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ArHi OS: We Can Have This Suhaag Raat*Removed* (Page 49)

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Aww. This is such a sweet ending !
I love how youve including the saat pheras. Youve made Arnav into such a sweetheart.
And for the whole mature content thing, I am absolutely fine with you not writing what your not comfortable with. After all, it's ur story!

Lots of love
Celiza xox

PS: Besides I think that everyone else can just use up their imagination finishing this off! ;D

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
I never thought of it this way...I wonder if the CV's themselves realize that! I bet they have not a single clue.
Its beautiful and you did their special moment the needed and more justice. Kudos to you!!

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
What a lovely end to this lovely OS.

It is true, their pre-wedding rituals are all done. Only thing left are the phere and var-mala.
The var-mala is the actual marriage ceremony, its called a gandharv vivah, the phere are promises the couple makes.
When Arnav and Khushi enter Shantivan they are wearing var-malas so Im assuming that essentials ritual was completed.
And you don't need to circle a holy flame to make promises.

I loved it!

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
awesome, i loved it!

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
ClapZehra- That has got to be one of the BEST OS' that you have written - in fact one of the best on IF - I love the way that you wove the entire vows/pheras/characters & came up with an amzing story. Well paced & also loved the ending - subtle & not crude as has been demo'd in other stories. It was truely beautiful & a master piece. You are a stStarr

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
What to say,Zehra?? I am completely speachless now; all I can give u is a round of applaudeClap
That was sooo beautiful, really wnderfulDay Dreaming
Loved how u described the marriage vows!!- Man! U r a God Gifted GeniusBig smile
Absulately Rocking 2nd part it is- thats how it should bHeartHeart
Thnx 4 the PMHug

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
AWESOME PART...!!! now we should have a sequel :P we can have this suhaagraat again lol

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Posted: 11 August 2012 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
beautiful

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