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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sss283

you wrote ...am sooo happyParty
you penned down your thoughts so well...wow...
thanku sooo much for continuing anu dear...Heart
u made my day...
yipeee

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Awesome start Anu. Waiting for the next update.Tongue

thnx a lot guies...HugHug next update is in the ovenWink coming up soon

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Posted: 12 August 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by parulkhare13

kya likha hai jaan i am loving and A BIG THANK U for CONTINUING THIS FF thank u thank u thank u thank u  
so madam aab aap ka PROMOTION HOGAYA congratulation madam WinkClap ab aap pahlay toh mayre VM QUEEN THI i mean hai lakin ab uskay sath sath aap meri WRITER QUEEN ho gayi hai   
so my writer sahiba ji  kahani toh bilkul mast raapchik aur bahut bahut pyari ja rahi and i don't have any problem with rajat and u know now this right Wink  lakin ek kaam aap bhut bakhoobi kar rahi hai that is making me  i just wanna say carry on my WRITER QUEEN u are doing great job and writing this FF and always remember i am all greedy in your case so madam zaara  is massom say bacchay   ka dhyana raakhna jo aap kay ff ko   padhnay kay liyay wait kar rahi hai 
samjhi na ILOVE U YAAR MUHAAA  
 

i am i donno wht to say only that need i say more
...??? muuuaaahhh so glad to hv found u jaan 

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waiting for nxt part anu...its getting interesting...n yeah i dnt hate rajat...i lov raya but loving rajats scenes too...n its wonderful rajat also hv a gud role in ur ff...hope dere will be sum ram peehu scenes too wich r my fav at dis tym...nice part...plz continue soon...

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thnk u so much guiesHug here's the next part... sorry for the extra long update... it is da last till next weekend... hope u enjoy it



RECAP: Ram tries to escape any convo with Rajat so tries to rush out of the house before getting caught

Rajat: RAAAM... ruk!


PART.3


Ram turns around to face Rajat as nothing had happened... areh tu yaha hai main kab se tujhe hi dhuoond raha tha

RJ: ram zyada ban maat ok... aj pooja ke ghar se tu achanak kaha chala gaya tha??

"POOJA" that one name stabbed ram's heart lyk a thousand knives... his expression changed n face became tight... looking away from rajat he rplied.. kaha tha na kuch zaruri kaam se ja raha hu...

RJ: accha... kaun sa zaruri kaam zara main bhi toh sunnu

ram decided that it was better for him to keep rajat put of this.. in order to distract him ram plastered a fake smile n continued... areh chod na yaar tu bhi kya choti choti batein leke baith jata hai... placing a hand on rajat's shoulders... chal thoda drink pitey... aur tuney bataya nehi pooja se baat huyi ki nehi
RJ: areh wohi toh yaar... woh aj kuch zyada hi upset lag rahi thi yaar... 5 saal m usko pehle aisa kabhi nehi dekha

ram was again lost in his own thoughts... he knew wht had been bother priya or pooja... he was no more his priya...

RJ: oye hello... tujhe kya hua hai? kuch bol na... kya karu... woh toh party mein bhi nehi aana chahti

R: accha ruk thoda sochne toh de

in the mean tym Cady call rajat... haan cady bolo

C: haan sir pooja is fyn n i will try my best to bring her to da party tomorrow

RJ: ah ok thats great.. ussne kuch dawai wagairah li hai ki nehi

C: ya ya u dont worry.. c u tomorrow.. bye

RJ: yeah bye, rajat hangs up... areh yaar ram shayad woh kal ajaye... cady ka phone tha.. sh*t yaar... bohot kaam hai mujhe... chal goodnight... khana kha lena... rajat waves to ram heading towards his bed room

ram face drops down seeing rajat all so excited about meeting with priya... yeh kya kar raha hai tu ram... kyun apne ap ko taklif de raha hai... bas ek din aur phir main chala jaunga... aur phir?? uske baad kya hoga?? hona kya hai... rajat pooja ke saath... nneeehhhiii... he suddenly stood up on his feet.. woh pooja nehi hai woh meri priya hai... he breaks down once again... his mind n heart were battling inside him.. none of them were in his control... he started sobbing lyk a lil kid n hallucinates Priya...

Priya adorned in red saari... hand full of bangles... he trade mark red bindi accompanied with sindoor n mangalsutra... just like she was for Ram... she came n sat beside da sobbing ram

RAAMM... he looked up to meet the expressive black gaze of his beautiful wife... he was lost in those dark ocean deep eyes instantly...

cupping his face she said... kya hu ram..? kyun aise ro rahe ho? kya aap nehi jante apki Priya apka rona bilkul nehi bardasht kar sakti... he dug his in her lap n started weeping harder...

kyun chali gayi thi mujhe chod ke priya?? main nehi jee sakta tumhare bagair... plz plz mere paas wapas ajao... tum jaisa chahogi waisa hoga.. i promise... mm.. main.. he stammered between his tears... main tablets bilkul nehi khaunga.. humesha healthy khana hi khaunga... exercise bhi karunga aur... aauurr tum.. tumhari haar baat manunga priya... i promise... plz meri jaan.. mujhe chod ke maat jao.. main maar jaunga...

she caresses his hair n clams him down... takes his face between her palms n says... main yehi hu ram ap ke paas humesha... main kabhi apko chode ke nehi jaungi... saying that she kisses of his tear n presses a soft kiss on his forehead... and he embraces her in a tight hug... I LOVE YOU RAM... I LOVE YOU RAM... that 4 words kept on ringing in his ears...!!!!!!

Ram... Raaammm... someone shaked him back to reality...

he looks at the person expressionlessly...

itni raat ko yaha kya kar rahe ho beta??

R: haan.. kyaa... he is still too shock to reply... woh daija... haan main woh.. kuch nehi...

DJ: bohot raat hogayi hai beta... khana khaya ki nehi??

R: uumm... nehi bhook nehi hai.. goodnight daija.. with that he goes to his from da open terrace...!

DJ: yeh bhi ajeeb hai.. she nods..!


next morning at Priya's

Peehu: mammaaa uttthhooo... bohot late hogayi hai

P: haan beta...

Pe: apki shop pe nehi jaana

P: nehi beta.. mumma ki tabiat thik nehi hai na

Pe: thik hai main school ja rahi hu

P: ja rahi ho matlab?? kaise kiske saath..?? aur apka breakfast?? 5 mins ruko main abhi bana deti hu

Pe: ohho mumma ap kyun itni phikar karti ho.. main ab badi hogayi hu.. aur cady didi hai na...

priya looked at smiling cady who was standing leaning at the door fram of the bed room door.. all set to take peehu to school

C: peehu chale... peehu nodded happily

priya gave a quick thnk u look cady n bid da two good bye

waving peehu n cady set out for school it was just priya n her overwhelming emotions... she tried to tie up her emotions lock them up in some corner of her heart but nothing really worked... as soon as she entered da kitchen her eyes stopped at the glass of water which was still standing on the counter of the kitchen... she burst out into tears once again... she sat in a corner of the kitchen hugging her knees n crying uncontrollably... after an hour or so of vigorous crying she managed to regain her strength... she had to be strong for her lil one.. it was her only her...!


Peehu returned home with Cady somewhere at noon... n started with her tit bits from school... priya picked her up n made her sit on the kitchen counter n gave a glass of milk with her favorite chocolate muffins.. n nodding gleefully with her lil angel's encounters at school... priya handed a piece of sandwich to cady n contentrated back to peehu...

C: so aj sham ko kya pehen rahi ho ap?

priya looked at her surprisingly... kya pehen rahi hu matlab?? kaha ja rahi hu main

Pe: main nehi hum... hum sab ja rahe hai mamma... golu uncle k ghar party hai na...

P: cady see m not well main kahi nehi jarahi

C: areh isiliye toh u hv to go... jitna ghar pe baithi rahogi tabiat aur zyada kharab hojaygi.. plz pooja... for my sake.. plz

P: nehi cady.. i can't.. saying that she moves out of the kitchen... peehu n cady follows her...

C: plz yaar aisa maat karo... main apki haar baat maanti hu... ap meri ek baat nehi maan sakte...? plz

Pe: plz na mamma plzzz... pulling the edge of priya's top.. she pouted.. aur dekho golu uncle kal wapas ja rahe hain... aj last tym unse milwa do na mamma,

priya thought to herself.. kya.. ram... wapas ja rahe hai...?? she sighed*** haan shayad yehi sahi hai... thik hai hum jayenge but for an hour only.. ap apni golu uncle se jaldi se mille na aur phir hum wapas ajayenge ok??

peehu exclaimed with joy... haan thik hai.. smiling ear to ear..

soon it ws evening.. Rajat went to look for ram in his room... areh tu abtak taiyar nehi hua... jaldi kar ram saare guests aate hi honge...

R: haan toh aane de na.. mera maan nehi hai

RJ: ab iska kya matlab huya?? y r u acting so weird yaar... chal na plz mere liye

R: rajat plz yaar.. tu...

RJ: main kuch nehi sunna chahta.. u just get ready main tujhe 5 min k andar niche dekhna chahta hu thats all... come fast fast...! he added while leaving da room

ram breathed in a mouthfull of air n got up to get ready


da party started with full force.. ram had also joined in... his so called wife out enjoying her last day in Dubai.. lots n lots of guest were streaming in but Rajat's was seeking for only one face... after sometym his eyes fell on the lean figure of cady... n seeing her alone his face turned dark... but right da next moment the angelic face of Priya came into his view... she was looking gorgeous in a simple black saare with minimal jewelry n her hair was flying behind... he took a breath of relief n pointed ram showing her... huusshhh Ram... woh agayi...

ram istanly caught her gaze... yes she was looking at him... none of them blink... n the eye lock session went for quiet some tym before Rajat literally dragged Ram to meet her

RJ: hi pooja... ab kaise tabiyat hai tumhari

P: m fyn sir thnx.. looking away from ram

Pe: golu uncle... she threw her arms around ram n he didn't take a min to pick her up in his arms

yes he did love peehu.. did carry her in his arms before.. but today the emotions were different... she was his daughter n he knew this now

R: kaisa hai mera baccha

Pe: thik hu... ap mujhe chodke ja rahe ho.. she said pouting sadly

R: ram almost choked hearing his lil kiddo... nehi beta.. mujhe thoda kaam hai na.. woh khatam kar ke mian phir ap ke paas wapas ajaungi...

rajat excused himself asking priya to feel comfortable while ram n peehu spent some quality tym together...

da party was going smoothly n rajat was stealing glance at priya now n then when a guest came n approached him... hey rajat.. kaisa hai yaar...

RJ: hey Ankit its been long haan.. m fyn tu bata kya hai hai?

Ankit: bas chal raha hai.. areh yaar itni acchi party hai teri but y no music yaar.. kuch laga na n join the dance floor

RJ: areh ruk beta.. abhi teri khwahish puri kiye deta hu..  winking at his frnd

rajat took a micro phone n insisted all his guest to join the dance floor

ram was standing alone jab rajat insists him to dance.. Ram was in no mood but he forces him to dance... on the other hand Cady forces priya to join in da dance floor

P: for god's sake cady... main yaha agayi hu yehi kafi hai... n now u want me to dance... frowning at cady...

C: plz yaar pooja one last tym plz na..

Pe: haan mamma plz na... maine apko kabhi dance karte huye nehi dekha... plz plz...

P: stop it yaar... hadh hoti hai bachpane ki...

cady pulls priya to da dance floor... she wanted rajat n pooja to dance together but destiny had some other plans... it was quiet dark... da music changed... n the spot light fell on the 2... it was Ram n Priya standing face to face...


TO BE CONTINUED...


comments n criticisms r most welcomed... pardon me for the technical glitches (specially spelling n grammatical ones) don't hv da energy to re-read itEmbarrassed



Edited by Anamika163 - 12 August 2012 at 10:26am

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yipee i am first...
you totally rocked it...
destiny had some other plans for raya...chweet...
too exciting for words...







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hey Anu...yaar once again amazing yar...i thought Priya is back to Ram...but that was just a dream...Cry loved the ending...RaYa on dance floor...update soon babz...waiting like crazyyyLOL


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Wow awesome :D yeah in next part RAYA is gona dance :) :)

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Originally posted by SanRaj.RaYa

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hey Anu...yaar once again amazing yar...i thought Priya is back to Ram...but that was just a dream...Cry loved the ending...RaYa on dance floor...update soon babz...waiting like crazyyyLOL

Wait waitConfused
this is last till next weekend??CryCryCryCryCryCry
oh no...we sure will go crazy without it anu...

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