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New Arhi OS: Suhaag Raat (18+) (Page 12)

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
lol i hope khushi isnt this innocent. i mean, screaming at the sight of a hard on or moving her hand away quickly just because it moved?
seriously?

well written and all...found it funny and cute but it also felt like he was making love to a twelve year old!

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
god man. so hott

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 2:00am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
very hot,...
 
but sorry i couldnt help but notice it was all very one sided...all bout Arnav...n his POV...there was no reactions from khushi or how she was feeling...
 
Sorry but i felt it was very much all male oriented...
 
 

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Posted: 06 September 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by highonshows


very hot,...
but sorry i couldnt help but notice it was all very one sided...all bout Arnav...n his POV...there was no reactions from khushi or how she was feeling...
Sorry but i felt it was very much all male oriented...


i noticed that too. I think all my os's are arnav pov. I should try to write from her side. It just comes out at that way...
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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
It was so hot 
Nice

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God this was hot !!

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