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thnk u so much guies for all the support and immense patience.. sorry that i couldn't reply all.. here's da next part.. hope u enjoy.. comments n criticisms r most welcomed
finally ram felt her movement.. he pulled up his face to look at her closely.. he watched her grip getting firm between his fingers.. there was movement in the other hand as well.. her eye lids were moving though they were shut
ram touched her cheeks lightly with his other hand.. priya.. he said softly
she parted her lips in order to say something.. her eyes were still shut.. after which felt lyk ages to ram finally his priya spoke up da 1st word
priya slowly opened her eyes to find her most desired sight in front of her... a slight smile crept on her exhausted face.. ram held her hand tightly.. they needed no words.. their hearts were talking to each other.. his heart told conveyed that he will let nothing happen to her.. da msg reached her heart without any hurdles.. her smile became wider in response to his unsaid feelings
he wanted to call rajat, cady n da doctor too but priya held his hand firmly n signed him not to leave.. he sat on da stool
R: priya.. priya tum thik toh ho na?? tumhe kuch chahiye?? pani pina hai??
priya smiled once again at her husband's nonstop questions.. she replied in a very low voice..
P: main thik hu ram.. ap jo hain mere saath..
she paused to suck in oxygen..
R: ssshhh.. tum abhi zyada baat maat karo.. aur mujhe doc ko bulane do.. tumhe check karna hai na.. main yehi hu.. bas darwaze se rajat ko bolta hu doc ko bulane ko.. ok??..
he patted on her hand.. she nodded a yes.. leaving her hand ram went towards da cabin entrance
R: rajat.. priya ko hosh agaya hain.. he said smiling ear to ear... tu doc ko plz bol ek bar check karke jaye
RJ: really?? both he n cady looked up towards heaven.. thnk god.. haan main abhi bulata hu.. tu.. tu priya ke paas hi ruk main doc ko leke ata hu.. he assured ram
ram returned priya sitting in his previous position.. her eyes were shut again.. ram called out for her in a very soft tone.. "priiiyaa.." she opened her eyes hearing him
R: bohot takleef horahi hai.. she nodded smiling
he sat caressing her hair.. kuch nehi hoga priya.. ab bas tum jaldise thik hojaogi.. phir main tum aur humari nanhi si pari wapas jayegne.. apne ghar.. i am sorry priya.. maine tumhe bohot pareshan kiya hai na.. ab aur nehi karunga.. i promise..
he held her hand n kissed it.. priya lifted her other hand n tugged it through ram's thick hair.. she was unable to speak properly but her actions said it all
after sometym da doc came in to check on her.. he was surprised by such a quick recovery..
Doc: this is a miracle Mr. Kapoor.. the condition her body was in we had never thought she would recover so fast.. there's still a little bit of weakness.. i would suggest to keep her here for another day.. u can take her home tomorrow evening, i must say your wife is very lucky Mr. Kapoor
R: nehi doc.. lucky toh main hu.. he looked at priya n flashed his cutest smile at her
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YAYAYAYA i am the first one yipeee JAY i made a poo poo of urs heehe
Thank u my for updating jaan i was so eager to know what will happen next and will priya recover
And u made my day ahaha!!! What a start my PRINCESS loved it... it was so cute start adorable the way they expressing their pain and love was beautiful the way ram was showing his concern towards priya that was such a awww moment
Uskay baad ma beti ka scene was superb and cute the way her little angel was talking sensibly was just too adorable and cute
And then here came the entry a shock for me Ayesha here a positive character wow that's interesting well i like it the way u showed their scene was really heart touching and so emotional wish that serial mein bhi aisa hi hota par leave that aside i ... i was easily able to visualize each and every scene the bond of two and the beautiful bond of two sisters too cute ...
This part was awesome the way rajat entered and said how's is mrs.kapoor doing that was to good in fact i was able to visualize his killer smile and saying those words ufff ,,,and further conversation was fabulous rajat spoke his heart its showed their beautiful friendship and the special bond they share although they are aware of each other feelings but loved the respect in them for their friend ship aur woh ram wala part that was hilarious and cute too the way ram said tum log meri chugli kar raho ho ... That was cute...
And the most beautiful part came that was ram and priya conversation too beautifully written yaar too good awesome full of emotions and love now i got the reason why priya did this wohh this was a really logical reason and need lot of courage to do this kya yaar hila kar rakh diya tunay humein and ram words were also fully justified and full of love and ending is too cute yaar plsss update it soon par without taking stress and u know how much greedy i am in case of yours ff plss haan
love u my WRITING QUEEN
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