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**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #6 NOTE ON PG-153 (Page 137)

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahimaneet

[QUOTE=-lakshmi-]hai dear

am reading both ur ss SBL and os too but ur ffs r new to me though bookmarked both a long before , was not able to read it... but today i just read this wonderful and amazing ff in a stretch!

in the initial parts i had a big smile plastered through out and some times laughing so much that my family was eyeing me !!!! geet being naive though read before in many other ffs too, but in this it was so refreshing! her being frightened by maans anger, her extreme love to him, her style of manofying him, her style of making black coffee, her gaalis i can go on and on...

in the later parts sometimes i used to feel sad for maan, geet ke kuch harkhathe hi aise he, and some times on geet, when maan ended up shouting at her for every now and then

then came the super jhatka, maan forcing...i hated him at that time...then their missing each other and especially their endless phone call was so cute...

but then came the point where i thought kaash i read this ff after another update! the last was so heart wrenching... though u had told before too that maan wont allow anything to happen to his geet, but still this harsh experience will be too much for her!

really cant wait for the next part... i really wish u update this ff first when u get time!


 
thank u so much dear for this lovely comment...thank u for reading it...n appreciating all the cute n not so cute moments...this ff wud be a roller coster ride if u go wid the flow...i hope u will stay tuned for the future track...as it will get better then wat readers r imaginingEmbarrassed




lovely flowers with a big smiley for u for writing this amazing ff...

and i wont be just tuned to the future track of this ff

but also will surely be there to pester u for the updates

hope u wont mind that and also will be kind enough
Evil Smile to honor the sameLOL

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
koi hai? pta hai hm kitna risk le k online aae hai!!! or tm gayab ho rai ho br2!!!!!
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
abey kahan gai?
ab hm seriously chale jaenge yahan se!!
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
BYE. GUDNITE.
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahimaneet

Originally posted by jssood

varsha thanx for update
i want to ask you one ques.
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.why why???????????????
u stop your pen at very serious mode
ab aagy kayaa hogaa?
waise i req you that pz pz Rajii ko naa 1-2 slap to lagny chahiyeee
 
sorry sorry i know i acted as a true devil...but just wanted to hook everyone wid this update...so planned it this wayLOL
rajji ko slap i wonder kaun maregaShocked...may be maan or brij...or bothROFL
dear maan and brij and mainly DAARJIII KA TO HAQ BANTAA HAI
my innocent doll ko phasaa diya
VARSHA now it is time for new thread naa
wt u say???????????????
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahimaneet

i want bada wala comments for this bada updateAngry

i had gave two two wo b bada wala comment bt still my hands r itching... 

bt due to lack of words can't...

next update kb milegee...??????

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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
aaj ye thread finish kr du wat say?????
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Posted: 23 August 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged

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