Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


richa_kapoor IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 4:58am | IP Logged
PART - 13

GEET ws laid unconcious on stratchr nd doc hvng marks on deir faces is going 2 operate on hr,wen Maan entrd forcily in OT. All docs shokd nd scold hm.

Doc:wat d hell r u doing?leav or i call security.

Maan:pls doc dont do dis abortion.

Doc:bt y?& who r u?dis is hr decision.

Maan:pls doc i beg u dis is my baby.pls. Bt if u still wnt 2do dat i sabtage all thngs dere.pls dont harm my Geet nd baby.

Doc:ok2 relax we dont do nythng.frst u both discussed den we take ny step. Doc Stanley shifted hr 2 nrmal ward. Ye abortion nai hoga.

Maan hvng a lot of tears in hs eyes.he went 2 hr nd kissed on hr 4head:i m sorry Geet.meri wajhse aj tume usi dard se fir guzarna pada.i m so sory.

Doc pt hr hand on hs sholdr& signled hm 2go outside.den dey shifted hr 2nrmal wrd.

PRESENT TIME(after 6 months):-Maan wake up wid dat dy's horrible memory.wen he is jst a few momnt far 4m losing hs only love nd baby. He tryng 2calmd hmslf nd trnd hs face 2hs side nd sw hr sleeping on hr frnt.Maan smiled,trnd hr nd brng hr on hs chest. He entangled hs fingers gently in hr hairs.

MAAN:Geet how mny times i told u nt 2slept on ur tummy,ur 9month is u nt hear me jaan.y?

Geet(in slepy voice):coz i luv wen u scold me?

Maan confusd:u love it.casully no1 lyk scolding.

Geet rubbd hr soft palm on hs bare chest nd kissd it:bt i love wen u do it 2me.coz isme b tumra pyar chupa hota hai.

Maan burns in desire wid hs innosent touch nd kiss:Jaan stop temptng me or u kno wat wil happn.

Geet:den go ahead who stop u.i m ur legal wedded wife.

Maan told hs whole truth 2Teji,Pammi&Geet. Geet 4gv hm. So Teji wnts dey gt married as soon as possible. Both agred nd do court marriage aftr1week,she gt dischrgd. Frm dat dy both livd on a rented house.He tuk care of hr each&evry smal need.

MAAN:idea to baot acha hai bt dnt 4gt k aj kya hai.

GEET raised nd kissd on hs chek:how cn i 4gt.aj mera spna pura hone wala hai.

MAAN:itna bhrosa hai mujhpe?

GEET:ankh bnd krk.last time b tm jeete the or aj b tumi jetoge.

MAAN:wo small level ki bat thi.

GEET lukd in hs eyes:lvel koi b ho my Maan is best or aj tume wo sbko prove krna hai.aj tume mera spna pura krna hai.i wnt 2 c on d heights of sucess.(she peck on hs lips 2 whch Maan take d full chrge nd cnvrt it in2 a soul tochng smooch.reluctantly both gt seprated)lets go Maan nd prove evry1 dat u r best.

Both gt ready nd reached 4 a car race.Maan alwys wnts 2bcm a racer,bt hs dad nvr shw intrst & nt allowd hm 2do so.wenevr he gt time he do practise bt secreatly.hs dad wants he only do hs family business. Aftr getting married2 Geet he decided 2 chose racing as hs carrier nd won 1 small lvl race alredy. Bt 2dy's race level is vry high. He is vry tensed bt Geet alwys suport hm. Wen he reachd wid Geet,Teji nd Pammi also joined dem. Maan hugged both.

MAAN:thnx guys tm log aa gaye.ab mujhe Geet ki ten.nai hogi.wo akle stands pr..

TEJI:dnt wory hm hai iske pas u only concentrate on ur go ur team(who do works 4 car)is waiting 4u.Maan movd 2hs red Ferari.Teji nd Pammi support hr nd tuk hr 2stands. Race starts. Maan's grip tighten. All r shouting 4 deir fav1.Geet is scared sm time 1 ny othr car hitted wid hs car. Lap by lap Maan getting fastr. In hs last lap 2 car ws chasing hs car.Geet scared nd prayed 4 hm.1 of den tryng 2hit bt Maan hv 2do it 2day fr hs love.he ws vry confident nd planned evrythng.vry clevrly he slow down hs speed nd both othr cars hit each othr nd Maan ran ahed nd won d race. Teji &2 shouts in happiness. Maan cm out nd reachd 2 hold d Champion's Cup.He hold nd show 2evry1. All reportes nd many girl fans cvrd hm. Geet cmng twrds hm wid Teji nd pammi.both holding hr hands. 2grls tryng 2kiss hm bt he stop dem.

MAAN:sory grls lekin ye haq sirf 1 ka hai meri wife Geet ka.(she felt so prouded. Maan left behind nd reached 2hr. Both kissed passionately.) Jaan i won d race.i fulfilled our dream.

Geet hugged hm tightly.reporters covr both again nd ask hm who is hs inpiration.

MAAN:Geet,my wife.who supports me in my toughest time.if she dnt cm in my life,i would alwys b a looser she made me Champion wid hr support nd Love.(He kissed hr agin)thanx jaan 4cmng in my liyf nd gv meaning 2it.

Bt suddnly she felt immence pain in hr womb nd she cried in pain.Maan nd both gt scared alot.She falls on grnd nd Maan hold hr tightly. He call ambulance. Immediately she ws admitted in nearby hospital. Maan ws so tensed. Teji nd Pammi roming here & dere. Aftr half an hr Doc cm wid a smile.all3 rush 2hr nd enquired abot both.

DOC:cngrts Mr. Maan its baby boy.

A huge smile cm on all faces.

MAAN:howz my Geet doc?can i sw both?

DOC.ya both r f9,just wait 4 few mins.

All r excited nd went inside.Pammi hld baby in hr arms.Both kissed hm nd Geet.Geet lukd little paled. Aftr dat both lft dm alon wid baby.Maan tuk hr lips nd kissd hr passiontly.Den he tuk hs baby who hv same eyes nd nose jst lyk Maan&dimpled cheeks lyk Geet. Both kissd baby lovingly...

Edited by richa_kapoor - 01 September 2012 at 5:27am

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
badaa happy sappy update thhaa
both become parents
 baby bring happiness as  winning the race by maan

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divya22 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
aww awesome...
so.maan.came on tym... thank god...
so maan wanted to b a racer... n he did it...
loved d way he stopped dat girls n gv al credit to geet
aww baby boy...

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mehak173 IF-Dazzler

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nadira29 Senior Member

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
wow maan succeeded in winning the race
superb update
loved it
geet gave birth 2 junior msk
waiting 4 next part

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maankisimm Senior Member

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
amazing & lovely update
well done richa.

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sobia4maaneet IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 September 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged

thnxx for showing maan as a successful man ..

part was really sweetie cutie one ...

loved it ..

specially the way maan left all those girls ...lolxxx

mindblowing as always ..:)

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