IN LOVE WITH STRANGER - UPDATED PT 10 PG 24 - Page 11

*IN LOVE WITH STRANGER 2*
PART - 8

GEET sobbing by d memories of hr bittr past. Maan cm nd asked hr again. He wants 2 share hr pain nd wnts 2 console hr,bt she dosnt wnt hs support,coz d only thing she ws afrid of was sympathy. She. Instruct hm nt tryng 2 intrfere inhr persol lyf. Maan fumed at hs helplessness nd patted hs foot 2wrds d door nd slammed badly. Geet fall on hr knees again.She dosnt wnt 2 hurt hs feelings. Wen she get bak 2 normal she cm ot of hr rum nd went 2apolozise 4 hr behaviour. But she gey shoked seeing him packing hs belongings.
GEET:Maan wat r u doing?

MAAN:i dnt think so dat u r as much naive.u cn c wat i m doing.

GEET:dats y i asked?where do u go?

MAAN:i m chek-in in hotel.

GEET:y?

MAAN:dnt ask coz u dnt hv a rite ok?

GEET:y u connect dis thing 2 dat.

Maan dosnt ans hr nd moved out of d room.She followd hm nd clenched hs hand,bt he freed by snatcing hs hand frm hr.nd leave widout utterng a word.She only sw hm going helplessly.3 days passed nd she ws only think abot hm nd hs injured arm. She scared 4 hm,so wen she totally lost she went 2 hs hotel nd reachd 2 hs rum. Maan ws silently half laying on a bed. Seeing hr he get up.Geet widout uttring a word strt packing hs belonging bak.
MAAN:Geet stp it i say?y u doing dis.

GEET do hr work nd hold hs hand:Lets go home bak.

MAAN stops both by nt let hm go wid hr wave:no i m nt going nywhere,until Teji cm bak.

GEET:kyu kr rae ho ye sb?

MAAN:dats wat i want 2 ask u?or tume kkya frak padta hai?main lagta kya hu tumara.

GEET:Maan we aruged at home.

MAAN:no.main ab tabi aunga jb mujhe humare riste ka naam pata hoga.

GEET:kya jaana chahte ho?

MAAN:pura sach.

GEET:ok main tume sb bataungi lekin yaha nai ghar pe.

Maan agreed nd both drive bak 2hr hom.She tryng 2 mak hm comfortable bt being stuborn Maan only stick 2 hs demand. Geet sw no mor option nd finally she broke in frnt of hm.ready 2 reveal d truth of hr bitter past,whch was hidden frm evry1,evn frm hr own bro.
GEET:sach sunna chahte ho na chalo mere sath(she tuk hm 2 hr rum nd shw hr old pic)ye ladka dekh rae ho pic me?mere sath school me padta tha.my frst crush. I ws only 14,wen he came in my life.sb bahut khubsurat tha,lekin 6 mahine k baad use koi or mill gai,actualy he was using me only 2 make jelous dat girl only.nd wen he sucedded 2 win hr,he dump me.i was broked completly.bt it ws nt ended here.3 mahine main kafi depress rahi firr 1 or ladka humare grp me aaya.wo kb mera dost bna pata hi nai chala.He alwys talk very sweetly nd tryng 2 console me.mujhe b uska sath achha lagne laga. Lekin ye to meri barbadi ki shuruat thi(hr voice heavied nd a tear drop touched hreye's corner) 4 mahine baad mom or dad ek car accident me mare gaye.i was felt scattered. Sb kht: ho gaya tha.aisi lagta tha ki life end ho gai hai,tb usi ladke ne mujhe sahara diya.lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki is aad me uski intentions kuchh or thi.1 dy i ws feeling very low missed my parents alot.He cm 2 me and in pretext of consoling he used me 2 satisefied hs physical needs.(she stp suddnly nd closd hr eyes.He hazeld eyes r cmpltly drenched wid hr tears.pearls of tear strt droping frm hr eyes) He misused me whole day again nd again.nd i was so dumb dat cnt even realize d truth. Aftr dat day he nevr c me again. He dumped me like used tissue paper. Use nd throw. Isne to sirf mera dil toda tha,magar usne to meri atama ko hi maar dala. I ws only 15,nt able 2 handle all dis,wants 2 die but Pammy ws my best frnd. She hide all my secreats nd gave courage 2 me. Bas usi dinn se maine apne dil ki har baat ko unsuna krna shuru kr diya. No1 is allowed 2 cm closer 2 me.

Now she broked badly nd sobbing alot. Maan's fist tightned. He want 2 punish hm. He moved 2 hr and filled hr in hs embrace. She hide hr face in hs chest nd cried. Maan's heart wrenched completly,cnt able 2 hndle all dis. He thot how much dis pure soul suffers at such a small age,coz of others widout ny reason.tear drop touchs hs eys lashes.

GEET:y Maan y?maine aisa konsa gunah kia tha jiski itni saza mili hai mujhe?

MAAN brked 2 bt he wnts 2b hr support:O my love..he breathed heavily.

Maan caress hr bak lovingly nd seprated hr he caress her ckeek:Geet luk at me nd stop crying.(He wiped hr tears)tumne koi galti nai ki hai samjhi tum,koi galti nai hai yumhari in sb me.jinhone tumari kadar nai ki ye unki badkismati hai,galat wo log hai tm nai.tm aaj b unti hi pure ho jitni aaj se 10 saal pehle thi,so dont waste these pearl 4 dem.dey r sinister only.u r god's spl child who meant 2 gv happiness 2 others. I kno jo hua wo sai nai tha bt it ws nt ur fault.it was deir fault. Samjhi so 4m now promise me u dnt cry 4 dis.

Geet sw in hs dark brown eyes nd hr heart wants 2 trust hm. She hugged him tightly felting great relief and safty. His heartbeat sending her relief and she felt lightened after sharing her immence pain...


PART 09-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3140434?pn=21
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

Woo awesome..
Maan is too stubborn... Bt i liked it...
Really geet suffered a lot... Actually this happens with many girls.
They think ki boy loves them n.den after using boys throw them.. Bt i think sumwhere is mai girls ki bhi galti hai... They only gv so much liberty to boys...
Haapy dat maan is still with hr after knowing the tru

painful update
its going amazing
now geet's truth is out
pr its not her fault
superb update
waiting 4 next

Poor geet suffered so much
Nice update
continue soon

bloody disgusting guys..

  wow lovely painful update...how much my  geet went through in her small age..bechare geet..maan kill that witch ...my mana is soothing her pain...dont worry gete, my maan is there for u forever..very painful update dear..i love it.

amazing update...

Very sad update.😲

*IN LOVE WITH STRANGER 2*
PART - 9A

SUN rises and shines beautifuly. Last nite ws worst 4 both.bt it ws a new day,gives new hope 2wrds lyf. He ws admiring hs sleeping beauty. He couldnt stop hs gaze frm devouring hr. D aroma of tea nd baked breads filled hr sharp white nose nd she opned hr dizzy eyes slowly2. She found Maan ws atanding wid a dish in hs hands filled wid tea nd tosts. As she sat on bed Maan moved 2 hr bed and sat near hr.

MAAN:gud mrng.

GEET smiled weakly:gd mg.ye sb kya hai?

MAAN:Geet i thnk u seriously need an eye sight chekup(she twisted hr lips nd made bad faces)or nai to kya ye tea hai or ye toast hai dikh raha hai firr b puch rai ho.

GEET:meant y u do dis?Maan pls i dont want ur sampathyPls stp pitying on me.only bcoz of dis attitude i wont share my pain wid ny1.i m strong enough 2 fought wid my mesiries.

MAAN put aside hr hair flick behind hr ears:nevr regrets in ur lyf coz evrythng happens 2 u 4 a reason. D hard time dat u go through built u much stronger person.i know u r stronger nd i m nt pittying on u.Geet stop putting urself in a shell.open ur arms wid d same confidence nd except d happiness waiting 4 u.u cant ran frm ur life.all men r nt same.if take d example of ur father,who loved ur mother truly.nd ur own brother Teji. Do u think he ever betrayed Pammy bhabhi?did he?(she nodded no)den how can u judge all d person in a same way.Geet u was so small at dat time nd emtionally weak.u need 2 b guided by som1.bt it dosnt meant dat bcoz of ur past bitter memories u stop ur desires nd living.i know u hav a courage 2 face any prob at ur own. And com 2 dis b.fast,i made dis coz i felt hungry.bt its ok if u dont want 2 eat den its ok.made food 4 urself of ur choice.

He ws abot 2 move bt she stop hm,holding hs arm.

GEET:Maan i m sorry.wo main..

MAAN placed hs index finger on hr full pink lips nd stop hr saying anythng:shh no need 2 explain ny thng.

GEET:wait,i ll cm in 2 min.

She wnt fr brushng,nd aftr dat both do b.fast 2gether.

MAAN:dekho aj tum so rai thi to maine ye sb kr dia bt iski adat mat dal lena. Lunch dinner or aage b sare kam tm khud hi karogi.mujhe to chot lagi hai.i need rest.bt ghumne ja skte hai.

GEET smiled:ok Mr.expert hm aj boating k liye jayege.wat u say?

MAAN:done.

Both wnt 4 boating weather ws very pleasent and perfect 4 boating. She hired a moter boat. Maan wore dark green vest nd miltery green capries. She wore white shorts wid skimpy yellow top,hvng small sleeves. Maan sat inside nd raised hs arm 2 help hr. She hold hs hand nd Maan pull hr in. She falls on hm. He soft body rubbed against hm. Both felt buring sensation in deir bodeis. He can evn able 2 felt her taut peaks againd hs rock hard chest nd smirked,coz d way hr body responds 2 hm. Maan's fingers crushed hr soft waist. Hr hands ws on hs sholdr. He wnts 2 feel hr,bt seeing hr uncomfrt he stop nd broke d awkward silent.

MAAN:Geet aram se wrna mera dusra hath b tut jayega.

GEET made aww face:achha.Mr sadu tumi ne mujhe jhatke se keench liya dats y i lost my balance.

MAAN:ye to wo bat ho gai ulta chor kotwal ko dante.

GEET:ohh now u evn called me chor?

MAAN cm near hr ear nd whisperd:wo to tm ho hi.

He fall on bak nd smirked. Hr white cheeks trn cherry reb.

MAAN teased mor:Geet stp blushng nd run dis moter boat.

GEET:i m nt blushing ok.

MAAN again strt comng 2 hr:realy?

GEET:ok stp sit silently.i ll drive.

She drove boat in a deep sea nd water splashes evrywhere madly. Both drenshing wid d splashes,bt njoying riding. She smiles. Maan felt dis time hr smile is natural outcom of hr happiness. She was nt pretending. Aftr few hours both cm 2 d shore. Both r cmpletly drnched nd her petite figure seems mor desirable. Evn Geet cnt stop attracting 2wrds hs shapr counters. Maan teased hr nd on hr riding skills nd she get angry on hm. Both running in snad lyk carefree frm whole world. She is chasing m nd Maan running realy fast. But hs foot struck nd he falls down,Geet 4gt hr angr nd cm 2 hlp hm. She ws scared bt he laugh how he made hr fool.Geet slapped on hs arm.

GEET:u idiot?y u do dis?

MAAN:sorry2.bt it means tume bura lagega agr mujhe kuch ho jaye.

GEET:shut up Maan.

She stand want 2 go.bt Maaan stop hr.

MAAN:Geet dnt run dis time.luk in2 my eyes nd ans my que.u felt bad na.

GEET cant met his hysterical eyes bt smhow she do so:ha.

MAAN:y?kyu farak padta hai tume.aaj bataye bina nai jane dunga.

GEET lower her long eye lashes:agar na batau to.

MAAN:jwab to main janta hu bas tumse sunna chahta hu.

GEET blushed nd ran 2 hr car. Maan 2 follw hr.he still waits 4 hr ans.boh reached 2 home in evng. Geet take fresh towel nd went 2 hs room. She helped him in removing hs wet vaist nd dried his drenching hairs.

MAAN:Geet u also drenched so change ur clothes first.

GEET:lekin tumhare change krwane zada zaruri hai.

She dried his chiseld body. Both desires start burning their bodies...


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PART 9B-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3140434?pn=22
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago