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KD-Kiya OS - Streetlight (Page 10)

Sawyer_Tom IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CoffeeAddict

Btw would you elaborate on the "red" highlighted part a bit, I'm still a little curious as to how...

Sure. OS are supposed to be one time things. Like they are written just to explain an aspect of the story or to elaborate on it. Sometimes they are made so that the fans can write what they want to see on the show. So they don't need a proper beginning. They can start anywhere and anyhow and can end just as abruptly. They don't have to explain themselves or their characters in intricate detail. It is like a small excerpt from a novel. Take this very OS for instance. You started with - 

She stomped out of the backdoor. Maybe this was it. She couldn't bear looking at her mother's constant unsatisfied look of her.

Here you didn't explain your character or tell us what this was about. You just took up a random scene and started with your own fabrication. That's what I'm talking about. It's starts in the middle of nowhere and more often than not ends in the middle of nowhere. Hope I made sense?

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Awesum os girl.i read it before commenting today because i read it many times n cant get over its lovely os girl.thanx 4 writing

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sawyer_Tom

Originally posted by CoffeeAddict

Btw would you elaborate on the "red" highlighted part a bit, I'm still a little curious as to how...

Sure. OS are supposed to be one time things. Like they are written just to explain an aspect of the story or to elaborate on it. Sometimes they are made so that the fans can write what they want to see on the show. So they don't need a proper beginning. They can start anywhere and anyhow and can end just as abruptly. They don't have to explain themselves or their characters in intricate detail. It is like a small excerpt from a novel. Take this very OS for instance. You started with - 

She stomped out of the backdoor. Maybe this was it. She couldn't bear looking at her mother's constant unsatisfied look of her.

Here you didn't explain your character or tell us what this was about. You just took up a random scene and started with your own fabrication. That's what I'm talking about. It's starts in the middle of nowhere and more often than not ends in the middle of nowhere. Hope I made sense?

You made complete sense En. And there's a 100% truth in what you said.

Honestly, I though you were talking about something specifically unique to my writings and I was wondering how my "abruptness" is different that the beginning of any other OS. LOL

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
beautiful piece of writing, loved it Clap

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Posted: 18 August 2012 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
pree dis is sooo KiSha..
I loved it...beautiful OS

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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Aanchal_

beautiful piece of writing, loved it Clap

Thanks.
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Posted: 19 August 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaRonforever

pree dis is sooo KiSha..
I loved it...beautiful OS

Thanks.

The "so KiSha" compliment is the best I've got!
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
how cutee!! it should've been named the boyfriend blazer instead of streetlight.. lol  nevertheless LOVE KD-KIYA!! 

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