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IPKKND FF: Playing For Keeps #2 - REMOVED (Page 91)

PersieV IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Saraa.

liked nk-khushi bond..bff..

So your comments no matter how many times you comment make me smile I love you dear!! <3

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged

Edited by Aveiro - 20 November 2012 at 11:07am

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 1:18pm | IP Logged


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infiresmayn Senior Member

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Oh hooo, the stage is set, the actors are willing ... let's get this show on the road!! Wink

Ahh, I loved everything about this, from the Arnav almost addressing her as 'Sexy' to his secretary, to that almost-something that would have taken place if said secretary hadn't chosen that precise moment to blurt something! LOL

And when he noted that the name "Mrs Jha" just didn't suit her at all! I couldn't agree more!! There's just a certain ... ring that "Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada" has! ROFL

"Continue unravelling?" ahaa!! You naughty, cheeky Arnav!! Although, deep down ... she doesn't really mind, does she? Wink

Ohh maaan, Shyaaam, my baby <3 

After picturing such a cutie in the role of Shyam, there's just no way I can't feel sorry for him!! Oof!! :3 

Smouldering update - I could just imagine a sexier and somewhat "rougher" version of Rabba Ve playing in the background!! LOL

Loved it and I can't wait for the next one!! Thank you for the scrap!! Star

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 14 October 2012 at 5:29pm

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.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 1:22pm | IP Logged

OMFG update..seriously it was one helluva update,which gave me tingly feeling, the one i get when i watch ArHi
stomach to churn inside..
Whenever they gaze into each other's eye and get lost.i love gives tingly sesnation..
So so so so loved the update..
Loved how she snapped back at him that she isnt scared..
Loved reading his thoughts,glad u included his pov..wanted that.
He cant deny,he is attracted to that beauty..
Aww he asks her to put the trust on him.he is asking her TRUST..and she is ready to hand it all over him.
The time of Qs/Ans.
His curiousity to know her better..and she answered confidentally..He compelled her to answer.seriously their eyelock seems like COMPULSION.they speak on their own,hearts speak on own..they seem to not having any control.
And then looking into eyes! I loved that..
His words about her eyes..Gosh with the endearment.and cherry on Top..His husky voice..
Her honest confession about his eyes..and then her fingers according to their own feeling him,tracing his forhead..Gosh! Removing the creases..
OMG hand holding,caressing and they were like its something most natural in world,
It was a Killer update..u planned to kill us so we dont nag u much to update Hun..!
His secretary interepted or else they would have spent all life starring into each other's eyes..
Both as team against smj..he had it.but whatever it is im sure it would be one helluva journey

(It reminds me the show's producer's words about them,that if we air the whole epi with just them gazing into each other's eyes.still it would rock ) and they set the screen on fire with just mere presence.
their starring, gazing into each other's eyes sends me shivers down the spine..
ArHi bold Eyelock surely would the end of me One day.

Edited by .Saraa. - 14 October 2012 at 3:32pm

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Arshi2gthr4evr Senior Member

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Ohh, Liya please don't leave me hanging and update this soon!!! Pretty please???


Wow, Liya u listened to me and updated quickly Big smile
I love u so much<333
And this was a fantastic, terrific, wonderful, incredible, amazing, awesome, fantabulous, beautiful and very "SEXY" update Wink
My Arnie baby was trying to be all flirty and perverty but it was cute Smile
I can sense some mature content coming up Liya Embarrassed

By the way, why does it say Chapter 7 Page 103 in the heading when it's actually Chapter 8 on Page 103?

Edited by Arshi2gthr4evr - 15 October 2012 at 2:32pm

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cymateli IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Another great one!! Clap will give detailed comments later Embarrassedgotta rush now..
 Update soon.. I am waiting!! Day Dreaming 

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NothingLasts IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 October 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
They are getting bolder!

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