FF ~ Those Lost 5 Years ~ part.17_ pg.108_ 08.Oct - Page 74

Originally posted by: Anamika163

<font color="#CC0033">my writing talent??😲 ROLF.. kyun subah subah haasa rahi hai yaar🤣 i am so glad that u connect to my write up.. its a big compliment darling..😳 about wht happened to Priya u'll get to knw soon... even i wanna finish this FF n get rid of u🤣🤣🤣 ok jokes apart... thnk u sooo much babu..🤗 love u loads</font>

this is ur mu that u can get rid of me so easily.. I have fevicol ka jhor marne ke baad bhi nahi chutega. But tumhare is galat femi ke karan hume jaldi jaldi wala uppy to milega... Hehehehehe. Me 2 love a loadsss

So humari Anu finally decided to continue...😆

Originally posted by: parulkhare13

Thank u my  for starting ur FF writing again thank u so much my  writing queen .

starting bhut pyarri thi the way cady ,rajat and ayesha are putting their effort to reunite raya is really cute phir pihu and priya ka conversation that was really aww moment pihu can so easily figure out about her mom is so sad that was so cute... aur yay ram ko kya ho gaya apni hi beti ko kya bata raha hai arghhh  and really feeling bad for rajat kya yaar anu uskay liyay bhi koi doondh do yaar koi achhi si he don't deserve to be alone ...

phir kya style mein priya ki entry  hayay yaar i was able to imagine her so well in red and purple sari ufff killing haan  accompany with pihu baycharay ram and rajat yay dono toh GAYO heheheh unka toh yay  haal ho raha hoga and asusual aap kay andar toh ekta mayi ka bhoot toh hai hi toh DANCE wala twist to dalna tha hain na! aur UPPAR SAY YAY KYA priya tipsy  oh god ab toh madam priya gussa hona aur tipsy hona well its really a danger combination  lakin maza ayaya the way she said ayesha excuse me... may i dance with my husband  maza a gaya yaar and baychara ram dumbfounded heehee baychara soch raha hoga ab toh mein gaya mrs. priya ram kapoor ab ragging bull na ban jayay but the conversation was sooo adorable and cute really really really awesome ab toh ram ko kuch samjh mein aa jaana chahiya and 

yay tu na har baar aise jagah la kay khtam karti hai ki arghhh 

plss priya ko kuch honay mat dena yaar ab jayda intazzar matt karana samjhi na plsss try to update soon my princess and love u dear aur ab rahi baat aap kay likhnay ki tareff ki toh mein kya kahoon har baar shabd kam padh jatay hai toh lay dey kar wahi word use karti hoon that it was as usual awesome har baar ki tarah acchay say likha tha ki i can imagine each and every scene so well ki in simple words kahoon toh its just perfect 

aawwwiiieee mera baccha agayi tu... kya karu jo dhamki di hai tuney mujhe main toh daar hi gayi thi😆 thnk u meri jaan.. etera comments padhke i feel so satisfied ki kya batau.. love u yaar.. no more tadpaing😆 will update soon😳

Originally posted by: dayabhi

So humari Anu finally decided to continue...😆

U my drama queen this was really good...I like it a lot👏👏👏

SO Priya was in talli mode...n we all love her like that😃

eagerly waiting for u to continue...😳

drama queen??😲 kya yaar.. aur koi title bachi hai toh woh bhi de daalo😆 priya was not really drunk.. will get to knw that in the next update... thnx a lot dear🤗

wooohhhooo its my century.. thnks to all of u for bearing my crap n supporting me so much that we r on page 100 in less then two months.. hope u enjoy this one.. hv a gr8 week ahead

PARDON ME FOR THE SPELLING N GRAMMAR

RECAP
P: I am sorry raaammm... I really love you...
those were da last 2 sentences that came out in a hush.. her clutch on his coat loosened and she fell with a thud on the marble floor...!
R: priiiyyyaaa...!!!!!!!
he knelt down n grabbed a motionless priya securely in between his broad arms
raaajjjaaattt... he yelled at the top of his lungs... get da damn car...!!
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everyone else along with peehu n rajat rushed to where priya was
RJ: wht the hell! kya hua pooja ko??
R: yaar tu zyada sawal maat pooch just take out da car yaar please
RJ: haan haan main abhi nikalta hu

peehu started crying uncontrollably.. mamma.. kya hua mamma?? utho na mamma.. she touched priya's cheeks lovingly... golu uncle mere mamma ko kya hua bolo na

R: kuch nehi baby.. tumhare mamma ko kuch nehi huya main hu na main unhe kuch nehi hone dunga... 
rajat came back within next couple of minutes... chal chal ram

ram picked a lifeless priya in his arms n stormed out towards da car... he placed priya carefully at da back seat n he sat on da other side putting her head comfortably on his lap

RJ: daija ap peehu ke sath ghar pe hi rahiye plz.. uska hospital jana thik nehi hai.. ayesha tum bhi yehi raho.. cady n i will take care of both ram n priya.. just dont worry will keep u posted

R: rajat chal yaar

rajat started da car.. da engine roared to life n raged out on the road.. he drove as fast as he could trying to avoid as many signals n hurdles as possible..
all da while ram kept caressing her hair n blabbered to himself.. while cady kept praying in  her mind

after sometym which felt lyk forever to all da 3 of them, rajat pulled over.. all of them got down n ram picked up priya carefully n ran towards da emergency ward... she was instantly attended by a team of doctors n taken to da ICU

ram dropped down on da bench.. he felt so helpless.. he was cursing his fate, rather his decision to stay away from priya.. rajat came n sat beside him.. placing a hand of solace on his shoulder.. he turned to look at rajat with tears welled up in his eyes
R: yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha hai.. ussne mujhe kaha tha.. kaha tha ki hum apne kismat se nehi bhag sakte.. dekh aj kya hogaya.. he choked

RJ: kuch nehi huya hai ram.. usse kuch nehi hoga.. she'll be fyn

R: she is my wife rajat.. teri pooja meri patni hai.. woh.. woh priya hai rajat.. he choked once again

RJ: main janta hu

ram was stunned.. janta hai?? kya janta hai??

RJ: mujhe pehle hi pata chal chuka tha ki pooja hi priya hai aur woh bhi teri priya.. main janta tha ki woh Mrs. Ram Kapoor hai

R: kya?? toh tuney mujhe bataya kyun nehi??

RJ: usse kya pharak padta ram... tu toh tyag.. balidan.. sacrifice karne chala tha.. kya soch raha tha tu ki tu uske bina aur woh tere bina jee payegi.. she is your wife damn it..! kyun dhoka de raha hai apne ap ko?? apne jazbaato ko..?? uska kya faida hua?? dekh liya na

ram felt lyk a thousand bricks hammering his head.. haan.. sab meri galti hai.. main nehi samajh paya yaar... mmm.. main kya karu rajat?? I-I- I can't afford to loose her for the 2nd tym.. he stammered

rajat gave a warm buddy hug to him.. tu pareshan maat ho kuch nehi hoga teri priya.. tujhe ehsaas hogaya na.. bas ab uski thik hone taak ka intezaar.. bas.. ab Ram aur Priya alag nehi rahenge.. he patted on ram's back consoling him n smiled at a crying cady

RJ: areh yaar cady ab tumhe kya huya..?? can u plz stop crying

she came down on her knees in front of ram n held his hands..

C: yeh sab meri galti hai ram sir.. pooja rajat sir se baat karna chahti thi.. lekin maine socha ki aap.. woh.. maine pooja ke feelings ko miss judge kiya.. i never thought ki situation itni complicated banjayegi.. m really sorry sir.. plz mujhe maaf kardo

ram placed his hand on her head.. teri galti nehi hai cady.. aj shayad teri aur rajat ki wajah se main yeh realize kar paya hu ki aj bhi mere zinddegi mein priya sabse zyada maiyne rakhti hai, just pray ki woh thik hojaye.. varna main zindegi bhar apne ap ko maaf nehi kar paunga
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the scene shifts to rajat's house with peehu on daija's lap resting her head on daija's chest..

peehu asked in a gloomy tone: daija.. mere mamma ko kya hua?? woh baat kyun nehi kar rahi thi??

daija replied stroking her hair lovingly.. kuch nehi huya beta.. jaise tum kuch din pehle bimaar thi na waise hi mamma thodisi bimaar hai.. doctor hai na?? sab thik kardenge

Pe: sacchi?? meri mummy thik toh hojayengi na?

DJ: haan beta bilkul thik hojayegi..

Peehu smiled hearing her

A: chalo beta apko kuch khilati hu.. apko bhuk nehi lagi??

Pe: ap meri maasi ho??

A: haan baby.. apko kaise pata??

Pe: mummy ne bola tha

A: accha.. aur kya bola mamma ne?? saying that ayesha picked up peehu n took her to da kitchen to feed her

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back to the hospital

ram was getting restless now.. it had been 1 hour since priya was inside n there was no reply from da doctors.. he walked to n fro across da corridor..

RJ: areh yaar relax.. itna restless kyun ho raha hai..

just then the doctor broke in.. Mr. Ram Kapoor..?? ram instantly marched forward.. rajat stood up beside him

R: yes doctor..

Doc: see Mr. Kapoor your wife's state is critical.. her body has been over dozed by tranquilizer

ram's face became pale.. his jaws dropped down

D: see its a very powerful drug.. usually for people who r having sleepless nights.. but such high doze of it can only cause death.. her tissues are badly damaged.. it has left a bad effect on both her kidneys as well.. we hv washed da drug off but still she is unconscious.. we hv shifted her to da cabin next but will hv to keep her in observation for another 36 hours.. by this tym if her conditions doesn't improve then m very sorry i wont hv anything to do..

each word from da doctor stabbed inside ram's heart lyk a thousand knives.. he slammed his helpless body on da bench n kept staring at the ground expressionlessly

D: i can understand your feelings mr.kapoor.. we hv tried our best.. the doc looked up at rajat..  i need to talk to u rajat.. something important

rajat walked forward along with da doc..

RJ: yeah doc

D: see Rajat.. i knw u personally thats y m telling u.. otherwise this is a police case

RJ: wht?? wht do u mean??

D: m assuming that this is a attempt to suicide case.. most probably Mrs.Kapoor has taken them by herself or somebody might hv given her

rajat was in shock.. he never thought things would turn so much complicated

RJ: thnx doc.. u knw i can't involve police here.. my frnds they r from india.. dont wanna drag them into this unnecessary headache

D: i can understand rajat.. counting on u only i didnt inform da police.. take care n yeah one of u can go meet Mrs.Kapoor.. but be very carefull

RJ: thnx again doc

D: anytym.. i will be checking on her in every hour

rajat came to ram.. n started speaking to him who seemed to hv turned into stone.. ram.. raaammm.. rajat jerked him.. but still there was no response

RJ: ram listen to me.. priya ko kuch nehi hoga.. doc ne kaha hai ki hum mein se ek priya se jake mil sakta hai.. tu ja na... jake usse mille... she will fine..

ram finally looked up at rajat.. rajat cupped his face n jerked it again.. "she will be fine.. sun raha hai tu?? now go inside damn it"

ram got up n made his way to da cabin where his love lied cold with an oxygen mask over her mouth n number of strings attached to her petite body.. ram entered da room with careful steps.. making sure not to disturb his sleeping beauty.. he took da stool n sat beside her bed

caressing her hair he placed a feathery kiss on her forehead.. he touched each needle that was injected in her delicate skin lightly as if they were hurting him.. he took her hand in between his n placed his head on them

R: m sorry priya.. m so sorry.. aj meri wajah se tumhari yeh halat huyi hai.. kash maine tumhari baat suni hoti.. toh aj yeh din nehi dekhna padta..

he started weeping lyk a little kid whose most favorite toy has been damaged for some reason

he continued between his sobs.. tum mere galati ki saaza apne ap ko kyun de rahi ho priya.. kyun priya kyun?? tumhe jo saaza deni hai mujhe do... lekin plz aise chup maat raho.. i can't see u like this.. plz priya ek baar thik ho jao.. tum jo chahogi jaise chahogi waise hi hoga..  lekin plz priya  meri galati ki itni badi saza mujhe maat do.. main maar jaunga tumhare bagair.. main galat tha jab maine yeh socha tha ki main tumhe kisi aur ke hote huye dekh paunga.. i was wrong priya.. main nehi jee paunga tumhare bagair.. ek baar mere paas laut aao.. phir kabhi main tumhe apne aap se dur nehi hone dunga.. i am sorry priya... plz meri gudiya ek baar mujhse baat karo na..

by now he was weeping insanely.. he kept his head on her bosom n listened to her slow unsteady heart beats.. one of his hands was still holding her tiny palm.. his tear drops landed on her bosom n rolled down to her neck

ram's love for her pierced through her cold unconsious state n reached her heart.. it pumped fresh blood through out her body n paced faster.. her body became warmer.. ram unaware of wht his intense love did to her still kept weeping.. her heart thudded harder against her chest n within next couple of seconds she entwined her fingers in between ram's

finally ram felt her movement.. he pulled up his face to look at her closely.. he watched her grip getting firm between his fingers.. there was movement in the other hand as well.. her eye lids were moving though they were shut

ram touched her cheeks lightly with his other hand.. priya.. he said softly

she parted her lips in order to say something.. her eyes were still shut.. after which felt lyk ages to ram finally his priya spoke up da 1st word

"rraaammm...!"

TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by Anamika163 - 11 years ago

Glad u decided to continue... Anu.. loved it...
RaYa ko toh RaYa bhi juda hain sarkte!

WOW kya likha hai again an awesome update my  just fabulous full of emotions love and mystery ...loved each and every part of it from beginning to end just perfect ...Edited by parulkhare13 - 11 years ago

sorry for being late dear..
glad you continued...
aww love the efforts made by cady,rajat and ayesha to bring raya back together...
ab next part jaldi se update karo na...

Originally posted by: Anamika163

agayi..?? nautanki.. tere wajah se yeh sab horaha hai😡 chal chod.. pagal tu hai toh main kaunsi normal hu🤣 thnk u so much jaanu.. ab jaldi jaldi update kar ke khatam kardungi.. no more waiting... u knw i was upset with da last days' epis.. isiliye yaha pe bhadas nikala😆 love u too muuaaahhh🤗

Nautanki??? aur mere wajese eh sab?? lo kuch to accha kam kya maine😉 jaldise update karegi yeh samajh ayi par khatam kardegi???? nhi tu aisa nhi karsakti... meh kya k liye wait karungi 😭 are epi ke wajese to sab upset hai... tu jab chahe continue kar... par plzzz khatam mat kar... aur abhi next part k liye rukh rhi hu abhi...😉

u r making me crazy by ur update like this i m sitting and wait 4 update

 i have tears in my eyes out of joy ...how turely they love eachother

keep rockin

Edited by viny_queen - 11 years ago