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Thnk you so much for all the appreciations guies' its all your motivation that I am here again to write' thnx a lot from the bottom of my heart
NOTE: I knw max r Rajat haters but he holds an important role in my ff' so plz bear him' n trust me u won't regret' RaYa, Peehu, Rajat n Cady r main characters here
RECAP: I am sorry Ram... mere paas aur koi raasta nehi tha... in panch saalon mein apke bina main haar roz hazaro maute maari hu... lekin mere liye aap ki khushi sabse zyada mainey rakhti hai... main nehi dekh paati apko haar roz maarte huye... I am sorry Ram... I am so sorry...!
Ram storms out of the hall when Rajat who had just finished with his call spots him.. oye Ram.. kaha jaraha hai tu??
R: woh yaar mujhe ek bohot zaruri kaam hai.. m tereko ghar pe milta hu.. saying that he rushes out of the house hiding his tears
RJ: abbey sunto..! areh yaar ab isko kya hua?! Ab beta Rajat tu toh phas gaya.. Pooja ke paas jau ki iske peeche jau?? Confusion hi confusion hai.. nehi ye rude hoga.. at least Pooja ko bolke jana chahiye na.. he makes his way towards da kitchen calling out her name.. hearing Rajat's voice Priya quickly wipes out her tears n some how manages to stand on her weak trembling feet.. holding on to the kitchen counter.. in the mean tym Rajat enters
RJ: uumm Pooja jaana padega.. woh actually.. before completing he notices something was wrong with her.. Pooja tum thik ho na?? r u feeling sick?
Priya with a very low tone still looking down): haan m fyn sir
Rajat takes a step forward' u don't seem so Pooja.. is there anything I can do for u' employer ke naatey na sahi ek dost ke naate..
Priya looks up at him.. thnk u so much sir I just need to rest.. agar aap sach m mere liye kuch karna chahte hai then I hv a request
RJ: haan plz bolo na
P: kya m do teen aur chutti le sakti hu??
RJ: of course ye bhi koi poochne ki baat huyi.. tum chutti le lo n yeh lo.. handing her a card.. yeh bohot acche doctor hai isne jake check up karwana n take medicines ok.. kaam toh hota rahega but health comes 1st.. so u take care of yourself
P: thnx a lot sir
RJ: its ok pooja.. baar baar thnx bol ke mujhe sharminda maat karo' I'll take your leave now.. tum aram karo
Rajat turns back to find Cady and Peehu at the entrance of the kitchen' Peehu runs towards Priya' mumma mumma kya hua apko'
Priya kneeling down to her.. kuch nehi beta' school kaisa tha aj??
Rajat turned back to look at da mother daughter bonding n smiled to himself' n turned back to look at Cady patting on her shoulder he said.. khayal rakhna iska pointing at pooja.. he left smiling leaving Cady in utmost shock' she kept on staring at his back till it vanished through out of da main entrance..
Cady to herself.. yeh khadoos ko ho kya gaya hai?? kuch zyada hi sweet nehi ban gaya hai..
The scene shifts to Ram sitting in some park watching all the lil kiddos playing.. lost in his own thoughts' Priya tum kyun kar rahi ho aisa mere saath.. meri kya galti hai.. panch saal kaise rahi tum mere bina.. ek baar toh bataya hota.. aur Peehu... iska matlab woh meri beti hai.. kyun Priya... kyun tumne mere sabse badi khushi se mujhe juda rakkha.. kyun Priya... kyun... aur aj jab tum mujhe wapas milgayi ho toh tum keh rahi ho ki priya nehi koi aur ho' his train of thoughts got interrupted by the shrill ring of his phone' he picks up reluctantly..
R: haan rajat bol
RJ: areh kaha hai tu yaar?? Subah se sham hogayi lekin tera kuch aata pat nehi hai'
R: bas araha hu
RJ: jaldi aana party ki bohot taiyaria karni hai
R: hmm aarahu
Hanging up da call he goes back to his world of thoughts which mostly was filled with questions... nehi ram tu yaha nehi reh sakta... sahi toh hai.. priya apni zindegi main agey badh gayi hai.. aur khush hai.. yehi toh tu chahta hai na' lekin meri bacchi' uska kya' kuch nehi... teri bacchi toh janti bhi nehi ki tu uska papa hai.. aur jane bina hi woh khush hai' aur agey bhi khush rahegi... haan yehi thik hai.. chala jaunga main.. aur kabhi mudke nehi dekhunga
he drowns his tired weary face in between his broad palms n sits like that for sometym more n finally gets up to leave... on da way he dials number
R: hello' I want 2 tickets to india tomorrow
The other person: sorry sir all the tickets r booked for tomorrow' 2 late night flights r available for the next day
R: yeah that's fyn.. book them.. thnx
The scene shifts back to Priya... lying on the bed n Peehu telling her bed tym story... she was looking at her little one with satisfied smile on her face... thinking to herself pata nehi m tumhare bina kya karti Peehu' tum hi toh mere jeene ki wajah ho... she caresses her hair lovingly n tells her to lie down beside her... embracing her in a warm motherly hug
Cady: here juice
P: areh yaar cady tu jaana ghar kyun ruki hai
C: nehi nehi khadoos ne mujhe strict instructions di hai ki aj m apke saath hi ruku... samjhe na' mereko unki daant nehi khani hai.. toh u chill m here with u tonite.. m aati hu haan ap juice piyo..
Cady thinks seeing Priya n Peehu... pehli baar khadoos ko itna khush dekha hai woh bhi ap ki wajah se Pooja' kal toh apko party mein jana hi hoga' with that thought she goes out smiling.
Ram: pack your bags we r leaving day after tomorrow
Ayesha: wht?? But m not done here
R: maine tumhari rai nehi maangi hai, I asked u too pack ur bag n we r leaving that's it' am I clear??
A: par kyun??
R: none of your business just do as I say
Ram leaves saying that
A: wht the hell is with his attitude?? crap !
Ram tries to escape any convo with Rajat so tries to rush out of the house before getting caught
Rajat: RAAAM... ruk!
TO BE CONTINUED
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