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**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #6 NOTE ON PG-153 (Page 98)

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thank u so much for all the likes and comments...love u lotsSmile
 
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FLAMES OF DESIRE

 
(thank u farie1209, nilu710, khushi1022, jssood for spamming with pics...and everyone who cribbed for update...pls guys land me some more pics...as i am out of stock...mera pura pic ka folder delete ho gaya...becoz of my devil broAngry)
 
 
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PART-34
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins nowEmbarrassed)
 
 
 
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
 
 
 
Suddenly he jerked away, laughing maniacally..."look at your face...kitni darpok ho tum" geet looked at him confused...still holding herself securely...
he again leaned in closer...brushing his finger on her cheek..."itna darti ho mujhase...i was just joking sweetheart" geet moved her face away and ran from there...while prem smirked, satisfied with the fear he induced into her...
 

Geet rushed in her room, closing the door behind...she was petrified with whatever happened downstairs...She looked at her mehndi covered hand..."maan ki geet" she whispered slowly with her teary hazels...her heart was beating frantically with unknown fear...She meekly walked towards her bed, silently crying...then sat on it, holding herself close...

 

 

 
 
Maan could hear the sound of her payal, then her slow moves...he was driving towards hoshiyarpur, making it as soon as possible...The desperation was clearly visible on his face...he could make out she was unusually silent...he got worried and abruptly pulled the car sideways...

"geet are you there" he spoke craving to hear her voice...while geet was in her own reveries...she was terrified with prem's behaviour...why he acted like that..."babaji mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai" she whimpered...

maan got worried hearing her "geet talk to me...kya hua hai tumhe????" then he waited for her response...

"geet what the hell...baat karo mujhase" he shouted feeling helpless with her silence...he started the car, trying to reach as soon as possible...now he wont let her stay there even for a minute more...

 

Geet leaned on the bed, closing her eyes...unknown of the rage maan was going through...She was calm by now...her mehndi looked beautiful, just like a bride's mehndi...And maan's name made it look more prettier...She shied thinking how will she show her mehndi to him...will he like it...

 

 

 

 

 

She slowly flipped, now sleeping on her stomach...her duppatta was long gone, somewhere near the bed rest...Her mobile beeped with new message, she picked it with her dried mehndi hands...and that is when it striked her that maan was still on call...She blinked her lashes couple of times, thinking "kya woh uss baat pe gussa honge...i just wanted to shut rajji's mouth...warna woh sab nahi kehti" she pouted...then keeping the mobile near her ear..."maan" she whispered softly...

                                                                                

 

Maan was in the mid of traffic, honking, getting frustrated...

"dammit..." he smacked the steering wheel...while geet jumped in fear, thinking he is angry on her...

"i am sorry" she meekly said...and that is when he heard her speak...

"geet are you there"

"ji" he sighed in relief hearing her voice...

"tum thik ho"

"ummm" she blushed, with his concern...

"woh i am..." he started speaking thats when geet interupted...

"aap kahi ja rahe ho" she heard the disturbing traffic sound around him...and feared if he is going somewhere...

"ha woh mai..." maan started but and the car behind him honked to move ahead...he gave an furious look to the man...and started his car, driving off...

"geet i will talk to you in a minute, just stay on line" he spoked with urgency...

"ji" she blushed, really overwhelmed with joy...finally he was talking to her normally...

 

 

 

 

 

She rolled over the bed closing her eyes, feeling tickled with his sexy hoarse voice...She kissed her mobile screen, missing him like anything...Maan smiled on the other side hearing her kissing sound...He just wanted to get somewhere as soon as possible...somewhere calm and soothing, where he can talk to her endlessly without disturbance...Geet turned and tossed on her fluffy bed...trying to fix herself comfortably...

 

 

Maan was on highway, so he was not able to stop his car in the middle of the road...he kept driving, waiting for a correct place to stop...While geet was waiting their, highly anticipating his next set of words, which he will speak to her...Only she knows how she survived without hearing his voice...
15 mins passed by and still maan didn't got any suitable place to stop the car...Poor geet was dosing off while waiting for him...and when he finally got a perfect place to halt, geet was fast asleep...
"finally...abhi bolo, i am here" he chirpily said...but didn't got her any reply...he again tried...
"geet you there"
"mishty"
"jaan bolo toh"
"tum so rahi ho kya
" he was confused...thinking why she is silent...
"ummm" finally geet moaned hearing his voice...she was taking her chota wala afternoon nap...
"how much you sleep" maan cribbed...
"bas 5 min aur" geet spoke between her moans...
"nahi talk to me now" maan was admant...
"maan...ummm...mujhe sone do na" her moans where sounding more erotic now...maan knew his thoughts could any moment turn wild, if he keeps hearing her moans...
"ummm ok...you sleep" he halfheartedly gave up...and started driving towards hp...

 

 
 
Geet woke up after some time, when rajji came barging into her room...Rajji was hell excited, dancing, giggling, blushing for no reason...
"geet utha na...tell me how i am looking" rajji spoke looking into the mirror, darkening her lipstick...
"ummm we are just going into the fields...why you putting so much makeup" geet spoke brushing her droopy eyes...
"you wont understand...bas jaldi utha...i dont want to be late" rajji pulled her up, as geet grumpily sat on bed...
"mujhe nahi jana...i am feeling sleepy" geet lazily said...while maan was silently hearing there conversation, smiling at his mishty's cute antics...
"geet...she screamed...mujhe kuch nahi sunana, you have to come...now just get ready"
"but my mehndi will get spoiled" geet pouted...
"no it wont...just remove that dry mehndi off your hand" rajji suggested...
"ummm then it wont show colour...and I want my mehndi to be dark...or else everyone will taunt me, that maan dosen't love me enough" geet pouted making baby face...while maan laughed hearing this...
"aap haso mat" geet cutely added, showing her anger...
"I cant resist, if you talk like this" maan was half way through...he was just 1 hour away from entering hoshiyarpur...He so much wanted to tell her, that he is coming...but now thought its better to surprise her...
"aap bilkul dushta ho" geet pouted...
"geet" he shouted on her, for calling him dushta...
"aur danav bhi...har wakt gussa karate ho" geet cribbed...
"geet with whom are you talking????" rajji was confused...
"umm unke saath" geet continued concentrating on the call ignoring rajji's over excited scream..."Is maan on line...mujhe phone do na...i want to hear his voice" rajji pounced on geet intending to snatch her mobile...
"nahi...he wont talk to you...he only talks to me" geet pulled away her hand, pushing rajji away...
 
 

 
 
Maan was having a blast, laughing madly...Geet was showing this kind of jealousy for the very first time, and it really amused him..."jaan i am all yours, why you fighting for me" he tried to calm her...
"nahi maine kaha na he wont talk to you" geet was admant now...she will never let rajji talk to maan...She had this insecurities with rajji, as she believed rajji knows everything that happens between the couple...and where she was highly illiterate in that case...
"why dont you let him speak...if maan denies, then i wont talk" rajji tried to convince her...
"why you behind my maan...go and talk to rohan" geet screamed this time...making both rajji and maan jump in fear...
Finally giving up rajji asked her to get ready..."just 5 mins i am giving you, get ready i dont want to get late because of you"
"ummm" and geet hided her phone into her duppatta...she adjusted her hair, and was ready to leave...
"geet where are you going" maan shouted on the other side...getting tensed...
"tumhe change nahi karna...you will go in this lehnga itself" rajji eyed her up and down...
"I am feeling lazy...aur waise bhi its just a matter of half n hour"
"ummm" rajji looked away...she wondered if they will finish with in half n hour...
"geet you are not going anywhere...I am coming there in 1 hour...just stay in your room" maan screamed his lungs out...but geet could not hear him...she was busy moving out, hiding her mobile in her duppatta...
"geet dont take your mobile with you...waha network nahi hoga" rajji said...
"thik hai mai rakh ke aati hu" geet walked away towards her room...while maan was shouting on the other side...He was so tensed for her, that he lost his control, and merely skipped a speedy truck by few inches...He skidded the car sideways, breathing heavily...he looked down, calming his breath...and that is when he heard her voice for the last time...
"maan now me going towards feilds...will talk to you later...and I love you lots" and she disconnected the call...maan closed his eyes, brushing his hair back, feeling miserable...He was sweating badly, after all he merely missed his death...
 
 

 
 
After a while, calming himself...he started driving, keeping his full concentration on road...He loved geet a lot, and even his family...could not imagine what they will go through if whatever happens to him...He steadily drived and reached HP with in 1 hour, he excitedly got out of the car...and entered beautifully decorated handa haveli, looking around...His eyes where searching for geet, as he knew she must back from fields...He kept looking here and there, finding her presence...and that is when, someone tapped his shoulder...he looked behind and found brij smiling their wholeheartedly...
"finally you here...how are you maan" brij pulled maan in a tight hug feeling emotional to see him after such a long time...while maan lovingly hugged him back...
"I am absolutely fine...tu kaisa hai"
"perfect as always" brij laughed, hugging him sideways...
"woh how are everyone" maan asked with litle hesitation...
"everyone are fine...but the one you really asking for is little upset" brij teased...
"kyu geet ko kya hua" maan was tensed...while brij laughed..."nothing i was just teasing you...waise you can ask about geet directly, no need to shy"
"ok then...brij where is my fiancee" maan came straight away on point...
"woahhh that was quick...she must be upstairs...but you change first...then go and surprise her"
"ok..." brij left maan in his room to change...he handed him a black sherwani...Maan changed into it quickly, and moved out searching for geet...He was craving to have her in his arms, and love her beyond his limits...He hurriedly went upstairs, and quietly entered her room...his eyes desperately searched for her...but she was no where...Halfheartedly he moved down, and kept looking for her in crowd...
 
 

 
Meanwhile he met up with beeji and darji...and took their blessings...They where more than happy to see him, as he was their would be son in law...After talking for a while, maan pulled titto aside, asking him about geet's where abouts...
"woh geet didi toh rajji didi ke saath kheto mai gayi hai na" titto answered...
"thik hai tum jao" now maan was tensed, why they taking so time...he moved out towards the lawn, and kept waiting for geet...He was pacing back and forth, thinking how she will react after seeing him...A cute smile touched his lips, as he knew she wont look around before directly coming into his arms...He will definately go insane with her nonstop cribbing, her cute talks wont end, her ruthana, her gussa everything he have to bear...After all she is his, and her every emotion belongs to him and only him, he smiled impatiently looking towards the fields, spread wide infront of their haveli...
 
 
One hour back-
Geet and rajji walked towards an isolated barn house, which was situated away from the fields and even the village...
"rajji...i dont like this place...please can we go back"
"geet we have just reached...actually rohan is here to meet me" rajji tried making her understand...
"what" geet was shocked...
"please geet...try to understand...actually he will be leaving to delhi tommorow...and we...i mean...hume..." rajji was not finding words to tell her, that wanted to spend some cozy moments...
"but why did you brought me here" geet was scared now...
 

 
"geet you are my sister...wont you help me this much...we are just 5 mins away...look there he is" rajji pointed towards rohan, who was standing infront of that broken house...
"It looks haunted...i dont want to go there...please rajji chal na wapas, mujhe dar lag raha hai"
"please geet you are my sister na...just half n hour...please" and she pulled geet with her running through the field...
 
Geet's heart beats where frantic...she was sweating badly...She bit her lips, as they stood infront of rohan...Rohan smiled greeting geet, then looked at rajji, eyeing her to follow him...
Rajji blushed, then looked around...eyeing him where will they do it?...then followed rohan's gaze, which pointed towards the house...
Geet was unaware for their intentions...she was highly scared, looking at this isolated place...she gulped her saliva, and bit her lips...as she was on the verge of crying...
"geet you wait here...i am going with rohan...we will come back in 15 mins" rajji lied, as she knew they will definately require more time then that...
"but what i will do here all alone" geet whimpered...and that is when came a sharp teasing voice, making geet jump in fear
"hey sweetheart"...she looked at prem horrified, then moved behind rajji, holding her arm tightly in fear...
"look now prem is here to give you company" rajji smiled...
"but i dont want to stay here...i am leaving" geet started walking back...petrified with prem's presence...
"geet...geet...just wait...listen to me...its just a matter of 15 mins...please i love rohan...cant you do this much for your sis" rajji ran behind geet, finally pulling her back...
"please i want to go back" geet controlled her cry...
"ok ok...just 10 mins bas...not more than that...please" rajji pleaded joining her hands...
"please rajji make it fast...i dont want to stay here"
"love you sis...mai bas abhi aayi" and rajji kissed on her cheek and went away with rohan...leaving a shivering geet behind...
 
 

 
 
Prem smirked looking at geet, who looked highly vulnerable...he moved towards her eyeing her bare back with lust...her low waist lehnga and tightly fitted blouse, showed her enough flesh to make any man go mad with lust...he licked his lips, thinking erotically wild...then stood behind, faining her bare shoulder with his warm breath...
"why are you so shivering sweetheart" he could not control his urge, and snacked his arms around her, hugging her from back...
"just stay away" geet snapped, moving as far as possible feeling disgusted with his touch...
Prem started walking towards her smiling slyly..."geet why you running away I thought we are friends"
"no...I am not your friend" geet denied looking straight into his eyes...
"ok ok but see i consider you as my friend...and that is why i came this long...just to keep you company" he faked keeping his expression geniune...
"I dont care" she again moved away...
Prem cursed her under his breath, looking at her attitue..."just wait till, I show you mine" he thought smiling evily...
 
 
It was half n hour, and rajji and rohan where still inside...geet was loosing her patience and that moron prem's lusty gaze was irking her to the core...
"dont you wana go inside, and see what they doing" prem smirked, finally ploting his plan...
"no...i will wait here" came geet's straight forward answer...
"ummm you should always have this anxiety...to know what a young couple do, when alone" he laughed hinting her...
"just shut up" geet was pissed off...
"sweetheart may be after watching it...you never know, you will need my help to do the same" he winked at her...
"what you talking...I am not getting anything"
"really...dont pretend this much innocence sweetheart" he pulled geet in a hug, squeezing her waist tightly...nuzzling his face in the curve of her neck...
"leave me please" she whimpered pushing him off...and ran into the house calling for rajji...Prem ran behind her, and with in no time he hugged her from back...closing her mouth with his palm...
"Lets get over with this hide and seek" he huskily whispered into her ear, as geet shuddered in his arms, in her attempt to get free...
"I will rip off your innocence, by introducing you to this wild world" geet trembled whimpering with her closed mouth, as he harshly bit her earlobe...still locking her in his arms...
 
He dragged her to the near by close room, and showed her the scene infront...Geet eyes went wide in fear, looking at naked rohan and rajji rolling over eachother...
 

 
Rohan came on top of rajji and with a wild thrust entered her making her scream in pain and pleasure...Geet closed her eyes tightly, not able to see them like this...It looked disgusting, she cried...but no sound came from her mouth as prem was holding her mouth harshly...Rajji and rohan's loud moans where inducing a deep fear in her...She shivered as prem licked her neck, biting it..."Dont worry sweetheart, we will be more wild then this"
 
Geet wriggled in his arms, feeling his filth touch all over her body...she closed her eyes crying bitterly he dragged her towards the dirty stairs...which where going somewhere up...Geet's eyes grew wide in fear, she started smacking him and somehow pushed him away...
She ran from there, towards the exit...but prem with one swift move, picked her in his arms and started walking upstairs...Geet screamed her lungs out...crying for her life...expecting her near death...
 
Prem pushed geet in the room upstairs...The room was dark, and full of dry grass and broken woods...he pulled out his handkerchief, and tied her mouth...He laughed pushing her on hay of dried grass...then carnally leaned on her, trying to kiss her cheeks...Geet wriggled, shaking her head, not letting him touch in any way...She pushed with force, and ran for her life...She got into one of the room and closed the door behind, leaning onto it...Closing her mouth, crying bitterly...
 

 
"maan" she whimpered silently calling for him...
But her bad luck...the next moment, she felt prem banging on the door..."sweetheart i am here...please dont make me wait this much...or else i wont leave you that early" he laughed evily...and the next moment he barged into the room, pushing her off...Geet trembled back, throwing the wooden blocks his way...Trying hard to save herself...But prem was quick, with in no time he picked her up, by harshly pulling her hair...then in swift he pulled off her duppatta, eyeing her full curves with lust...he licked his lips, moving close to her, then tied her hand with her own duppatta...He pushed geet on the ground, making her whimper in pain...
 
 
He sat next to geet eyeing her each and every part, with uncontrolled desire...geet cried moving away, hiding her flesh by cuddling into her self...
His mobile rang, and very calmly he picked it up...
"ha rohan bolo"
"dude we are done...where is geet???? i am not finding you both anywhere" rohan and rajji where waiting outside the house...
"yaar geet was not listening...she wanted to go home...so i dropped her at haveli...now i am on my way to my aunts place"
"ohhh ok...i hope she didnt created any fuse" rohan was worried...
"no she didn't" prem smirked looking at worn out geet...
"ok bro thanks for your help"
"anytime" and prem disconnected the call, throwing his mobile somewhere in the room...
Geet looked at him horrified as he walked up to the door, slowly closing it from inside...he turned back looking straight into her...
"now its just you and me"
 
 
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Precap:- ummm...i am changing my mind...no precap this timeShocked...keep guessingOuch
 
 
hello sweeties, i hope u all doing fine...finally done wid this update...here begins our big twist...Its just an start, abhi twist will stay for next 2 updates more...I was really tensed with this update...finding correct words to describe as much as i can...I hope i have met ur expectations, as i kept u all waiting for so many days...
 
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IMP NOTE-
yaaro from now on i wont be online late nights...as i have to look after my mom and my house hold chores...my mom has just went under eye surgery this morning...n i have got only one week leave...so not getting enough time for anything to be precise...so from now on will update any of my stories on alternate days...
 
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can't believe dis...

ok now res for comment...
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finally u updated...

thanks for d wish di...luv u...ummmhaaa...

well di it's really a long one...i jst luv'd it...!!!

geet was totally scared of dat prem's behaviour...!!!
maan didn't know anything about dis prem fiasco...!!!
geet should have told him about dat bt alas! she is so naive dat she didn't understand anything...!!!
maan is really excited to meet n talk to geet...!!!
i really luv'd deir talks...!!!
she is really fast asleep...poor maan he was so desperate...!!!
she was feeling jealous...jst cauz rajji know everything wat happen between coupl...oh babaji she is dam cute...!!!
"why you behind my maan...go and talk to rohan" geet screamed this time...
   poor maan n rajji both got scared...well our sherni is back...!!!            
maan didn't want her to go anywhere bt dis girl is nowhere to listen him...!!!
rajji is realy too much...she was bzy in her luv so much dat didn't feel dat geet is not feeling comfrtabl dere...!!!
i jst hate dat bl***y bas**** prem...he is such a sick...!!!
how could he do dat to poor soul...!!!!
maan n brij met after long tym...!!!
brij too didn't know dat geet is not present in haveli...!!!
 i jst pray to babaji dat maan reach dere on tym...!!!
i m hell scared...n u devil...didn't gave any precap too...bt i have lots of trust on u...

d update was indeed awesum one...


   


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GOING TO HAVE MY DINNER NOW...will update this thread n link n on fb...n will pm when i come back...n that is after half n hour...till then enjoy this update who finds itLOL
 
 
 
i want bada wala comments for this bada updateAngry

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Originally posted by mahimaneet

GOING TO HAVE MY DINNER NOW...will update this thread n link n on fb...n will pm when i come back...n that is after half n hour...till then enjoy this update who finds itLOL
 
 
 
i want bada wala comments for this bada updateAngry

ok di u now go n finish ur dinner...
till den i m going to read it...

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Posted: 22 August 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Hi saw u updated n cld nt wait 4 pm lol! Love Maan n Geet convo! Maan worried abt Geet! Geet finally talks !Maan relieved ! Maan teasing Geet! Hate Rajii! Geet all possessive n Maan happy seeing dat! Geet n Rajji gng to the fields! Maan tries to stop her bt she cuts da call! Rajii leaves her alone n Prem comes n harrasses Geet! Oh no! Maan arrives n sees Brij! Maan wants to meet his mishty! Maan restless! Hate Prem! Hope Maan saves her! wat twist>. Pls hope nothing happens to Geet! Well written! update soon

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Nice part ...
Finally maan reached there... Maan dont wait for hr jst go to find hr...
Geet k innocent mind ko kitna bada dhakka laga hoga..omg..poor soul..
N this prem... Ruk ja bacchu maan ne tere kima na banaya toh uska naam MSK nai... Jst count ur minutes...
Hope maan tym par pahuch jaye... I no maan apni geet ko kuch nai hone dega... N plzz twist accha ho... Is twist ki wajah se maaneet shul come more close to each other... N no MU plzzz
n yes i hv a request maan knows how innocent geet is..so he shuld tk slow steps in their relation... Slowly slowly he shuld mk geet understand abt their relation..

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varsha thanx for update
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.why why???????????????
u stop your pen at very serious mode
ab aagy kayaa hogaa?
waise i req you that pz pz Rajii ko naa 1-2 slap to lagny chahiyeee
 

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