

pyaar kya hai sanam
tu humko samjha gaye

she luked into his eyes..the hazel colored eyes wer more invitin then anythin 
else ever did to her..she stepped one step closer to him..navya singin..

faasle na rahe itne kareeb agaye
dekho humari khushboo tumhari saason ke mehekaye

hum tumse na kuch keh paye..

anant also stepped one step closer to her..they wer just few inches apart..witout 
even a single touch this angel had driven him crazy like never before..anant 

tum humse na kuch keh paye

the affection in his eyes ran a shiver down her spines..just the first meet n 
this guy had such an impact on her heart n her mind..he had taken over her 
thoughts..they stood thr fr almost few mins lukin into each others eyes..the cool 
breeze flowin loved the couple wic luked like the couple made in heaven..navya 
dint knw wat was this wierd was obvious tat she had felt somethin like 
this fr the first time in her life..many guys always wandered around her..but 
this guy was the first one around whom her thoughts wer runnin..she stepped back 
wen she came back to her senses..n turned away to move n then he caught her wrist 
n said..

anant 'i love u navya'

navy closed her eyes wen she heard him sayin i love u..she had goosebumps all 
over her body..she knew tat i love u ..these 3 words are always called 
magical..but today she knew y it is called so..she cud feel the magic around 
her,,the feelin of love was in the air..

anant caught her by shoulders..n turned her towards him..she had her eyes still 
closed..the light from the moon was reflecting on her face.He luked at her..the 
stunning angel crossed his heart every moment he luked at her..

anant 'navya maine tumhe aaj nahi..balki 5 mahine pehle hi dekh liya tha'

navya still dint oen her eyes but his every word was clear in her ears..

anant 'jab main kashmir aya tha..maine tumhe dekh liya tha navya aur ek nazar 
main hi tum mere dil ke andar ghar kar gayi..tum soch rahi hogi main kaisa pagal at first sight n all..but believe me..yeh mere saat pehli baar hua 
hai..aajtak kisi bhi ladki ke liye maine aisa feel nahi kiya..but tum bohot 
special ho navya..main tumhara jawaab jana chahtha hu..

navya had her eyes still closed.anant was feeli wierd n also confused abt naya's 
reaction..she dint agree nor deny..he felt guilty thinkin tat she never ever felt 
anythin abt him..

anant 'sorry maine tumhe hurt kiya shayad..main tumhe force nahi karunga navya..'

saying so he was about to walk wen suddenly navya spoke

navya 'maine bhi tumhe 5 mahine pehle hi pasand kar diya tha anant..'

anant was shocked at her last sentence..she continued..

navya 'uss din jab tumne mujhe pehli baar dekha tha anant..ussi din maine bhi 
tumhe dekh liya tha..jab main wahan se nikal gayi tum mujhe dhoondne lage..maine 
woh sab dekha tha anant..kahi na kahi main bhi tumhe pasand karne lagi hu..yeh 5 
mahine tum har pal mere yaadon main rahe ho..'

anant was standin still n hearin to navya..he couldn't believe his ears..he 
neared her n held her hand

anant 'shayad kisine sach hi kaha hai..agar hum sacche dil se kisise pyaar karthe 
hai...toh saari kaynath hume ek karne main lag jaathi hai..'
navya 'tum shayad filmein bohut dekhthe ho..'(she started laughin)

anant also joined navya n they both started laughin..holdin each other's hand 
lost in each other's eye..the moon up in the sky was more brighter than ever..

navya's mind voice

"Love can happen in a moment but falling in love wit the man who equally loves 
you can only be destiny.."


k guys hope u all hav liked hit the like button n do comment..n i hope 
again u guys dont tel me to continue..LOL

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