OS:RAM"i too had a love story" last part pg 27 - Page 19

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

thanx.its nice.waiting fr d next.

Originally posted by: saniya9919

Tasshu...that was really hot update. I am waiting for the next update, I know its last part. Hope you will come up with new FF, i really liked this story.😃Thanks for PM.

Originally posted by: balhfan4ever

Yaar! You can really create a lot of fire with your description of their C-night...lagta hi nahi Ki pehli bar aisa scene likhna attempt kiya hai...superbly written. RaYa become one😳..woo..hooo...pls update soon👏

Originally posted by: karamsekhon

👏👏👏 wow awesome👏

Originally posted by: ahana1994

that was so damn hot ☺️ ☺️

Originally posted by: lovelysimi_15

thnx alot dear.  again totally romantic right from the RAYA chat online to the meeting at the mall(WISH THAT WOULD HAPPEN TO ME) and their first nite-smoking hot... keep writing dear. luved it

Originally posted by: soni4eva

Omg amazin update totally luvd it x

Originally posted by: Siacutie

tashu waiting 4 next part 

continue soon

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

It's really gud, but why SR before marriage, do continue

Originally posted by: Oneandall

Wow that was HOTT!! And it's hard to believe that it was your first time writing a hot scene because you my friend have nailed it... 👏👏👏

I am sad as to what happened between Ram and Priya. please don't tell me that Priya died... please update the next part soon!! 😕


OH and SORRY for the late comment